Writing review for 0.2.4.
As far as I see, the game as of now is just getting up to speed, and the story is just starting.
It is a VN, with minor choices. The story, and maybe more important, the storytelling is very good. For me, that really makes a difference. Having enough to read to keep me interested, but also few enough not not make me skip reading. That is really a crucial point that a lot of writers do not understand.
Yes, some story parts (the family) are not really ingenious. But as I said, storytelling is more important. There is no rush, and no endless stupid presentation of MCs forbidden thoughts.
As far as I see, the game as of now is just getting up to speed, and the story is just starting.
It is a VN, with minor choices. The story, and maybe more important, the storytelling is very good. For me, that really makes a difference. Having enough to read to keep me interested, but also few enough not not make me skip reading. That is really a crucial point that a lot of writers do not understand.
Yes, some story parts (the family) are not really ingenious. But as I said, storytelling is more important. There is no rush, and no endless stupid presentation of MCs forbidden thoughts.