Oh absolutely. The MC will be wearing that exact same outfit and do the exact same dance as well, shortly after debuting his new "Doctor of Fuckanomics" gimmick...will we recreate this scene?
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How long will it be until trans content? The trans character will be introduced in Update 2.I haven't even played the game and I already like the developer haha, will it take long to add trans content? Hope not
Whether in a review or a comment like this, such words are invaluable to me to continue growing as a new developer. I'm sincerely grateful you took the time to write all this. That said, every review helps, so I hope that when I release Update 2 sometime this year, you'll leave a review with your honest thoughts (whether it's 1 star or 5 stars). Update 2 is certainly going to be... Well, there's a lot going on in Update 2Tried out the Ren'Py demo and was thinking about reviewing this, but it wouldn't be a very fair review considering I skipped the Twine version. Still wanted to give some thoughts though.
You're right, it is kind of unacceptable for the story as a whole. I haven't talked about it here yet, but I have talked about it already with my Patrons, as seen here:Should it continue on the Ren'Py route, which I personally hope it does, I feel like the game is doing itself a big disservice not porting over/remaking the first 3 chapters into Ren'Py as well. I definitely get not wanting to get stuck in rework hell, but as someone with no interest in going through the Twine version it's unfortunate to have my introduction to the game be a relatively long summary (though I do appreciate that it's comprehensive at least). If I didn't think the writing was as good as it is, it would be reason enough to drop the game for me. Knowing people on this site I'm likely not the only one.
This is, to me, the biggest compliment I could possibly receive. Thank you. Storytelling is my absolute and ultimate passion.If I didn't think the writing was as good as it is, it would be reason enough to drop the game for me.
I am absolutely the opposite lol. Like you even said, you'd consider dropping this if the writing wasn't so good. My writing is what I lean most on because it's by far what I'm best at. My rendering skills are... not even remotely close . If my writing is an 8/10, then my renders are probably a 4/10 (in my opinion). There's certainly a lot more I could improve on. For example, my lighting can be a bit strange/bright at times, especially when it comes to indoor lighting because honestly, fuck indoor lighting. It's so stupid and difficult and I barely know what I'm doing .That being said, I'm a sucker for good writing and devs trying to tell good stories so I am pretty interested in seeing where this goes. I see a lot of devs have great talent for renders and none for writing, so it's funny you say you're the opposite. The ones in this little demo really aren't bad honestly. Combined with your passion for writing I think they more than serve their purpose at the least. Hard to have a ton to say given there's not much outside the summary, but I'd come back to this for sure.
A suggestion if you really don't want to rework the first chapters into the new version: It would be cool to at least have a couple renders for scenes like the mom and sisters first kisses with the MC that pop up as they are being described in the recap. Just having the real key moments be pictured would have made it a little easier to swallow for me.
Update 2 will have the entirety of Update 1 included into Ren'Py as static images with character busts, with a handful of new renders here and there. The full story and all 70k~ words will be included, along with all original renders, secret renders, and Update 1's Secret Ending.
The current party is as follows:An Eye for an Eye is an investigative adventure set in the crumbling forest estate of Grunewald Lodge. The Characters are hired by an agent of the aspiring noble Lord Aschaffenberg, who has only recently acquired the property as a result of the various developing political machinations unfolding in Ubersreik.
Lord Aschaffenberg is aware of some “unsavoury” rumours regarding the previous Lord of Grunewald Lodge, a young Nobleman by the name of Andreas Von Bruner. Beyond this, the current Steward of the estate and some of the staff originally appointed by the missing noble continue to reside and care for the estate in the employ of the Von Bruner family. Generally, an uncooperative and sullen lot, they have given Lord Aschaffenberg cause for concern...
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Hi there, thanks for the question. I hope you're ready for a typical "long winded Beerus" answer.Turn Based Combat how would that work like a level up system or something.
If the tags don't apply to the MC or any LI, then how and why would they even be in the game?Somehow... I doubt your reading ability. If a tag directly contradicts the literal MAIN THEME OF THE GAME (romance incest harem), then perhaps the tag doesn't apply to the MC or any LI... You know, like I specifically mentioned?
Hi there, thanks for the question. It's time for the second "long winded Beerus" answer in the same day, and it isn't even noon yet! (mid typing edit: it's now 27 minutes past noon and I'm still forming this message lol.)If the tags don't apply to the MC or any LI, then how and why would they even be in the game?
That's not a complaint, to be clear, I'm actually happy to hear that. It always annoys me when devs act like a trans/futa LI fucking the other LIs isn't sharing/swinging.
How: just as a quick example, it's somewhat common in AVNs for the MC to visit some kind of strip club or brothel. Even if the MC doesn't do anything himself, and even if none of the strippers/whoever are LI's, things are still happening around him. To be more specific...then how?
Why: unlike the vast majority of AVNs, the world does not revolve around the MC. The MC is not the only male in the universe who is sexually active, and females are not just waiting around for the MC to come into their lives. Personally, I find this approach to be far more realistic (for an AVN) and immersive.and why?
Thanks for the comprehensive response. Personally, I don't see the benefit of actually having to see scenes with other male characters, hearing/learning about them is one thing. That said, as long as the MC and LIs aren't involved, it's not a big deal. I guess this is kind of where I disagree with the site on how tags should work, because content that doesn't involve the MC or LI being included in the tags can be very misleading. Although, I do see why they would want tags for everything in the game.Hi there, thanks for the question. It's time for the second "long winded Beerus" answer in the same day, and it isn't even noon yet! (mid typing edit: it's now 27 minutes past noon and I'm still forming this message lol.)
How: just as a quick example, it's somewhat common in AVNs for the MC to visit some kind of strip club or brothel. Even if the MC doesn't do anything himself, and even if none of the strippers/whoever are LI's, things are still happening around him. To be more specific...
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Why: unlike the vast majority of AVNs, the world does not revolve around the MC. The MC is not the only male in the universe who is sexually active, and females are not just waiting around for the MC to come into their lives. Personally, I find this approach to be far more realistic (for an AVN) and immersive.
Now, let me be very clear: once a character is a designated Love Interest, then yes, they will only be involved with the MC. Your girls will never cheat or do any of the sort. Once an LI (even before they join the harem), they are permanently yours and forever loyal, basically. I am and will always be very clear and transparent on who the Love Interests are, and if there's a case where a character introduced is a FUTURE LOVE INTEREST—but not currently yet—I will make that clear as well. Don't worry, this still wont mean you'll see them doing anything sexual with others, just that they aren't interested in the MC that way in the story yet. There will be new characters in Update 2 that fall under this category: future-but-not-current LI's.
There will eventually be possibilities for group activity within the harem (example: MC+Mom+Sister threesome), but any and all such things will be entirely dictated and controlled by the Player. If you, the Player, say no, then it does not happen period (as opposed to it happening anyway but off screen, or whatever the usual "avoidable vs skippable" debate is).
And since you mention trans LI's, I'll say the following: any trans LI's in this game will be fucked by the MC, not the other way around. Essentially just going for "male-on-futa". There is one trans LI confirmed (and will be introduced in Update 2) and I could possibly add up to a few more, and/or I could even be talked into including femboy type LI's as well.
Hope this answers your question, and if you have any others, please feel free to ask them!
I understand your point, and I understand why most games turn the entire world except the MC + LI's celibate. Though in my defense, the scene I mentioned in question (involving the MC's dad), the reason for that scene actually had nothing to do with the drugs/sex/etc. It was a very important scene where the older brother needed to talk to the father about something critical, and just so happened to walk in and discover it. To me, it was more "environmental storytelling" than the focus of the scene. I could have just had the father sitting on the couch watching TV, but that isn't consistent with the world and the story I've been telling. I consider it important world-building.Thanks for the comprehensive response. Personally, I don't see the benefit of actually having to see scenes with other male characters, hearing/learning about them is one thing. That said, as long as the MC and LIs aren't involved, it's not a big deal.
As far as the tags, it's certainly tricky. In full transparency, I should have the "Cheating" tag applied because, like aforementioned, the MC's father is notoriously unfaithful to Melissa. And to continue with the transparency, the reason I chose not to include it (yet?) is that I was worried people would see the "cheating" tag applied and immediately jump to conclusions.I guess this is kind of where I disagree with the site on how tags should work, because content that doesn't involve the MC or LI being included in the tags can be very misleading. Although, I do see why they would want tags for everything in the game.
The only penis that will interact in any way with the LI's will be that of the MC's. Any trans/potential femboy LI's will not "get with" anyone else in the harem, and in the case of a threesome, it would act as any other threesome where the MC is the main focus (though again, all group options will be the Player's choice). There will never be situations of "MC and trans both fuck a girl" or "MC lets trans fuck a girl". Another way to put it is like this: The MC is the ONLY member of the harem who will be doing the fucking; everyone else gets fucked by the MC.The only question I have from there is if the trans/futa/femboy character(s) would have scenes where they get with the female LIs? Like MC+LI+Trans threesome where the trans character engages with the female LI. This I think is the real concern that people (myself included) have when trans/futa characters are introduced into a harem.
Thank you! Are you waiting for the full release of Update 2 to play Wrestling Dynasty? I hope whenever that happens, you'll come back and let me know what you think of the game!Good luck with the game, I'm really looking forward to playing it.
Once again, thanks for the response. I'm very glad to hear that. For whatever reason, some devs convince themselves that as long as the dick belongs to a LI then it shouldn't be objectionable for it to be used on other LIs, even when they say that there won't be sharing/swinging. Mental gymnastics prevail, I guess.I understand your point, and I understand why most games turn the entire world except the MC + LI's celibate. Though in my defense, the scene I mentioned in question (involving the MC's dad), the reason for that scene actually had nothing to do with the drugs/sex/etc. It was a very important scene where the older brother needed to talk to the father about something critical, and just so happened to walk in and discover it. To me, it was more "environmental storytelling" than the focus of the scene. I could have just had the father sitting on the couch watching TV, but that isn't consistent with the world and the story I've been telling. I consider it important world-building.
But again, I assure you, the LI's are and will forever be the MC's.
As far as the tags, it's certainly tricky. In full transparency, I should have the "Cheating" tag applied because, like aforementioned, the MC's father is notoriously unfaithful to Melissa. And to continue with the transparency, the reason I chose not to include it (yet?) is that I was worried people would see the "cheating" tag applied and immediately jump to conclusions.
Another questionable tag for Wrestling Dynasty is the "urination" tag. While nothing sexual, there has now been two different scenes (one in Update 1 and one in the Ren'Py demo) that involves Melissa peeing in front of you. Does this count for the urination tag? I don't know exactly. I've tried to be as detailed as I could in the "Planned Genres" section, but I suppose I could get even more detailed and list every single tag that does not apply to the MC/LI, if need be. Though I will say there will be several new tags introduced in Update 2.
The only penis that will interact in any way with the LI's will be that of the MC's. Any trans/potential femboy LI's will not "get with" anyone else in the harem, and in the case of a threesome, it would act as any other threesome where the MC is the main focus (though again, all group options will be the Player's choice). There will never be situations of "MC and trans both fuck a girl" or "MC lets trans fuck a girl". Another way to put it is like this: The MC is the ONLY member of the harem who will be doing the fucking; everyone else gets fucked by the MC.
Rest assured: any penis—other than the MC's—interacting with any LI in any way is something I have zero interest in. At the end of the day, whether it's girls, trans, femboys, or whatever else... They all belong to and serve the MC.
Thank you! Are you waiting for the full release of Update 2 to play Wrestling Dynasty? I hope whenever that happens, you'll come back and let me know what you think of the game!
Mental gymnastics, I agree. I would absolutely consider a trans LI fucking another LI to be sharing/swinging. The plan I have for trans/futa/femboys is to just treat them as "anal-only girls" basically . And for good reason! I'll go as far as to say there is criminally not enough anal content in games! However much there currently is, it isn't enough!Once again, thanks for the response. I'm very glad to hear that. For whatever reason, some devs convince themselves that as long as the dick belongs to a LI then it shouldn't be objectionable for it to be used on other LIs, even when they say that there won't be sharing/swinging. Mental gymnastics prevail, I guess.
Oh wow, playing Update 1? One of the rare ones! I hope you wont mind now that the game has fully switched to Ren'Py. I hope you saw when I said the following above:I get what you're saying about the scene with the Dad, although I haven't gotten to it yet in game, that does seem to be a valid reason, rather than just wanton voyuerism for the thrill of it.
I actually started playing version 0.1 a little bit ago, and I've enjoyed what I've seen so far. I'm a sucker for sister and childhood friend characters and Abby has not disappointed from what little I've seen.
Update 2 will have the entirety of Update 1 included into Ren'Py as static images with character busts, with a handful of new renders here and there. The full story and all 70k~ words will be included, along with all original renders, secret renders, and Update 1's Secret Ending.
..i did too.....and u didn't praise me....Oh wow, playing Update 1? One of the rare ones!
..also found it...when i first played it......was nice.....didn't even get a headpat from it thoThe main reason I'm fine with speaking of the "Secret Ending" is because I've realized I made it too difficult to find and almost no one found it.
I didn't knooooooow. I'm going to go back and edit that to be "that I knew of" lol. I actually applaud you for it! It seemed so obvious to me because of course I'm going to be reading my own credits page, and I didn't stop to think that if a player makes it to the credits page, they're likely to just immediately quit out without scrolling down, much less fine reading it . Well done!..i did too.....and u didn't praise me....
..also found it...when i first played it......was nice.....didn't even get a headpat from it tho
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..i did miss most of the other secrets tho.....wasn't lookin for them....at first.......I didn't knooooooow. I'm going to go back and edit that to be "that I knew of" lol. I actually applaud you for it! It seemed so obvious to me because of course I'm going to be reading my own credits page, and I didn't stop to think that if a player makes it to the credits page, they're likely to just immediately quit out without scrolling down, much less fine reading it . Well done!
I treat it so seriously that I even gave a special, unique-to-him-and-only-ever-him role in my Discord for being the first to tell me about it there. Shoutout to this guy:
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As per this site's tag rules no, it doesn't count.Another questionable tag for Wrestling Dynasty is the "urination" tag. While nothing sexual, there has now been two different scenes (one in Update 1 and one in the Ren'Py demo) that involves Melissa peeing in front of you. Does this count for the urination tag? I don't know exactly