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yeah i think she said she was following her heart, which i think is the MC who she maybe is in love with (hopefully)
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I think...
nah not really I just wanted an excuse to use this meme again since it's been a while
I still think yer wrong tho I think she's just some random chick that had a crush on the MC in High school and nothing more
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If you mean Braindrop as far as I know he doesn't have any or if he does has hasn't shared them
Braindrop Hey, just read your most recent post on Patreon as I was checking for the next release date, and I felt compelled to tell you why I love your game. It's pretty simple:
The women are absolutely beautiful, they're unique people with good characterization, they very very clearly *want* what they're doing with the MC. Furthermore, the MC is a good person, which helps in believing he deserves to be loved. I often feel like if virtually any one of them were real, and felt about me the way they feel about the MC, I couldn't help but be the happiest man alive. I get to live vicariously through the character a little, and experience that particular joy not from just one of them, but all of them.
You mentioned in your post about the MC being a Gary Stu, and while he's excelled in everything we've seen him try, for the most part, that kind of only fits into 3 categories: Basketball, Social Interaction, and Sex. The only class he takes is one based primarily off of social interaction. Maybe he struggles with science and math a little? Maybe he's not good at building things, or drawing, or cooking? I can't see how any of these, beyond the school subjects, could create an obstacle in the story you have going, so they might not be relevant flaws, but there's room for them to exist. Also - while he apports himself well in the fight, you resisted the temptation to have him win against all odds, and he very clearly needed help to avoid the situation becoming a horrible one. I'm not saying you need to build anything into the story to showcase his flaws, but if it bothers you even a little that the MC might be considered a Gary Stu by some, I wanted to point out there's plenty of room to fix that. And even if you don't fix it, it's clear that he can't do absolutely everything himself, and he's leaning on the people around him to handle what he can't.
Anyway, keep up the great work. The characters in this game never fail to make my day.
The women are absolutely beautiful, they're unique people with good characterization, they very very clearly *want* what they're doing with the MC. Furthermore, the MC is a good person, which helps in believing he deserves to be loved. I often feel like if virtually any one of them were real, and felt about me the way they feel about the MC, I couldn't help but be the happiest man alive. I get to live vicariously through the character a little, and experience that particular joy not from just one of them, but all of them.
You mentioned in your post about the MC being a Gary Stu, and while he's excelled in everything we've seen him try, for the most part, that kind of only fits into 3 categories: Basketball, Social Interaction, and Sex. The only class he takes is one based primarily off of social interaction. Maybe he struggles with science and math a little? Maybe he's not good at building things, or drawing, or cooking? I can't see how any of these, beyond the school subjects, could create an obstacle in the story you have going, so they might not be relevant flaws, but there's room for them to exist. Also - while he apports himself well in the fight, you resisted the temptation to have him win against all odds, and he very clearly needed help to avoid the situation becoming a horrible one. I'm not saying you need to build anything into the story to showcase his flaws, but if it bothers you even a little that the MC might be considered a Gary Stu by some, I wanted to point out there's plenty of room to fix that. And even if you don't fix it, it's clear that he can't do absolutely everything himself, and he's leaning on the people around him to handle what he can't.
Anyway, keep up the great work. The characters in this game never fail to make my day.
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with the remodel of Ruby and Moon and the touch up that Lauren is supposed to be getting what other girl/s do you think need a little glow up, for me its still Penny (i think its her hair) and maybe reduce Rachels boobs a little (but that could just be me) also maybe fix Kimmys tear ducts because she all ways seem to be crying (just let us kiss her already) and no1 best mention the goddess that is the old nurse
) and no1 best mention the goddess that is the old nurseThis should be postponed until the author has less sex with M$, nVidia, DAZ and have more free time.. or when these characters appear again in history... Rachel and Penny remake is too much work (especially, Penny is x2 renders)
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1.Penny ...maybe like you said a little bit of glow or something like that....though I like her alot how she is nowwith the remodel of Ruby and Moon and the touch up that Lauren is supposed to be getting what other girl/s do you think need a little glow up, for me its still Penny (i think its her hair) and maybe reduce Rachels boobs a little (but that could just be me) also maybe fix Kimmys tear ducts because she all ways seem to be crying (just let us kiss her already
2.Rachel...how dare you?????HOW DARE YOU SIR!? her small breasts are just awesome they way they are ....they don't need any rework..nothing ......LEAVE THEM TITIES ALONE!!!
)))3.I'm not sure what's wrong with Kimmy from your point of view...I think she's fine the way she is...but that might be just me...who knows?
4.the nurse...not sure I want to tackle that subject...so I'll try to avoid it for now xD
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Calling another character a goddess? You're just asking to be attacked by the twins, aren't ya?
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nothing wrong with Kimmy, i love Kimmy she just seems to cry every time we see her i just wanna give her a hug and a kiss1.Penny ...maybe like you said a little bit of glow or something like that....though I like her alot how she is now
2.Rachel...how dare you?????HOW DARE YOU SIR!? her small breasts are just awesome they way they are ....they don't need any rework..nothing ......LEAVE THEM TITIES ALONE!!!
3.I'm not sure what's wrong with Kimmy from your point of view...I think she's fine the way she is...but that might be just me...who knows?
4.the nurse...not sure I want to tackle that subject...so I'll try to avoid it for now xD
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cause she is a warm person and awesome...cool...and awesome...and too cute...!!!!
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the twins know i believe Bailey is the one true goddess and anyone else is just a lesser deity
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I sense blasphemy...xD
EDIT : I'm reffering to what you said about nurse
not Bailey....just to be sure it's known,.,,and not misunderstood
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Fucking religious sycophants.....
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and proud of itI sense a heretic is among us....
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and proud of it
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