Great update till the ending.
Let me say MC of WVM is someone like super-human, you already created a special aura about him, a heroic character.
I think you tried to normalise him in the end of update, the way the policeman treated him and MC let him treat him like that makes feel like a loser. MC always standup for people around him, but if he can't stand-up for himself it's useless and he is a loser and it's not what WVM Hero. And the incident clearly in favour of MC and there is a whole bunch of witnesses and still policeman deal him like that ? I don't know about other, but that part really bugged me. I hope you'll plan it well in next and don't make it awkward