Love the dynamic between those two. Can’t wait to see what you have planned for them. Keyana definitely one of my favourite characters.Sadly I can't say much without spoiling anything.
What I will say is that Brittany is the one that wanted Keyana to fool around with the MC and let her watch while she took a break from packing their belongings. And I wouldn't say they "have a problem". It's only been 3 days since they had sex the last time. Factor in them planning on a baby, Keyana tweaking an injury, Keyana accepting a new job, and them moving. It's easy to write off any sexual frustrations as stress issues. And we also have no idea what Brittany's reaction was if you made Keyana cum.
Keyana is only worried because she knows her wife can be jealous.
Other than that I'll have to leave it on "wait and see".
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Time for another review of this amazing game. First off, the renders; beautiful as always. The story: Excellent. The script, well written for the content and the characters each have distinct personalities.
Now for the bad.
First, the grammar is very hit or miss. I lost track of how may time "your and you're" were misused, and as a writer myself, I catch those things because I have to watch out for them in my own work.
Second, while the renders are beautiful, the lower halves of all the girls' faces look nearly identical and I mean that from the nose to the chin. Everybody has pointed lips with the middle sticking out farther than the rest of the lips.
Third, Penny is still, eh in the looks department.
Fourth, Cedey still calling the MC Brubru. I can see her calling him Bubba even as adults because I've known lots of girls that call their younger and older brothers that even as grown ups, but Brubru just sounds too childish.
Fifth, Cedey and Wendy and all the little things going on with them in regards to the MC. This MC is Clark fucking Kent with how nice and generous and considerate and understanding he is and Superman with his stamina and ability to perform so many times over the course of a day and satisfy so many women and still put in a full workout, and go jogging and take various girls on special dates. There's NO WAY any man is going to be able to catch Cedey's eye so long as she's living with Superman. He's the measuring stick to which all potential boyfriends will be held and inevitably be found wanting. He's the perfect man and eventually, she's going to want to experience what the other girls are experiencing and if she goes out with some random dude, she's going to compare everything he does with everything she's heard in regards to her brother and the poor schmuck just won't measure up and she's going to be frustrated and miserable and we know the MC can't allow that. Then there's Wendy, a woman that has not felt a man's touch in years and her Superman son is running around banging chicks willy-nilly throughout the house and she has to listen to them tell stories and see them wined and dined and treated like Queens and Princesses and she's gonna want some of that for herself. Especially once the older ladies start getting treated the same, Racheal, the mom, Vanessa, Veronica, Mabel, etc... I understand if the Developer is hiding that aspect of the story, but if you follow the flow of the the story and the character development, it's definitely there or has the potential to be there.
Anyway, amazing, amazing game and I eagerly look forward to more from the Dev. Keep up the good work and catch y'all on the flip side.
Now for the bad.
First, the grammar is very hit or miss. I lost track of how may time "your and you're" were misused, and as a writer myself, I catch those things because I have to watch out for them in my own work.
Second, while the renders are beautiful, the lower halves of all the girls' faces look nearly identical and I mean that from the nose to the chin. Everybody has pointed lips with the middle sticking out farther than the rest of the lips.
Third, Penny is still, eh in the looks department.
Fourth, Cedey still calling the MC Brubru. I can see her calling him Bubba even as adults because I've known lots of girls that call their younger and older brothers that even as grown ups, but Brubru just sounds too childish.
Fifth, Cedey and Wendy and all the little things going on with them in regards to the MC. This MC is Clark fucking Kent with how nice and generous and considerate and understanding he is and Superman with his stamina and ability to perform so many times over the course of a day and satisfy so many women and still put in a full workout, and go jogging and take various girls on special dates. There's NO WAY any man is going to be able to catch Cedey's eye so long as she's living with Superman. He's the measuring stick to which all potential boyfriends will be held and inevitably be found wanting. He's the perfect man and eventually, she's going to want to experience what the other girls are experiencing and if she goes out with some random dude, she's going to compare everything he does with everything she's heard in regards to her brother and the poor schmuck just won't measure up and she's going to be frustrated and miserable and we know the MC can't allow that. Then there's Wendy, a woman that has not felt a man's touch in years and her Superman son is running around banging chicks willy-nilly throughout the house and she has to listen to them tell stories and see them wined and dined and treated like Queens and Princesses and she's gonna want some of that for herself. Especially once the older ladies start getting treated the same, Racheal, the mom, Vanessa, Veronica, Mabel, etc... I understand if the Developer is hiding that aspect of the story, but if you follow the flow of the the story and the character development, it's definitely there or has the potential to be there.
Anyway, amazing, amazing game and I eagerly look forward to more from the Dev. Keep up the good work and catch y'all on the flip side.
I’ll take keyana from her wife Brittany any day my guy. keyana my one of my favourite characters so idc if they divorce or now like dick more lmao. But respect your opinion on the situation.
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It's caused from the Mod. Seems you have the files twice (triple?) in there, please remove the ones in the subfolders. The Mod files must only be in the "game" folder "...\WVM-0.9.5-pc\game\".
Braindrop glad to see you in the thread again man, awesome update and hope everything is going well for you and yours. Congratulations as well if whats been said is true about you getting married and becoming a Dad. Keep it up and be well!!!
Well i sure am glad i save at every prompt and have more saves than is probably healthy.And we also have no idea what Brittany's reaction was if you made Keyana cum.
Keyana is only worried because she knows her wife can be jealous.
Other than that I'll have to leave it on "wait and see".
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Yeah, don't want to kink-shame, but the "magic dick that turn lesbians straight" fantasy/fetish just seems a bit, "eww." Perhaps because it involves a hint of mind control.
Regarding the married lesbian couple in the story, it seems to have the implication that theirs was not a "real marriage." There might be a number of reasons, but the brain goes to "lesbian erasure."
Maybe they were actually bisexual but didn't accept that as an option. That would be a little easier for me to accept. I'm reminded few prominent women who identify as a lesbian as a sociopolitical while being with both men and women. That is often seen as "bi erasure."
All in all, it is a better accomplishment to earn the respect and friendship of a lesbian...especially if she were involved with my partner!
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If they were older I'd think the problem would possibly be everything's just gotten stale in the bedroom and having a third person (no matter who they are) is just the thing to spice it up. Could still be that too.
I hope Elizabeth gets knocked up before Jamie just to cause some friction... nothing like a little sibling rivalry haha
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Yes! I can't believe I didn't mention that earlier. Thanks Braidrop. All the Harper scenes were great, and well worth the wait. I kind of choked up a bit when Harper said that she loved the MC, it was just so unexpected and touching. She was drunk of course, but still. I really love how their relationship is going.
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Sure, i'd have issues with lesbian stuff if I was a guy....
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I don't know if that counted but I'll take it
getting excited for moreGuy here. Not into gay. Still i don't like lesbianism
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Reading comprehension helps.
My issue was with turning lesbians straight not being lesbian .... I don't have a problem with myself.
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lesbian stuff is some of my favorite on the market, I'm a little sad to hear that he goes that route with the couple defiantly makes me feel like Rachel's stuff should just be avoided at that point.
I am the only one ignoring Mable ???
Just edited flag points related with her she is still pissing off my mc. In addition to the old hospital mad show, she came with handcuffs again (but not for using on her but on other 2 girls!!).
My mc just locked her in a mental hospital & closed all chapters permanently with her!!
Just edited flag points related with her she is still pissing off my mc. In addition to the old hospital mad show, she came with handcuffs again (but not for using on her but on other 2 girls!!).
My mc just locked her in a mental hospital & closed all chapters permanently with her!!