VN Ren'Py WVM [S2 Ch. 1 Ep. 13 B5] [Braindrop]

[Spfjolietjake]

I've already wrote a review of the game but it was before this update and I feel like I need to say something. Maybe it's my problem and you guys don't feel like this is something wrong with the game. But the amount of crying in this update is unbelieveble, it's just way over the top. Like come on, they cry for nothing. Do you know how many times i've cried in my life (am 19)? 3 times, when my grandma died, and two times for my football (soccer for you guys) club. And you might say "that's because you've never felt something so strong for someone that you loved" and maybe that's true but the girls in WVM know MC for less than a week. That's nowhere near enough time for someone to feel a connection that strong that they'll cry over someone (Zoe for example). Again, maybe it's just me but people don't cry that often for love and specially hapiness crying. If I had sex with a girl that i've known for a week and she cried afterwards, oh boy, I would find it pretty off putting

Another thing I may add is that the group dynamic is getting more and more similar to a cult. I mean it's a harem so it kind of makes sense they live in the same house but there's an unnatural devotion to the MC, he genually could shoot someone and would be praised for it (and Jamie would cry because he was so brave or something like that).

And come on, I wanna see some fucking basketball, there's hours and hours of content and there's only been a week in game, could have skipped time a little bit (like BeingADik does for example), would feel much more natural in the whole game chronology.

Now unrelatable to what I wrote above, Are the girls getting paid for their contribution to MC's personal team? If so, why does the school have money to hire a team of 10+ for one player and then not even have enough players to fill up the bench? Is the money they're receiving being declared? Are they even getting paid by WVM? Could be an easy money laundering scheme by the school.

Crying emotional people is what is unrealistic in this vn!?!?

Not everyone is as stoic as you (only crying 3 times in 19 years). There are a lot of people like me that occasionally cry at cat food commercials or the like...

Especially in times of great drama which is the night before with the bowling alley massacre. Emotions are all wired up all over that town! Tears are one of the most realistic things in this update lol.

But I don't play it for realism anyway just found your post funny. Good day

 

[Smarmint]

Voicing ones opinion is valid even if it doesn‘t align with others. I imagine that a lot of people criticize the game because they think of ways for it to become better. This is of course all opinion-based. You can enjoy the game and still be at odds with some features.

This. I don't know about all of you, but I only comment on the games I actually like, that are my favorites. If I don't like a game, I just find something else to play and move on. I think many of us enjoy critiquing our favorite games, and will always find a combination of things that work for us as fans, and things we don't like as much, each time we play, If you find everything 100% perfect, you are either very easy to please, or just not thinking critically. Which is fine.

All devs are working for different crowds. Some people like lots of hot action, some like deep conversations that go on for pages, others like major story conflicts, and other just play to relax after a stresfull day, and rather leave conflict for real life. So it is impossible to cater to everyone's exact preferences.

So, no matter what I say about WVM, or any game I comment about, it is because I want to give my 2 cents on my opinion of the latest update, and perhaps either the dev will take that into account to perhaps make future updates better, or if not, I might just find a few like minded people here to discuss it with.

I think devs generally appreciate positive as well as critical comments, as long as it is good-natured and not insulting. Sure, there are some thin-skinned devs that can't take anything but glowing comments, but they stay far away from F95, and spend all their time on their own discord channel.

 

[The Hash Slinging Slasher]

The definition of perfection

 

[SandmansMisery]

Made me a WVM drinking game. Every time the MC's holds or a girl jumps into his arms drink/chug a beer lol great update BD

 

[Spfjolietjake]

Made me a WVM drinking game. Every time the MC's holds or a girl jumps into his arms drink/chug a beer lol great update BD

Fuck that sounds like a night you won't remember how many beers didja remember chugging?

 

[Catherine♡]

The definition of perfection
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Almost perfection 'cause one girl is missing a dick.

 

[Aioto]

I don't know about the interrupting, really. It felt to me that it was less of the girls interrupting the MC and more of the MC getting sidetracked himself.

About the sex assembly line scene, the format is new and something we aren't used to. That said, each individual scene was very good and definetly not cold or "treating the MC like a living dildo".

The butt contest was weird, like the MC ran out of new complements to say about a third of the way through and just kept repeating the same words in different orders and combinations only to, in the end, not really matter. The first butt competition had a purpose and happened pretty organicly, with a clear criteria of judgement and a clear winner. This one was an excuse to make the MC look at butts and to show off how many girls this game has.

 

[The Hash Slinging Slasher]

I don't know about the interrupting, really. It felt to me that it was less of the girls interrupting the MC and more of the MC getting sidetracked himself.

About the sex assembly line scene, the format is new and something we aren't used to. That said, each individual scene was very good and definetly not cold or "treating the MC like a living dildo".

The butt contest was weird, like the MC ran out of new complements to say about a third of the way through and just kept repeating the same words in different orders and combinations only to, in the end, not really matter. The first butt competition had a purpose and happened pretty organicly, with a clear criteria of judgement and a clear winner. This one was an excuse to make the MC look at butts and to show off how many girls this game has.

I guess its hard to come up with complimets after the third butt as they almost look all the same

 

[Catherine♡]

The butt contest was weird, like the MC ran out of new complements to say about a third of the way through and just kept repeating the same words in different orders and combinations only to, in the end, not really matter. The first butt competition had a purpose and happened pretty organicly, with a clear criteria of judgement and a clear winner. This one was an excuse to make the MC look at butts and to show off how many girls this game has.

What do you expect, the blood had already stopped flowing to the brain and was going to another destination.

 

[rem3403]

The definition of perfection
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except for the duck face...I just can't handle it

 

[ThaRealThiccShady]

I'm sure this has been discussed to death before but is anyone super sick of all the Azel teasing? Like I'm pissed enough we'll likely either never get her/Cedey/Wendy content-or get it through shady mods-and now I have to deal with constantly being asked if I want to fuck her(Duhhh) and increasingly long kisses. I'm all for teasing as long as it's not teasing to something it's been constantly said wouldn't happen.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

I'm sure this has been discussed to death before but is anyone super sick of all the Azel teasing? Like I'm pissed enough we'll likely either never get her/Cedey/Wendy content-or get it through shady mods-and now I have to deal with constantly being asked if I want to fuck her(Duhhh) and increasingly long kisses. I'm all for teasing as long as it's not teasing to something it's been constantly said wouldn't happen.

It has been discussed to death. You are not alone. Yes they will not be lewd able. Yes there is trolling of players going on. The more vocal the "demand" for 'cest is the funny the trolling in the vn becomes.

Just like when people made a habit of hating on the "duck face" well a new bit trolled that in an update. Quite entertaining to some but maddening to others.

There will be no 'cest in the vn ever. Yet since it's always brought up why not have fun with it. You can only tell people so many times before you get tired of telling them and want to have a little fun at their expense

100% my opinion and my opinion only.

I mean cedars hand stuck between the washer was hilarious

 

[ThaRealThiccShady]

It has been discussed to death. You are not alone. Yes they will not be lewd able. Yes there is trolling of players going on. The more vocal the "demand" for 'cest is the funny the trolling in the vn becomes.

Just like when people made a habit of hating on the "duck face" well a new bit trolled that in an update. Quite entertaining to some but maddening to others.

There will be no 'cest in the vn ever. Yet since it's always brought up why not have fun with it. You can only tell people so many times before you get tired of telling them and want to have a little fun at their expense

100% my opinion and my opinion only.

I mean cedars hand stuck between the washer was hilarious

I had never even considered that but looking at it from that angle makes it oddly bearable for some reason. The only reason it upset me is because it was teased so much but if the teasing is there to troll trolls I'm all for it. I'll still hold out hope for a white knight to one day make a mod/etc with scenes for them but until that incredibly unlikely day it's not like the game has a shortage of ridiculously perfect women.
Haha yeah had to set the laptop down and pace the room for a minute bc I was torn between laughing and throwing it against the wall

 

[Spfjolietjake]

I had never even considered that but looking at it from that angle makes it oddly bearable for some reason. The only reason it upset me is because it was teased so much but if the teasing is there to troll trolls I'm all for it. I'll still hold out hope for a white knight to one day make a mod/etc with scenes for them but until that incredibly unlikely day it's not like the game has a shortage of ridiculously perfect women.
Haha yeah had to set the laptop down and pace the room for a minute bc I was torn between laughing and throwing it against the wall

I honestly get where you are coming from. Hope is never wrong. Just the massive undertaking with no monetary gain makes it unlikely.

I personally am learning patience for my #1 here is Harper and she will be a slow slow burn. That makes each moment sweeter though until she's ours.

#teamHarper

 

[Jondoen88]

1st and foremost, truely amazing update. I too had some issues with Android update but removing the old version of WVM and installing new did work through it obliterated my save points (sad, life goes on)

Overall the party was good and for a busy host who wanted to get to a few words/time with everyone plus the various drama points did make this section a bit too busy for my taste, but not so much so I find it impossible to have happen considering events prior. I would of wanted to push a few things off til the next morning where possible but again not disagreeing. Party Time dilation is most certainly a thing.

I would of loved for the Moon interview to happen post seeing the Briars so there could be some good natured clapback but (at least my chosen path) was taking the high road as a King doesn't need to speak down to lesser players of the game.

May the story allow the Briars to win the friendly and lose at the finals so we can teabag them while holding the trophy overhead in cathartic trimph. No need to murder them now, it will be nice on the basketball storypoint to have a good villian to want to slowly teardown.

The various trolling and minor metahumor is refreshing; please continue this as often as you deem fit. Although likewise not a big fan of "BruBru" nickname, your vision as writer solid and if that means I gotta get fucked on this front then I shall take my lashings metaphorically speaking for one of the better Harem stories in a long long while.

I do hope this update is the start of a more balanced sechdule for BD considering the major life events in which I wish him well and all that jazz.

I know I would be satisfied with like half/quarter day updates at a relaxed pace to keep momentum moving forward. Burnout can come from many different angles, please as a professional software dev myself in a high pressure industry I am well aware of the vast pitfalls. Give yourself plenty of time to have that work/life balance AND fuckup room. If building yourself a trello board helps your mind sort everything out // distruibute work then do it.

First and foremost, be kind to yourself, I know there are probably things you are kicking yourself over that the rest of us are blind to. Be it code, writing, offmodel shots, whatever. Do your best to refine process to make life easier, offload work where you can, go slow, be patient, and success will snowball even faster.

And for fellow Hobbiest of WH40K - May Big E's Golden Light shine on you all, even the Smurfs.

 

[Brainwave_first]

Saying that this is just a porn game to devalue suggestions is just as bad in my opinion

I did not intend to say that this is 'just' a porn game. I believe that a lot of these VN's are better porn than most of the movies that you can find out there. I meant it differently: It's porn so don't nag about it, but enjoy it. That's what it is for.
I absolutely love criticism, it should be encouraged if it is profoundly built. Not some ranting and hammering on...

 

[Brainwave_first]

This. I don't know about all of you, but I only comment on the games I actually like, that are my favorites. If I don't like a game, I just find something else to play and move on.

I totally agree... it was in the intent of my post

 

[Dragon59]

It has been discussed to death. You are not alone. Yes they will not be lewd able. Yes there is trolling of players going on. The more vocal the "demand" for 'cest is the funny the trolling in the vn becomes.

Yes, it does seem that Braindrop has decided to respond to the trolls with more teasing.

I had never even considered that but looking at it from that angle makes it oddly bearable for some reason. The only reason it upset me is because it was teased so much but if the teasing is there to troll trolls I'm all for it. I'll still hold out hope for a white knight to one day make a mod/etc with scenes for them but until that incredibly unlikely day it's not like the game has a shortage of ridiculously perfect women.
Haha yeah had to set the laptop down and pace the room for a minute bc I was torn between laughing and throwing it against the wall

Could you really call this theoretical "Evil Modder," a white knight? A white knight usually works for Order. Sounds more of a black knight kind of attitude to undermine the status quo and increase chaos.

 

[appu31]

is there any patch to upgrade WVM 0.9.4 to 0.9.5

 

[Krynh]

is there any patch to upgrade WVM 0.9.4 to 0.9.5

nope. Full download only.