- Jul 29, 2017
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Okay a week later, I resumed the update and finished it a few minutes ago. We've surprisingly come very far and also nowhere at the same time. BD has this awful habit of needlessly dragging things out, to the point that the actual official talk with Daliah took forever to get to.I like Hannah. I like Eden. I like the idea of taking Hannah's virginity. What I didn't like was how fucking LONG it took. When Belle said she needed an extra twenty minutes, I think it literally took 20 minutes to get to the end of the lewd. I didn't even finish the update, there's just too much fucking reading. It will never fail to amuse me that one of the reasons for the Season 1 rework is to deal with the 72 hour days, but he actually managed to exacerbate the problem.
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I'll have to meet Daliah (Delilah? Deliah? What's her goddamn name?) tomorrow. Maybe.
That being said, her story was surprisingly engaging. But it's only the first half of the story, and this story is really just the beginning of the entire thing.
I predict that instead of WVM being Shauna's pick and MC following his best friend there as the reason a rising star would go to this crappy college, now it'll be like Harry Potter. MC gets a mysterious letter saying he has a full ride to this college he's never heard of, his parents went there and his name was on the books since birth. This ties into the billionaires on the yacht and the tattoo and Delilah and whatever because WVM is necessary for MC's destiny to take over the world or some shit.
WVM is crappy on purpose, so MC doesn't go back too soon. His dad had a ton of kids, but wanted a son. MC's dad spouted some conspiratorial bullshit that Deliah dismisses. Literally everything revolves around MC. He has weird long arms as a child.Not even jerking, this is a distinct possibility. He's already indulged in some extreme hack writing and tired clichés, the story quite literally revolves around MC's dick, and all this mystery surrounding his past could very well have some bizarre, out of left field supernatural element. He's the Chosen One, or a demigod, or the vessel for Satan, or his army of children will repopulate the Earth after a mass extinction event, or whatever the fuck stupid idea that would justify the billionaires, the tattoos, whoever Delilah is, and the fact that every single woman in the game wants to fuck him, except Wendy. Probably.
MC is undoubtedly the Antichrist and his dad wanted to use him to destroy the world, but all the women of MC's life steer him towards being the Messiah instead. He can do anything, except touch a basketball