Come on man, that's not very nice. We
around here.
You're main source of critique seems to be how Jamie handles the whole harem thing. That story isn't just magically done, those emotions will be explored. If you need seeds of conflict and negative emotion to make a story interesting for you then that's fine, but that isn't where my game is headed. At least not for the main girls.
Also there are tons of other things at play outside of the main relationship.
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I'm getting a ton of love and support and even I'm like... wait, why?
It just might not be the game for you homie, does that make my storytelling shit? Maybe... I don't get to decide if it is or not.
But I very much appreciate the feedback. There are plans for a lot that you brought up but for obvious reasons I can't get into them.
Overall the main point of critic isn't that Jamie accepts the harem, but how we got there, for now in the game we didn't truly do anything at all, it kind of has all the tropes that we can have on a game, horse dick, perfect MC, everyone loves the MC, everyone talks about how great the MC is...
I'm not telling you to change things, but how things develop is just surreal. A good storytelling is supposed to let us understand a character's motivation, feelings and how they act, it doesn't need drama but rather that you can feel the character is alive.
Decided to post just to understand what people find great about the storytelling, personally it's true that perhaps the game might not be for me, I believe that the MC has to earn his harem in a reasonable way and that's exactly what doesn't happen.
In the end the main problem I would say is that it gives the "illusion of choice", why did it matter that I cheated behind Jamie's back with my best friend when she won't care?, if the choice doesn't matter in the end a player that tries to stay loyal to his girlfriend will feel kind of stupid. It's based on things like this that I critic the storytelling.
Overall I'm not saying people shouldn't like the game, I just can't understand the praise on storytelling and kind of wanted to ask about it. If they said "I love the renders" you have my okay, "I love the girls" okay again "I love x..." great, but storytelling if you think rationally is the weakest point of the game, with difference.
Well, as I said, my theory is wild, never reasonable. Actually, like this moment with the harem. Also, he will have to cover some other problems that are currently at the point of view of the plot. But the search to look for a reasonable cause, I think, will be the more challenge
If it does, then Braindrop to share with us in one of the following chapter (a certain day N)
But I have a question, what conspiracy theories can we talk about? here I even pondered
Well as with every conspiracy theory it is full of nonsense, one possible theory would be that everything isn't as it seems, that all the free sex, situations and everything else it is mixing a part of our MC expectations with real life, like mixing dreams and reality, following this, some actions that never happened our MC would take them as if it happened and create a big mess.
A different one would be that there is a masterplan behind the scenes, why is it that you are so well known? why do all the girls seem to throw themselves at you? in fact at many points when you say no to sex and things like that the MC gives on quite a few ocassions a warning of "it's better to not do it, what if I got filmed or something?", some scenes are at peculiar places, like a basement or that office, places that could be easily a trap.
Last one would be related to how the characters act, one of the biggest truths in life is "if something seems to be too good to be true, then it's because it isn't true". For example think that we follow the game as a harem, what can your MC say if your current girlfriend ends up having sex with a girl or even more, a boy? while it may seem great to have a free pass to have sex with more girls, it kind of feels that it is becoming a polyamorous relationship.
But overall I don't think the creator will try any situation so weird XD.