TheSeedy1

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Yeah I have no dog in this race as I long ago stopped supporting financially but man, there's just too many girls you barely get time with the ones you like. As a Kimmy fan, it's like the worst blue balls ever too lol

I WOULD ALSO LIKE MORE ACTUAL BASKETBALL TO BE PLAYED!
 
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Yeah I have no dog in this race as I long ago stopped supporting financially but man, there's just too many girls you barely get time with the ones you like. As a Kimmy fan, it's like the worst blue balls ever too lol

I WOULD ALSO LIKE MORE ACTUAL BASKETBALL TO BE PLAYED!
I guess that Kimmy will be a possible love interest in the future of the story.. As for more basketball sure i want that too but i see 2 main obstacles lot's of recreation of players for the other teams and redecorate their stadiums
 

KiryuKazuma095

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He should just abandon this and move on to another project. It's clear this is way over his head. He's struggling with writers block in a porn game that has no semblance of a story besides fuck every girl in sight and maybe they'll play basketball.

Seriously. He has no plans for any future content, besides how to transition to the next scene. If he wants to continue this shit show, I recommend he spends time fleshing out a story that he can follow at he minimum. He should spend some time doing that. Hell, throw some ideas into an AI story generator, some are free online and that will likely be better than anything he can come up with at the moment.
Abandoning a project with so much potential for a good story ....simply is not such a good plan In my opinion he can continue it if he make a goal planing about his story... What i mean ?? For example now that the MC has returned home he should focus on the meeting with Daliah so that the story progress , have a meeting with the team to decide if Damien will return and if everyone is ok with that and then continue on with the date with Jasmine,and other substory stuff
 
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Abandoning a project with so much potential for a good story ....simply is not such a good plan In my opinion he can continue it if he make a goal planing about his story... What i mean ?? For example now that the MC has returned home he should focus on the meeting with Daliah so that the story progress , have a meeting with the team to decide if Damien will return and if everyone is ok with that and then continue on with the date with Jasmine,and other substory stuff
no offense but this comment really explains all the 5* reviews games some of the VNs in here gets :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:
the story is an even bigger problem than the schedule.
 

KiryuKazuma095

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no offense but this comment really explains all the 5* reviews games some of the VNs in here gets :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:
the story is an even bigger problem than the schedule.
I simply said my opinion never review this game with 5 * ... I liked the story on the begining mostly at some point it lost it's way that is true but most players of these games don't care for the story...
 

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Everyone keeps talking about "Fix the story" "Too many girls" "It can't be fixed at this point, start over." "There is no story anymore"... There actually is a story, it's buried under lots of other nonsense though. So, here's my sugestion on how to get back to the story.... :devilish:

When the plane lands, Veronica, the Police woman, meets the MC at the airport and tells him that while he was in the air, all the girls that wern't with him were waiting for him to surprise him at home and the douche bag he fought at the bowling alley planted a bomb at his house that went off early and killed half of the harem. Hurt over the loss, the remaining members of the group "circle the wagons" and don't let anyone else in for fear of loosing them one day. MC concerns himself with only his girls and Basketball from then on. Can also give the rest of the story a moral lesson on dealing with greif and loss properly (not by fucking everything in site.)

It may be a bit morbid, but hey, my day job is in the funeral industry. ;)
 

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Everyone keeps talking about "Fix the story" "Too many girls" "It can't be fixed at this point, start over." "There is no story anymore"... There actually is a story, it's buried under lots of other nonsense though. So, here's my sugestion on how to get back to the story.... :devilish:

When the plane lands, Veronica, the Police woman, meets the MC at the airport and tells him that while he was in the air, all the girls that wern't with him were waiting for him to surprise him at home and the douche bag he fought at the bowling alley planted a bomb at his house that went off early and killed half of the harem. Hurt over the loss, the remaining members of the group "circle the wagons" and don't let anyone else in for fear of loosing them one day. MC concerns himself with only his girls and Basketball from then on. Can also give the rest of the story a moral lesson on dealing with greif and loss properly (not by fucking everything in site.)

It may be a bit morbid, but hey, my day job is in the funeral industry. ;)
This doesn't sound too crazy for this AVN, plus it gives the MC ANOTHER reason to move house AGAIN...
 
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