Valloth

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I agree with you too. I am sure that I am not good enough as a writer as much as I am an artist. but I hope I can do something to make you happy :) And I use the suggestions if they fit on my story tho ;)
Book 5 is better than many other stories that are put out, so definitely don't sell yourself to short. I personally don't remember enough of the entirety of the Avatar series to say you knocked it out of the park, but it was really good from what I remember of it. That's why I'm confident that this will probably be the best Titans parody we got. If I think of an angle you could use though I'll suggest something. Don't wanna give ALL my ideas away. (Especially if they wont help in the direction you're going in.) Have fun with the project.
 
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Nixi~

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The story needs better flow, give the titans a bit more interest in PC's world, but have it be interrupted if you don't want to dive into the details, also have them discover that he is from a different world in a more reasonable fashion. Then, there is the ridiculous amount of hostility provided by the titans, have the Titans ease up on the PC after learning his not a bad guy, they are heroes after all not thugs. Finally, ease up on the tension after the interrogation. Jumping from that intense introduction straight to a cell just doesn't flow well into introducing Jinx.

Other than that, I'd say it needs a lot of help with grammar.
 
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MUPLUR

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A Poll about Main Character Appearance in game. Do your contribution :)
 
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Looks very promising. I hope there are some good anal scenes. Teen Titans porn is always welcome. Hope this is being worked on still, and if it is, I can't wait to see progress made.
We are currently working on full main story and characters' individual stories. Taking more time to decide everything about game, so we won't worry in future.
And changing the game from 720p to 1080p, which makes redraw everything I have drawn so far >_<
A sacrifice for satisfaction in quality ;)
 

kalewdoscape

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Just looked at newer public posts to catch up on progress updates. Is it my imagination, or did Terra's boob size change? You're free to model characters as you see fit, but I do like the natural size variety that comes with Teen Titans parody material based on the original cartoon.
 

MUPLUR

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Just looked at newer public posts to catch up on progress updates. Is it my imagination, or did Terra's boob size change? You're free to model characters as you see fit, but I do like the natural size variety that comes with Teen Titans parody material based on the original cartoon.
Terra's boob size is same as Raven's. The character style in Teen Titans show is too cartoony to draw for porn (for me at least). So I take the appearance reference and apply it to their comic forms. You can see it goes for everyone.
 

kalewdoscape

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Terra's boob size is same as Raven's. The character style in Teen Titans show is too cartoony to draw for porn (for me at least). So I take the appearance reference and apply it to their comic forms. You can see it goes for everyone.
Alright. Are these the characters that will show up in the next version? Will Blackfire and Bumblebee be in this game?
 

MUPLUR

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Pregnancy tag in the near future I hope?
I am not sure about it. Since the girls are so young to have babies in their bellies, it's hard to decide. And I may add it like I did in Book 5, or indirectly implying. Yet again, It's not decided yet. I will tell about it when an appropriate time comes :)
 

Xymma

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I am not sure about it. Since the girls are so young to have babies in their bellies, it's hard to decide. And I may add it like I did in Book 5, or indirectly implying. Yet again, It's not decided yet. I will tell about it when an appropriate time comes :)
I agree that it should at least be a route. If it's a concern you can keep away from the accidental pregnancy route, make it a desire of the girls. Just because they are young doesn't mean that they are incapable of wanting children and it will add another fetish to attract a bigger audience to your game.

Of course this is entirely up to you, often these games are passion projects and if you don't want to create artwork or even writing depicting the girls getting/being pregnant then forcing it will likely make for poor quality content.
 
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