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e-disfunction

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The number of sentences before the next photo will increase as the game progresses, as I am sure you have already observed,
Where could I observe sufficient information for plot or descriptions at any point in v0.1? There just wasn't enough to observe any significant changes in your writing. (You didn't even bother with checking the writing you already had as, you stated, "because I was in a rush to upload the first version". So if there were changes in your approach to writing I would be a fool at this point to assume the changes were anything but accidental--especially if they came later in the writing when you were in a rush ...)

but still won't become one of those games with page after page of text. They're not really to my liking.
There are many, many possibile lengths of communication between "one or two sentences" and "page after page of text". Creating a false extreme of my words--because I definitely did not state any extreme--to discount my words sounds like you don't actually want any feedback that might help you. Please make up your mind: Do you want helpful feedback or not?

If you're referring to the first performer, I assure you it was the same as in the introductory pic, or so Google would have me believe.
Actually my words were quite clear (and did not refer to any specific performer)--they concerned the general-future editing of the current version and plans for all other pics & vids in later versions your game.

Thank you very much for your feedback! :)
You're welcome.
 
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small file for a first release, but give it a try
 

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Where could I observe sufficient information for plot or descriptions at any point in v0.1? There just wasn't enough to observe any significant changes in your writing.
What I meant was, that only the first few pages have "one or two sentences", the ones after you make the first choice surely have at least 3 or 4 ;).
Also, I must admit that there are some pages which have little text, but as the generic title and introduction suggest, there is no plot to write a book about, as it revolves around the girls and not the other way around.

There are many, many possible lengths of communication between "one or two sentences" and "page after page of text". Creating a false extreme of my words--because I definitely did not state any extreme--to discount my words sounds like you don't actually want any feedback that might help you.
What I said was just an observation on the amount of text in this game, not by any chance an attempt to put words in your mouth.

Actually my words were quite clear (and did not refer to any specific performer)--they concerned the general-future editing of the current version and plans for all other pics & vids in later versions your game.
Then I thank you for your concern, but all videos already match the performers in the pics.
I gave the example of the first pornstar because it was the only one that might suggest otherwise, since she is not quite as popular as the rest.
 
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Light manipulater

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I've tried downloading this game but every time I do I can't open it, can anyone help? I'm new to downloading these games, I'm on an android phone too so not sure if I can download them
 

lorddarkam

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Funny how we man really like degenerated woman we just fear being cheated on so we go for the girls who pretend to be pure
 

hotmike

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Good to see a game without incest.
Choices are easily made and cut off full parts of the story. No grinding also means you cannot develop anything like a story (at the moment). So well, hope to see more, and hope the dev learns to add some game element (instead of pure luck that you follow a certain track).
 
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LairOfEvil

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what's up... does anyone know from where the header picture (the four ladies) is from?
friend is asking... for research purposes... :)
 
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