HTML Zara's School Life [v0.70 Patreon] [NeoSpectre]

[Nutluck]

Some advice
1) Make all the images uniform in size. I would say 600 pixels tall that is what we do with GL.
2) The game needs more things to do during the day, right now nothing much happens.
3) It needs NPC's to interact with and make it feel like they are actual people with goals of their own that you can interact with. I know from experience this isn't easy but just make a couple at a time and do their story arcs in stages. It will take time but it will slowly fill out.

 

[vessna]

found the error in toilet, this game could be good, school based html game, but for now, there's not enough content here,
and well, there are a lot of this type of games, with this setting, what is the main selling point of this game, cuz i can't see one mate.

 

[Darklord1234]

Anyone got the cheats yet? Or just not bother? Lol. Seriously tho...cheats behind a paywall on a v0.1?! Lmao.

 

[ChillVibes]

great on dropping a John Wick Qoute

 

[Deleted member 2871711]

Error: <<if>>: bad conditional expression in <<elseif>> clause (#1): Cannot read properties of undefined (reading 'school')<<if $PlayerSchoolRep < 20>>\
None of the other girls in the washroom pay any attention to Zara.
<<elseif $PlayerSchoolRep >= 20 and $mainChar.school.reputation < 40>>\
A girl smiles at Zara and she smiles back.
<<elseif $PlayerSchoolRep >= 40 and $PlayerSchoolRep < 60>>\
<font color="purple">"Hey, Zara!"</font>
Zara smiles and waves at the girl.
<<elseif $PlayerSchoolRep >= 60 and $PlayerSchoolRep < 90>>\
<font color="purple">"Hey, Zara! How are you?"</font>, a girl near the hand dryer asks.
<font color="pink">"Doing well thanks"</font>, she replies.
<<elseif $PlayerSchoolRep >= 90>>\
<font color="purple">"Oh my god! Hey Zara! Looking good haha"</font>, says a girl amongst a group of them. Zara just smiles at them and waves.
<font color="purple">"Did you see that?! She waved at me"</font>, the girl whispers excitedly to the rest of the group.
<<endif>>

I had the same thing occur. I just fixed these in plain text.

FYI
As you can see mainChar.school.reputation needs to change to PlayerSchoolRep
the code is copy pasta so this happens 2 times for both toilets.

The if erroroccurs becasue of the extra endif that is unnecessary for the boys toilet as there is no if clause there.

 

[Deleted member 2871711]

I love when these new games come pre-built with a death grind and cheats the dev wants you to pay for to get to the truly shitty cut scenes.
Here's a novel suggestion
Make the game playable
provide actual content instead of the same tired webm's that Secret Taboo, Lust for Life, and Become Alpha and most of the other games on this site are using.
Then once you build up a following.
THEN you turn up the difficulty and engage cheats.
You (IE- Devs) all have the perception that everyone here is a freeloader. I am still subbed to Summertime Saga. That tool hasn't dropped a real update in over a year. But you know what. His game is entertaining. And has original content. You already are working from a deficit of using someone else's porn. So the very least you could do is make the game entertaining before you fuck it up with a useless grind
I truly want you to succeed I do. But this just seems half assed

I mean its a HTML game you can always cheat with the Browser dev-tools.

 

[TerumiNin]

Too many links for paetron/subscribestar within the game itself. Bad look.

 

[Kurst]

She is a woman of focus, commitment and sheer will.

But has she killed anybody with a pencil?

 

[sherihancroft]

it has potential to be a good game congratulations so far and like others there is an error if girl uses boys bathroom please fix for the next update

 

[NeoSpectre]

I have been reading everyone's feedback and I am working hard to change your opinions around, and they will hopefully be changed in the next update. I know I am getting criticized for the Patreon/SS stuff, so I would like you all to know that they aren't even set up properly, so I do not expect anyone to donate. The cheats stuff, honestly, if people want them, you are free to message me for them and I am ready to give them free, but as of right now, I can tell you, they are not that useful. I am being transparent here, a lot of content with images is copyrighted so for legal purposes you monetize the cheats, and not the content itself.
But, again, I have lots of plans for this game and I am setting them in motion and the next update will have a ton more content. So, stick around. It is going to take a while

 

[mattrixatp]

Chrome blocked this download (gofile) saying "Uncommon file". After ignoring I instantly got a virus warning. Fuck false positives, it doesn't happen in other html games. Seeing the complaints of invalid tags I guess you think html is a programing language, it's not, it's in the name - it's a MARKUP language so make sure you close all tags properly instead of copy pasta

 

[Tacomancer]

i like what you have so far, keen for fixing and updates

 

[wpsdynix]

Love the premise. Haven't played it yet but judging my the thumbnails alone, I am concerned about the walls of text and multiple pictures per slide. It would be nice to have more options/choices with significantly less text per slide/page.

 

[sd1597496]

First release, 75MB, and it's already sponsored. Well done

 

[Nuihc]

Solid start. I like it. Looking forward to content with the family. Mom, dad and brother.

 

[Murcielago]

Anyone got the cheats yet? Or just not bother? Lol. Seriously tho...cheats behind a paywall on a v0.1?! Lmao.

it's trivial to cheat with the browser console in sugarcube games, cheats are only needed if the author is really good at hiding stuff.

Use Sugarcube.state.variables to find every variable the game stores.

 

[ObamaFan47]

For a 0.1 Release this is a solid game and honestly something I've been waiting awhile for. Definitely gives off Young Maria vibes in terms of the layout in the school and all that which is a good thing, I saw critique pertaining to the image to text ratio and obviously everything is preferential and to each their own but I find the descriptiveness of the text to be a positive rather than a negative. All that being said there isn't much I can complain about considering it is a 0.1 Release and the only real issue I've run into is the obvious lack of content. Here's to hoping this game is not abandoned and best wishes on the endeavor.

 

[marxof]

good start
I think that the curfew check is bugged as I only got it one time.

And the events may needs to happen more often. Right now the luck to get them is too low.

 

[firefall132]

While that plot dont sounds like it, the character description allows some hope. So, is it possible to play her as pure lesbian and avoid dicks?

But if she doesn't become a total slut for all the guys then she won't be doing Anyone and Everyone like the synopsis says!

 

[LordStrike]

the game is being flag by windows defender and a bad files.