Dont mind me at all
If you like those hearts, keep them! If you like those hearts, keep them!
hehe! thankuDont mind me at all
- Sep 18, 2018
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Honestly? Considering what this is? It's really not bad. You did decent, Pookie.
For a self-insert fantasy story, I can assure you that with all the jank and the wonky English, this is already much, much better than 80% of the games in here, especially the wannabe hentais (and hentai proper, actually).
This is actually... cute. Like, it has no business here levels of cute. But let it stay, though. We need these kind of soul cleanser. At least, to bring us a bit closer to God after playing some of the other material.
All in all? A for effort, can't wait to rail your ass and baby cage with my bbc on the beach next episode. I should take photo.
For a self-insert fantasy story, I can assure you that with all the jank and the wonky English, this is already much, much better than 80% of the games in here, especially the wannabe hentais (and hentai proper, actually).
This is actually... cute. Like, it has no business here levels of cute. But let it stay, though. We need these kind of soul cleanser. At least, to bring us a bit closer to God after playing some of the other material.
All in all? A for effort, can't wait to rail your ass and baby cage with my bbc on the beach next episode. I should take photo.
thank you so much for saying it means a lot to me because in the beginning, i bit nervous about all this making game and stuff, tbh I like cute things and i want to make a game that is made by a female dev with my perspective you know, i know it sounds so ridiculous here, but even tho I gave players control of the game but whole and all this is my fantasy and i control it, i will introduce some emotional parts in this game maybe try to to make it story rich with every update, and of course add more fantasies!
btw my dms are open i would like to talk about game dev stuff with someone who is also a dev so feel free to hit me up
thanks!
pookie
ps
here a banner of 0.2 update which im working on now
- Sep 18, 2018
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Just keep at it, even when it seems hard. Do regular updates and most importantly DO NOT CHANGE YOUR GAME TO CATER TO PEOPLE.
You can take suggestions. No problem. But adding things you don't want to or changing a whole chunk of the game because people are bitching? That's a HUGE no. Listen to your supporters but stay firm.
You'll be alright, Pookie. Don't worry you're doing decent work.
I wish you success and lots and lots of Patrons.
And sure, I might slide in your dms sometimes
- Jun 3, 2020
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Yummy, a real cutie with perky cute breasts, I'm in love with Pookie.
- Mar 9, 2018
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just make what you want, concern not what the small minded think; Oh and that summer update better have a micro bikini of sorts (your males look like mannequinn's give em' some more time it'll make them look livelier).
patrons are hard to get, but i have my fingers crossed! take careJust keep at it, even when it seems hard. Do regular updates and most importantly DO NOT CHANGE YOUR GAME TO CATER TO PEOPLE.
You can take suggestions. No problem. But adding things you don't want to or changing a whole chunk of the game because people are bitching? That's a HUGE no. Listen to your supporters but stay firm.
You'll be alright, Pookie. Don't worry you're doing decent work.
I wish you success and lots and lots of Patrons.
And sure, I might slide in your dms sometimes
The font, as you have it, is jarring and makes reading the story difficult. I am *not* saying you should scap it or anything, I'm just trying to help you with using it if you decide to keep it.
I am not sure how much you might be able to fix it but here are some suggestions to try:
• You are programming a story and you want to communicate that story to your reader. Special notes and pictograms should be saved for foggy mirrors, body paint, and personal messages to close friends.
• Use AllCaps case (all capitals) sparingly.
• Keep away from CamelCase (PuTting CapS or SmaLLCaps eVerYwHerE, like camel humps, especially without spaces and punctuation) except for proper nouns or pictures of written words.
• Kern the hearts closer to the letters they follow and make sure to use puctuation in sentences with the the hearts (so readers have as little trouble as possible understanding what you might be meaning).
• Maybe reduce the x-height of the hearts a bit to keep them visually similar in height to the other lower-case letters.
I hope those help you a bit.
e-d
thanks i have been testing new fonts and also testing it before release,The font, as you have it, is jarring and makes reading the story difficult. I am *not* saying you should scap it or anything, I'm just trying to help you with using it if you decide to keep it.
I am not sure how much you might be able to fix it but here are some suggestions to try:
• You are programming a story and you want to communicate that story to your reader. Special notes and pictograms should be saved for foggy mirrors, body paint, and personal messages to close friends.
• Use AllCaps case (all capitals) sparingly.
• Keep away from CamelCase (PuTting CapS or SmaLLCaps eVerYwHerE, like camel humps, especially without spaces and punctuation) except for proper nouns or pictures of written words.
• Kern the hearts closer to the letters they follow and make sure to use puctuation in sentences with the the hearts (so readers have as little trouble as possible understanding what you might be meaning).
• Maybe reduce the x-height of the hearts a bit to keep them visually similar in height to the other lower-case letters.
I hope those help you a bit.
e-d
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Cute and I like the fact that a female developer is making a game like this where it still has a male protagonist. But a couple of pieces of advice. 1) You really need a translator/proofreader. I know you probably can't afford one but you could find someone willing to help you out I am sure (hint). 2) As soon as I saw this was a limited demo with the first sex scene telling me it wasn't available in this version I quit playing and deleted the game. As a new developer who is trying to build a following you should release the full version here. It is fine to give it to your patreons for a couple of weeks first but don't put the edited free version here and expect to gain many supporters, it just pisses people off.
working on next version which has more and better stuff, also more story, and yeah i just found someone to test it so lets see, and thank u
- Jan 28, 2019
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I like this game a lot, it's really really cute. The art is good. The story is sometimes a bit too fast for me and i have some trouble reading the text with the "<3" instead of "o". (Is it possible make an option to choose between different fonts? I'm not a dev so i don't know how much work that would be and i want you to keep your precious hearts <3)
Overall this game is a 7 or even 8 out of 10, good job!
Overall this game is a 7 or even 8 out of 10, good job!
All the freedom of fiction to fantasize about anything you want, and your dream is getting taken out to a ramen stall for a date. I don't know if I should be disappointed at the simplicity or shocked that nobody has taken Pookie out on a date.