VN Ren'Py Completed Pookie Has a Fantasy! [Final] [Pookie]

[JakeTapper]

I haven't downloaded the game yet but those previews have an odd way of being weirdly cute so I'll play it.

Update: Ok I played and it was pretty cute. Would play more chapters. Only issue I noticed was that in a couple scenes with Emma she was missing a leg lol. As for the <3 font I could see where it would bother some people but it did add to the cute vibe so w/e. The music fit well too. Not sure where you got the Pookie's chuckle/laugh sound from but maybe have a few more variations? Oh yeah and I saw a bunch of grammar mistakes / typos (such as raman) but honestly it made the game more cute somehow???

 

[Strong1]

An improvement over v0.1 but the interface needs some work. Can't hide the textbox and trying to load saves doesn't work very well. But the biggest thing is still the horrible English. Really need to get a native English speaker to help you out Pookie.

 

[Big Daddy]

"You can take suggestions. No problem. But adding things you don't want to or changing a whole chunk of the game because people are bitching? That's a HUGE no. Listen to your supporters but stay firm."

THIS. Improve your vision, sharpen your vision, but don't change your vision. Porn games tend to lose their flavor if design by committee kicks in. That being said, don't be afraid to grab on to an idea or push some boundaries if you feel like the results will be worth it, or if you will learn something from the experiment. Just don't get caught trying to please everyone.

 

[realpookie]

I like this game a lot, it's really really cute. The art is good. The story is sometimes a bit too fast for me and i have some trouble reading the text with the "<3" instead of "o". (Is it possible make an option to choose between different fonts? I'm not a dev so i don't know how much work that would be and i want you to keep your precious hearts <3)
Overall this game is a 7 or even 8 out of 10, good job!

those hearts are due to fonts i was gonna change the font in the future ! thanks ! if u like please support me via patreon or just go write a review on itch.io, there is more coming in the future!

 

[realpookie]

I like the style of the drawings, maybe the positions are a bit stiff in some of the scenes, but it works.
By the way very good ramen dishes, I craved it. Good luck with your game.

that one took me a long time to draw, i was really hungry at that time lol im glad u liked it!

 

[realpookie]

An improvement over v0.1 but the interface needs some work. Can't hide the textbox and trying to load saves doesn't work very well. But the biggest thing is still the horrible English. Really need to get a native English speaker to help you out Pookie.

im sorry for that please just hit me on discord or dm here ill give my id we can talk about please help me fix english, and i will work in interface asap!

 

[realpookie]

All the freedom of fiction to fantasize about anything you want, and your dream is getting taken out to a ramen stall for a date. I don't know if I should be disappointed at the simplicity or shocked that nobody has taken Pookie out on a date.

im a simple girl lol i do not dream about royality or super rich things haha i like cheap thrills bebe, I fantasize about holding hands in public u know,

 

[realpookie]

I haven't downloaded the game yet but those previews have an odd way of being weirdly cute so I'll play it.

Update: Ok I played and it was pretty cute. Would play more chapters. Only issue I noticed was that in a couple scenes with Emma she was missing a leg lol. As for the <3 font I could see where it would bother some people but it did add to the cute vibe so w/e. The music fit well too. Not sure where you got the Pookie's chuckle/laugh sound from but maybe have a few more variations? Oh yeah and I saw a bunch of grammar mistakes / typos (such as raman) but honestly it made the game more cute somehow???

thanks, im not native english speaker sorry, I"ll soon fix those issues!

 

[realpookie]

THIS. Improve your vision, sharpen your vision, but don't change your vision. Porn games tend to lose their flavor if design by committee kicks in. That being said, don't be afraid to grab on to an idea or push some boundaries if you feel like the results will be worth it, or if you will learn something from the experiment. Just don't get caught trying to please everyone.

hey,
Do u think i do this or made this to please others? then u are mistaken bebe, it's called "Pookie has a Fantasy" and I'm the Pookie, If I want to add a plane episode ill add that. if i want to add a whole episode with no nsfw scenes ill do that. if i want to add zombies then u know zombies will be there! so dont worry about that, even if this is a porn game but im working on a grand story behind the scene so just wait for it it will get revealed slowly!
and thanks! i will keep in mind what u said! thanks again!
love
pookie

 

[realpookie]

hey guys pls let me know if u found any bugs

 

[G0DZillA]

What kind of future tags will be?

 

[realpookie]

content road map!

 

[realpookie]

What kind of future tags will be?

bdsm, public sex, adventure, group, maybe more but this it for now

 

[Asia Argento]

Three sigs commissioned by realpookie
Happy to help as always, Pookie. <3

 

[mistery-自己]

Nice game

 

[Konstantinus]

Just saying because of you I bought the Itch.io Bundle which your game is part in.

 

[realpookie]

Just saying because of you I bought the Itch.io Bundle which your game is part in.

Really? Thank you so much

 

[realpookie]

upcoming version 0.3 coverart

 

[realpookie]

wtf is that font?
my eyes hurt

fixed it!

 

[UnfinishedSentenc]

You are a true sweetheart. I wish I knew you in real life. I will be supporting your Patreon starting next month. Additionally, I am also a professional novelist, songwriter, and multi-instrumentalist musician with a Masters in business, editing, and writing. If you need a proofreader/editor, and haven't already found one yet, I would gladly take care of that for you at no cost, whatsoever.