Well, I just played the game in one go and it was pretty darn interesting. In general, I'm not a big fan of stories that oscillate between flashbacks and the present, but this is pretty well done!
I've only tried one path, but is it possible to be on good terms with
Ashley or is the story planned like that for now?
I have 0 confidence in Selene and I'm quite happy that Eve seems to remember
Kyra's domain, hence her question at the very end of the update.
I like the mystery and the few deliberate holes in the story, but I hope that a large part of the plot will be revealed in the next update. I think that you have to be able to not drag out the suspense too much.
A good experience overall cause I really didn't think I would follow the game to the end, so pleasantly surprised! Good luck for the rest
Agni2013 !