- Mar 25, 2021
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Emma's friend is Jenny I don't know what to think of her she is putting dirty ideas in my future wife's head which I don't approve of but she is a nice girl so I guess everything is OK.
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I am not gonna comment on what you wrote.
First of all you may want to use "." instead of ")" there is no such a thing as "writed" you probably wanted to say "wrote".
Also kniting is this,
if you wanted to say this,
it's spelled as knight.
Have a good day.
- Mar 25, 2021
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You just gave me a great idea I should knit a red love heart pillow for Emma.I am not gonna comment on what you wrote.
First of all you may want to use "." instead of ")" there is no such a thing as "writed" you probably wanted to say "wrote".
Also kniting is this,
if you wanted to say this,
it's spelled as knight.
Have a good day.
I think she would love that.
- Oct 10, 2022
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Yeah, she is not a nice person. She even NTRed Emma.
I can totally see you do that ngl.
- Mar 25, 2021
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Yeah but that was Zak's fault. Jenny seems like a sweet girl who was tricked by that piece of garbage.Yeah, she is not a nice person. She even NTRed Emma.
I can totally see you do that ngl.
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Well Im not native speaker. English is my 3d language and despite some mistakes, you and others perfectly understood what I wrote. There is a lot of people even in this thread who writes way worse than me and Im sure that I wont see your corrections with "funny gifs" around them. Only god knows what was the reason to correct me...I am not gonna comment on what you wrote.
First of all you may want to use "." instead of ")" there is no such a thing as "writed" you probably wanted to say "wrote".
Also kniting is this,
if you wanted to say this,
it's spelled as knight.
Have a good day.
- Oct 10, 2022
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More like prostituted by her parents, also she was okay with it if Zak stayed with her. Why did she specifically invited Emma to the party? Other girls know about Emma's interest she must have knew it too, also she was not friendly to Emma for a long time according to Emma then suddenly out of blue she asked Emma to come to her party where she get fucked by Zak. Looks like it was high school level bullying to me.
- Oct 10, 2022
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Meh, no real reason to be honest. While I was reading, I tried to fix parenthesis later I realised you used them as periods. Btw, that makes it harder to read than any spelling mistake. I am glad you liked the gifs, I chose them specifically for you. Also, majority of the members are non-native around here, so that is not a excuse for not accepting criticism. So, I am not a proofreader nor a grammar police, I don't usually go around and fix people's writings, most of the time mine writings filled with mistakes anyway but you seemed needed help with it. It's up to you how you take it.
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But maybe she wants to change?
All women are sweet and innocent so maybe Jenny has finally realised her mistakes and is trying to be a better person.
- Oct 10, 2022
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Maybe or maybe she will hurt our sweet innocent Emma again. Is it worth the risk Joshy? Does your idea of "All women are sweet and innocent" worth to have if it will hurt Emma?
- Mar 25, 2021
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Don't worry if she hurts Emma again I'll tell Suzi and she'll probably kick Jenny's butt.Maybe or maybe she will hurt our sweet innocent Emma again. Is it worth the risk Joshy? Does your idea of "All women are sweet and innocent" worth to have if it will hurt Emma?
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That means Emma will get hurt again because of your idea. Yeah, maybe Suzi will kick Jenny's butt but that won't unhurt Emma.
- Mar 25, 2021
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Jenny has already apologised to Emma because she felt bad.That means Emma will get hurt again because of your idea. Yeah, maybe Suzi will kick Jenny's butt but that won't unhurt Emma.
That doesn't strike me as something someone who is out to hurt Emma would do.
- Jan 12, 2017
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Emma? Color me shocked!
All of the women in the game are intriguing in their own way, which is a sign of the high quality of the character writing in the project. There are probably people who will play through until Lucy's arc ends and have no interest in Charlotte, which is fine. I really like Charlotte as a character but will probably play the Suzi arc as well. Lucy I'm personally on the fence with, I started the game courting her but decided I really didn't like her that much, so went back a few saves and stayed on a Charlotte path. I might complete her path out of curiosity. I doubt I'll do the Emma one because she really seems immature to me and based on MCs age is a better daughter figure for him, especially with his other "Emma" baggage.
- Jul 17, 2021
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After the game is finished I'll also be doing the other paths.
But for now I'll focus my attention on my sweetheart. Emma's romance storyline is really intriguing to me.
- Aug 28, 2017
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emma and jenny were good friends... that's why emma was invited.
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Keyword there, "were". She was not a friend, let alone good one before everything exploded.
I thought we were in what if territory, also she was so nice when she invited Emma. Look at how it turned out.
- Aug 28, 2017
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yes, and she explained, her parents pushed her....
jenny also said she does want to be close again because she missed her friend.
besides your statement that jenny had to know about emma's crush on the a'hole is speculating.
- Jul 17, 2021
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Our Joshy92 doesn't care. She's just another girl to add to his lez harem to cuck him now and forever.Keyword there, "were". She was not a friend, let alone good one before everything exploded.
I thought we were in what if territory, also she was so nice when she invited Emma. Look at how it turned out.