andresblinky
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i like games with porn logic and this game is fun, no need to make it overly serious just keep doing your thing dev.
Yeah, exactly what I feel about NTR.NTR is good! Bland “here is a super beautiful girl, and she fucks her boyfriend” makes for a very boring game after first scene.
NTR is good!
Real good ending is where girl becoming sexually liberated, have lots of sex and cums like crazy. When she is happy and drown in pleasure.
Male M.C. is not the only one who matters, you know. Corruption games, especially NTR are actually games that make at lest 2 actors, girl and lover — really happy and give them delight of sensuality.
As an outside observer, I could not care less about M.C. only. M.C. is not me, and his happiness in not a tiny bit more than girl's happiness and pleasure. I like girl's beauty and personality (except lying) and I care about her most of all.
Few animations still should be fixed in eyes area. I know, many do not care that much when they see tits, but I do. As a connoisseur of her beauty, I can't stand such a weak point. At least 2 animations around the eye area, as well as all future ones, should be of way better quality.
Please do her justice as she deserves.
It was a dream dude.I really do like the visuals, not perfect as the eyes are pretty messed up a lot of the time in animated scenes but it's not hard to ignore. I guess I don't care for sleep sex in general but the whole idea that she just keeps her eyes closed and assumes it's her BF despite the dick being 3x bigger then assumes it's a dream and then goes to the bathroom and somehow just kinda falls on his huge cock and impales herself on it uh...
Like I'm not even against simple porn logic but this isn't really that, examples of simple "porn-logic" ntr plots include girl takes drugs/drinks too much and turns into a gigaslut or BF fails to satisfy her after she sees the bull's way bigger dick and spends days fantasizing about it (you sort of set this one up?). Those are widely criticized and played out but they work and I prefer them to this half-awake semi-sleep sex thing we've got here.
Thanks for the feedback! I’ve played a bit of the titles you mentioned, and I still feel like I personally prefer having a narrator present. That said, I do admit there’s room for improvement in how I currently handle narration and text structure.Seriously, don't combine monologues/thoughts or actions like "She looked at me" with dialogue, it's so frustratingly confusing and takes way too much from the game. The only thing carrying the game is the visuals and animations because I can't understand what the characters are trying to say most of the time especially in sex scenes.
Go look at moonripple lake, my new girlfriend or blurring the walls for reference on how to make your game more redeable, not copy how they write, but how to better organize your text.
Like.
Her action: she looks at pp with awh and satisfaction
Her dialogue with monologue : oh god, such big pp "how can it be so big?"
Something like this. Not have it all combined in one go and to better differentiate if it's a dialogue, a monologue or an action
Just want you at your full potential, can tell it's big.
5/15 around 23:00 (UTC +8)So when are we getting the public build any idea?
She has a dream about the big dick, then walks into the bathroom, and he is just laying down on the bathroom floor with his dick ready to go?I really do like the visuals, not perfect as the eyes are pretty messed up a lot of the time in animated scenes but it's not hard to ignore. I guess I don't care for sleep sex in general but the whole idea that she just keeps her eyes closed and assumes it's her BF despite the dick being 3x bigger then assumes it's a dream and then goes to the bathroom and somehow just kinda falls on his huge cock and impales herself on it uh...
Like I'm not even against simple porn logic but this isn't really that, examples of simple "porn-logic" ntr plots include girl takes drugs/drinks too much and turns into a gigaslut or BF fails to satisfy her after she sees the bull's way bigger dick and spends days fantasizing about it (you sort of set this one up?). Those are widely criticized and played out but they work and I prefer them to this half-awake semi-sleep sex thing we've got here.
More like he was sitting on the toilet, possibly masturbating and she impaled herself with his dick. Yes, it is stupid even for porn logic. Dont think too much about it.She has a dream about the big dick, then walks into the bathroom, and he is just laying down on the bathroom floor with his dick ready to go?
Did I fail to see some scene in between or did she just have a fever dream and walk into the bathroom and demand dick?
Confused is all, not a criticism
Was this ever addressed? Will the mooing cow ever return? Was it removed so that it could be 'remastered' and reintroduced later? Is the developer milking us?! We will not be milked, you hear us?! We're not the cow! Moooooo-- I meant: Noooooo!NTR.ai Why did you remove the adorable mooing cow from the game startup.