VN Ren'Py How Bad Can It Be? [Ch.1] [Doshima]

[Danjuro83]

That's weird, I just checked all of them and they seem to be working for me.

Perhaps the issue is on my end, but by the way, great start! I loved the game, it's got huge potential. Keep up the excellent work!

Edit: Looks like all the links are working for me now! XD

 

[KINGKUMAR]

New game

 

[Noxedia]

When the boss who basically raised you hits you with a “just one little favor”, you know it’s about to go full moral collapse and questionable decisions real fast

 

[hardy0787]

Thanks for sharing ! Renders and animations look great

 

[Hansvoralb]

Great start!

 

[JillOC]

Love where this looks to be going and really enjoyed the comic moments

 

[ffive]

I'm a one woman guy.

 

[Kermit50]

Not a bad start but need more. Like really like the idea so lets see where this one goes.

 

[Rake Tyler]

just having the Android version already motivates me to take a look at the game

 

[Dessolos]

What's so dumb about that i mean is it so hard seeing the truth ,sharing is cuck thing if he loves seing his loved one being with other dick, i mean there no other word for it it's "CUCK" ....quite dumb though

depends on the person imo I don't see sharing as being a cuck personally while others would. For me I need some kind of humiliation or the FMC taking control and taking charge like a Femdom would to feel like one in a sharing scene. This is all assuming it's done with the MC's knowledge.

 

[Ogre]

As feedback for the Dev, if sharing is unavoidable, there is very little reason to make a non NTR route

I dont think anyone that doesnt like NTR will play an unavoidable sharing of your main LI

If you are sure you can make the sharing avoidable (which considering the premise of the plot, it isnt possible to make it avoidable), then i would suggest to only do the NTR route

The game is not for me, best of lucks for the Dev

I don't like NTR at all, but I'm not so strict about it that I can't enjoy any game where an LI has sex with someone else as part of the story. How about a game where you lure away an LI from someone else who doesn't deserve her, or where you rescue an vulnerable LI from an abusive relationship, or where you reconcile with a former lover who broke up with you years ago and married someone else, etc.? The possibilities are endless. Not to mention wife swapping, or orgies, or whatever.

Not everyone interprets "NTR" as broadly as some people on F95 do. To me, NTR is supposed to be about a pathetic cuckold who gets off on the humiliation of seeing their LI get railed by someone more manly and powerful. But the definition of NTR on THIS site has gotten much, much broader in a kind of weird way. Hell, some people on here call it NTR if every LI isn't a pure untouched virgin from the start. The only acceptable game is a pure harem game where the MC fucks everyone and the LIs are paper cutouts who have no agency of their own but to feed his ego. That's not how real life works.

All of that would be ok in the abstract. Everyone likes different things. But they get so angry about their broad version of NTR, and need to let everyone know how much they care about it and how heavily they self-insert intot the game, and then smugly call everyone who disagrees with them a cuck, and rant how the game is doomed to failure unless the developer remakes the game to their satisfaction. They write bad reviews of the game because it isn't the exact content that they want, or the developer didn't program the game so that everything they don't like can be opted-out from, even if it ruins the story that the developer is trying to tell.

It's just so tiring and annoying and it happens over and over and over. Let the developers make whatever game they want to make. If you play one that isn't to your liking, play something else. It's just pixels FFS. It's not really you. You are not getting cucked by pixels. It's a game. Relax.

 

[vs2011xyz]

nice

 

[JEER0X]

how far down the road for the other routes? you gonna finish this one first then add them or alternate like some other games do

 

[ffive]

To me, NTR is supposed to be about a pathetic cuckold who gets off on the humiliation of seeing their LI get railed by someone more manly and powerful.

That's, technically, NTS. NTR is "merely" about causing someone in a relationship --either through seduction, blackmail or force-- to have sex with someone else, effectively cheating on their partner. It doesn't require said partner to be even aware this is happening, much less to be getting off on it. It's generally the player who gets off on the emotional aspects associated with the betrayal. Whether they picture themselves more in the shoes of the person who is being cheated on, the cheating partner or the one the partner cheats with, is up to the individual.

 

[Hans_]

How come sharing will be inevitable but NTR will be avoidable? These two sentences cannot exist in harmony because since 1 is inevitable, it can already be considered NTR.
(the basic thing is to know that people who don't like NTR will never share their partners)

The fact that swinging is unavoidable is irrelevant, the game is categorized for its content, not your feelings.

 

[Doshima]

how far down the road for the other routes? you gonna finish this one first then add them or alternate like some other games do

At first it will be all in the same update until the point where the game splits into the Swinging and the NTS routes (couple of updates left for this to happen), then after that I'll still make everything in one update but one of the paths is going to have more content because you're going to start controling the LI alongside the MC until the point where, depending on the choices you make with the LI, you go into the NTR route or not.

After that, depending on how huge the game is at that point in terms of story and different branches, I'm going to decide if I separate the Swinging and the NTS path, or keep both of them in the same update with different scenes depending on the route, but the NTR path will be released in a different update because the daily routines of that route are going to be different.

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

Good luck with your project

 

[xert13]

How Bad Can It Be?

Let me think: it's a game where the MC is a successful CEO, BUT instead of acting like a confident, dominant, successful man, he's more of a cuckold who's going to watch others screw his girls, and in the future, it'll become much more noticeable. Not to mention that it's not a very well-thought-out story, considering there are already several similar ones, with that in mind, the answer to the question is: VERY.

Too bad, at least the renders looked good. Anyway, block and next.

Wow, what a douche move.

At first it will be all in the same update until the point where the game splits into the Swinging and the NTS routes (couple of updates left for this to happen), then after that I'll still make everything in one update but one of the paths is going to have more content because you're going to start controling the LI alongside the MC until the point where, depending on the choices you make with the LI, you go into the NTR route or not.

After that, depending on how huge the game is at that point in terms of story and different branches, I'm going to decide if I separate the Swinging and the NTS path, or keep both of them in the same update with different scenes depending on the route, but the NTR path will be released in a different update because the daily routines of that route are going to be different.

First, ignore the haters on here. Some people are just douchebags. One constructive suggestion, though, is you may want to check the lighting in your scenes. At least for me, it seemed some frames were rather dark and/or lighting was off. Love the POV doggy style sex scene - you may, however, want too slightly adjust the speed. Again, it might just be my perspective but got a little motion sickness after a few seconds.

 

[Doshima]

Wow, what a douche move.

First, ignore the haters on here. Some people are just douchebags. One constructive suggestion, though, is you may want to check the lighting in your scenes. At least for me, it seemed some frames were rather dark and/or lighting was off. Love the POV doggy style sex scene - you may, however, want too slightly adjust the speed. Again, it might just be my perspective but got a little motion sickness after a few seconds.

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah I agree with the lightning, will definitely keep that in mind from now on, I will also adjust the movement of the camera so it doesn't move that much to avoid motion sickness on some people, I didn't got that feeling so I thought it was fine.

Regarding the haters, it's not a coincidence that I know all of those who came here to try to be funny, so I really don't give a single fuck about them. In fact, I feel sorry for them for losing time coming here when they could be spending it doing something more productive .

 

[Freedom9555]

Game looks great, nice set up, especially when someone moves in with the couple.
So you can have cheating with misunderstandings and not just everything has to be willingly.

Always good to see an NTR game, where the male MC isn't a spineless cuck.
When I see his dream, it looks like a more dark NTR path?

Since the girlfriend, doesn't want him to com inside of her, is there a deeper meaning behind it?
So does she not want to get pregnant?