3D-Daz My-maybe-VN-game, discussions / votings for characters

[LP83]

Red hair and Blue eyes

 

[Creeping Death]

The fact that you mentioned gauge increased my interest in this thread by ten fold.

Anyway, my personal preference usually lands at red hair, but for this character I think black works better with the face and skin chosen. Looks good; best of luck to you as you work on your project.

(You could always have a character that changes their hair color, too.)

Thank you for your feedback! It looks like I am going for the black / blue combo, but I will definitely create a red / green char, so there will something for your taste too! Yes, I really like Gauges' figure but MC model is not near to her. Small body, nice rack, okay, but MC got more hips and I gave her longer legs and some more butt.

Red hair and Blue eyes

She will definitely become a blonde, maybe in between a phase of red hair? Maybe. But there's already a big problem with one style change of the MC with a mechanic I want to implement (repeating events with more and more lewd outcomes, on different paths on different locations).


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I think I have addressed yesterday two or three minor mentioned things (head / body ratio, could look more teeny, and some other things). Also I played a little bit with a very very nice idea of Paperwork (dev of Project Sage Act 1), which personally think adds some fantastic touch to the char. But this I will show off first when I am done tweaking her and put her in some environment / lighting / posing on this weekend.

 

[Creeping Death]

Just a "quick" render of her face, note that the picture shown is a compressed jpg 1280x1280. I attached an uncompressed png with 1920x1920. On the weekend I will post some more shots (full body, clothed, etc.).

CulayTL Here is a portrait shot of her with the winning choice of black hair with blue eyes

arkypoub I addressed the head proportion critics, you will see it better in the pictures following this weekend. So the head scales better to her body (and the length oh her neck was adjusted).

Evilko You mentioned you could see her barely as a teen. She looks now younger again, in my opinion, what do you think?

downscaled jpg to 1280x1280




Uncompressed png (1920x1920)

 

[CulayTL]

Meh.. she looks better with the red hair green eyes

Kidding.. I like her

 

[Evilko]

Longo McFap Well it's hard to notice, but yeah. I'll give her 20-22 now

 

[Nelythia]

Definitely prefer the black hair blue eyes combination, it looks really good

 

[Princess Groundhog]

Extremely cute! Can't wait to see what this becomes.

 

[Creeping Death]

Hi folks,

here is again a portrait, I hope she looks now younger than 20 (Evilko )? And two nude posings, showing her "assets", I hope you like them! Later on I will update this post with two or three clothed renders. Btw, her sex is just a place holder, nothing done with Golden Palace.

The original pictures were rendered in 3840x3840 for 30 - 60 minutes and then resized and downsampled. Tell me what you think!

 

[Evilko]

Longo McFap Her body is hot, camel toe <3
But her face... still too old?

Though this is only MY taste, so you do as YOU like)

It's not that she is not pretty, but her skull proportions for more mature woman? This jaw lines. Just look for any jaw correction operation in asia. They do from squared to more ovaled to look younger. Like almond?
And mouth. Honestly, her mouth catches the most attention. It looks somehow off. Maybe try to make a bit shorter and full? Dunno...

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

Hi folks,

here is again a portrait, I hope she looks now younger than 20 (Evilko )? And two nude posings, showing her "assets", I hope you like them! Later on I will update this post with two or three clothed renders. Btw, her sex is just a place holder, nothing done with Golden Palace.

The original pictures were rendered in 3840x3840 for 30 - 60 minutes and then resized and downsampled. Tell me what you think!

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She looks really nice, nice 'assets'; one thing... her face looks younger than her body.

 

[Evilko]

Longo McFap LOL see? I say she is old, another one says the opposite
So i will not comment her age anymore, to not influence your work. =) I think my vision got blurred because of work, where i see more old hags than young ones nowadays.

 

[CulayTL]

I'll go for the previous face..
Indeed she looks younger on the last one but she looks more like 16-18 (face)

 

[Creeping Death]

Longo McFap Her body is hot, camel toe <3
But her face... still too old?

Though this is only MY taste, so you do as YOU like)

It's not that she is not pretty, but her skull proportions for more mature woman? This jaw lines. Just look for any jaw correction operation in asia. They do from squared to more ovaled to look younger. Like almond?
And mouth. Honestly, her mouth catches the most attention. It looks somehow off. Maybe try to make a bit shorter and full? Dunno...

Thank you for your feedback!

Yeah, I think her body in this small frame is very hot, her boobs are for her size quite big.

Her mouth, yeah, it attracts lots of attention, and I have to say, her mouth is one of the best parts, I am very satisfied with the shaping. I don't like the many models with a small mouth (width) but lips like balloons. I find hers very "kissable".

Her jaw lines, hm, there are many different face types, she got a more like the one you see, but does it make her look more mature? Hmm, don't know. Maybe I will play around with it a bit.

She looks really nice, nice 'assets'; one thing... her face looks younger than her body.

Thank you for your feedback too!
Well her body is quite developed, and in a good shape because of sports and a bit more mascular maybe this makes her look more mature body-wise?! My tipp is the hips, if they would be smaller it would make her body look younger. Maybe I will play with the settings and check it out.

I'll go for the previous face..
Indeed she looks younger on the last one but she looks more like 16-18 (face)

Thank you for also for your feedback!

Well it seems there are many different impressions this model triggers. I have to admit a more like 16-19 looking face is what I intended, so if two of three feedbacks see it this way, besides the opinions to her body, I can live with that. Most important I am not in the range where it gets (too) suspicious. Some lolita like impression is okay for me.

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

Thank you for your feedback too!
Well her body is quite developed, and in a good shape because of sports and a bit more mascular maybe this makes her look more mature body-wise?! My tipp is the hips, if they would be smaller it would make her body look younger. Maybe I will play with the settings and check it out.

It was just that feedback, I really like her as she is!

 

[Princess Groundhog]

The boobs definitely feel a bit too big for her.

 

[Creeping Death]

The boobs definitely feel a bit too big for her.

But how about those boobs would feel for you?!

Thank you for your feedback! Indeed her boobs are very big for her size (I will post a new height compare render this weekend) but I think they are not too big in a ridiculous way? She is a blessed being with boobs this big and firm and defying gravity ... Since I am in iteration 13 for her I will try a bit smaller boobs, but I will post another render with wearing a bra (push effect).

 

[Princess Groundhog]

Not ridiculous at all, no, just slightly big, since she's really petite.

 

[Creeping Death]

So guys (and ladies?) this is the 15th and final iteration of her. As most of the last iterations were only variations of the same theme, with most changes for most people not noticable, I am now quite happy with her. I needed to scale her a bit up, she was too short compared for a G8 male. I also think she's got a fresh face and a hot body. I reserve the right to change things as needed, but mainly if there are technical problems I cannot foresee because of my lack of experience.



I will also post a render with her starter outfit in the story (which will change sometimes for events and then because of her development (change of hair color, jewelery, sexier outfit, etc.).

 

[CulayTL]

Hair too long..
(sarcasm)

 

[BeardedJack]

She looks great, since you love project sage like me im certain this game will be great. Maybe less branches to make updates easier and no forced paths. Good luck man.