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don't worry i thought it was well written .... and i do speak English as my only language ... sure there is a few typo's and stuff but that's minor issue's ...
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The game is set in the US, hence the drinking age is 21. It doesn't really have any in-game impact, it's just being used as a way to give the MC a reason not to let her drink.
Thanks. I'm not sure what other routes I'll come up with in the future, for now I'm just going to focus on the main story, with small branching bad ends every so now and then if I feel like writing a certain scene that does not fit within the story's canon. Glad to hear you're enjoying it.
Not sure, but I don't think so. It's possible, and scenes where they take precautions against getting pregnant are planned.
I've finished writing several scenes, and I've added a poll to the thread that asks for your opinion of my release style. Do you guys want more frequent, smaller updates (2000~ words), less frequent, but moderately big updates (a few scenes, 5000~ words), or infrequent big updates(an entire day, 10000~ words)?
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There is no vaginal sex yet in the game but the tag is there.
Tags at the top of the page is for whats in the game at the time of the update.
Genre: is what will be in the game.
Could you also put in the change log where each update ends.
I hate seeing errors thinking something is wrong but its the end of the update.
There is no vaginal sex yet in the game but the tag is there.
Tags at the top of the page is for whats in the game at the time of the update.
Genre: is what will be in the game.
Could you also put in the change log where each update ends.
I hate seeing errors thinking something is wrong but its the end of the update.
There is vaginal sex, in passage: "DAY01.SCENE07.PART4.PATH3". It's only one scene (that requires the patch), but still. If staff wants to remove it, that's fine with me. I simply added it because the game features it.
In new updates, you will be unable to past the end of the content, so you won't get an error like that. Sorry for the oversight.
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I don't see how I missed it there is no choices at all in the game.
At least I don't remember any choices in it.
Time to try it again and see what I missed.
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I just went through it and its a rape scene and bad ending.
Rape and creampie tag applied.
Rape is avoidable if you play the nice guy.
I hope you'll give it a try anyway, if you do, let me know what you think of it.
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So far its good, setting a watch so I can get the updates for this when they come out. The one thing that got me was the short snippets of text being shown instead of them being on a new page, as well as the next page not going up to the top for some of the longer pages though that to me is a minor thing and comes down to the style you are going for or it could be my browsers settings I don't know. Again great story so far.
The part where some scenes append their content onto the screen is intentional, the other part where going to the next scene, it does no scroll up, is not intentional. It's something that bothers me too, I'm trying to find a way to make it scroll to the top when the text on screen gets replaced.
Thanks for the feedback, I'm happy you like the story.
Pretty good so far, i´m looking forward for the next update. Seems to be a nice romance story so far.
I found some typos. (Once there was Saran instead of Sarah and 4 years junior instead of 4 years younger) I could read it again with an more open eye for mistakes, if that will help you. English isnt my native language but i see such typos pretty quickly.
I found some typos. (Once there was Saran instead of Sarah and 4 years junior instead of 4 years younger) I could read it again with an more open eye for mistakes, if that will help you. English isnt my native language but i see such typos pretty quickly.
Fixed "Saran", but the other one says "But she's four years my junior.", which is correct English as far as I'm aware. I'm trying to have the main character use very proper English, using less common words. The sister has a more limited vocabulary than him, that way I can distinguish their dialogue and the way they speak a little. Not sure how successful I've been at it, though.
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can we have two back options, one to the END of the last page / last choice, one to the beginning? i understand this requires to rewrite every existing page with these options, but its annoying to click through if you just wanted to know what happens or you got a TODO:Site (like the shortened homework scene)
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Not really, one scene is one passage. Back takes you to a passage, hence always starts at the beginning. One of the downsides of the way I've structured my game, I'll try to see if I can figure out a way to do it anyway, but I don't think I can.
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ah shit i hate sugarcube, twine and ajax.
is it possible to pass the last page's parameters into the current page and rebuild it from there?
added a bit more text.
Very good game so far. I always love games that have a slow progression on the sexual content.
I do have one question though:
I do have one question though:
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I am looking how to scroll to the top of a page once you click the next page links and this might do it...
// This prevents the page from scrolling down to where it was previously.
if ('scrollRestoration' in history) {
history.scrollRestoration = 'manual';
}
// This is needed if the user scrolls down during page load and you want to make sure the page is scrolled to the top once it's fully loaded. This has Cross-browser support.
window.scrollTo(0,0);
But this could be the wrong thing as I'm very much a begginer to html, though its different for Edge(yuck) but here is the string to go back up for that as well
var isIE11 = !!window.MSInputMethodContext && !!document.documentMode;
var isEdge = /Edge/.test(navigator.userAgent);
if(isIE11 || isEdge) {
setTimeout(function(){ window.scrollTo(0, 0); }, 300); // adjust time according to your page. The better solution would be to possibly tie into some event and trigger once the autoscrolling goes to the top.
}
// This prevents the page from scrolling down to where it was previously.
if ('scrollRestoration' in history) {
history.scrollRestoration = 'manual';
}
// This is needed if the user scrolls down during page load and you want to make sure the page is scrolled to the top once it's fully loaded. This has Cross-browser support.
window.scrollTo(0,0);
But this could be the wrong thing as I'm very much a begginer to html, though its different for Edge(yuck) but here is the string to go back up for that as well
var isIE11 = !!window.MSInputMethodContext && !!document.documentMode;
var isEdge = /Edge/.test(navigator.userAgent);
if(isIE11 || isEdge) {
setTimeout(function(){ window.scrollTo(0, 0); }, 300); // adjust time according to your page. The better solution would be to possibly tie into some event and trigger once the autoscrolling goes to the top.
}