Glad to hear you liked the story, I'll hopefully have an update for you soon. If you spot any spelling mistakes or other errors, just post in the thread and I'll fix them. Are you American by chance? If so, I'm also very interested in any comments where I made weird choices of words, or other cultural inconsistencies.
Yep, aware of it, have it fixed. I might release a v0.6.2 today that includes new incest patch mechanic, and a fix for this and other issues. Thanks for the report!
like the hardcoded difference in age with Sarah?
It's a little hard to fix, because I am using spelled out ages instead of numbers, making it not possible to just easily do "brother age - sister age". I'll just leave that be for now, and act like it breaking is just one of the minor immersion problems when you stray from my intended settings.
it is possible but requires a whole library of numbers to be typed out. i cant find any ready made code other than this on the quick
Yeah, I am aware. Might have to rewrite that scene a little, but I do think there are better sources of carbohydrates for her (whole grain pasta, rice, potatoes, beans and such) and she needs a lot of protein too. The nutritionist will tell him all this, that she needs to eat seven light meals a day, and the food he should be making.
I rather accept the immersion breaking than add javascript for non-essential functions. When people change the story's settings from what I intended, small inconsistency errors like this will pop up, and should just be accepted. Just like I won't adapt her dialogue for different age settings, I'm not gonna put this much effort into one mention of the relative age difference. Thanks for trying to think with me, though.
i just dont know what twine can accept as code and whats not possible, so im thinking out of my ear here. that array stuff should be possible for whatevers available though.
Thanks mate. This works, will implement it in v0.6.2, which I'll upload soon.
I hated writing the rape scene, and basically rushed it, hence it kind of sucks. It's patch only, and I'm probably going to rework it entirely, or just remove it since it's really not my kink/fetish. It was first written, before I posted this game here, to make fun of people that wanted to get sexual content very quickly, hence he is basically a lust machine as you said. I'll probably just remove it now that the game is getting some more content, and a good reception despite the slow pace.
Yeah,it feels a little out of character, you can definitely tell that scene feels sort of...shoved in there(excuse my pun.) I know that different people have different tolerance to alcohol, and people have varying degrees of effect from consuming alcohol, but it feels a bit unbelievable considering the story seems to imply that the brother regularly drinks alcohol and still has enough control not to jump the little sister in the past.
I just hate how badly written and out of character it is. And it adds the "rape" tag to the thread, despite not being my kink at all, causing people that filter out games with rape to miss my game. And people looking for rape, will find my game, and by very disappointed for 99% of the game. So for me as a dev, it's kind of bad as well, on top of hating the scene myself. It would take me more work, to actually fix the scene, than to just disable it entirely.
I see, then I'll just hide it behind a warning label that reads: "WARNING: RAPE, non-canon. I hate this scene myself:" and then later think about reworking it entirely to not be so shitty.
Scaling the ages up sadly does not make the dialogue different, so you can't age her up entirely, she will always feel younger than 18. But, it's better than nothing for people that do not like underage content. Although, I kind of was hoping, that my writing would be good enough that people normally NOT into underage content, would find themselves aroused as they read my game ^^ Sadly, I am not a masterful enough writer to emulate Nabokov, who had people sympathize with a child raping scumbag.
Non-con sex really is not my kink, so I doubt I'll be writing any more scenes like it. Kind of regret writing it in the first place, since the writing is so bad. I still get the urge to just delete it. There will not be NTR, I guess the stuff with the coaches can kind of sound like it, but I didn't think about NTR when I was writing it, as it's also not my cup of tea. Not ruling out that I might never write an one-off scene that involves something like it, but probably not.
Don't feel pressured to throw in content just for the sake of doing so, as many of us are patient and willing to wait, just write at your own pace and remember not to stretch yourself too thin trying to appeal to TOO many different requests.
