VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [P1 v0.152] [Lust & Passion]

[Alley_Cat]

The One can't handle his excitement.
Perhaps he shall cleanse Mother Sophia's breast at the park!
Then the heretics will raise their pitchforks and shovels and harm our One yet again
Or maybe sing joyful songs in his name!

By golly I can breath in that fabric!

Or, like happens each update especially the Dylan ones, there will be a lot of hype about what he will get up to, update will come out and then there'll be all the complaints about how this game is blueballing.

At this point in the Dylan route, Sophia is struggling to reconcile Dylan's behaviour and the things he is asking of Sophia. The whole point of the Emma and Marie paths is for Dylan to be able to safely experiment with girls and learn how to treat a woman. That he is malleable and not as set in his ways as the college boys Marie is probably used to dating is likely why Marie is pursuing him.

And even for those that didn't do the Yoga event, there's the salon event on playable day 13 with Marie. So until this Marie path has reached its conclusion, the Sophia/Dylan events are likely just going to be filler, like packing peanuts

 

[BUCCO]

Follow the way of The One, The One Way, The One Way Forward.

so far we just have to sit and wait, but the update is coming ❤

 

[Bishop Robert]

Or, like happens each update especially the Dylan ones, there will be a lot of hype about what he will get up to, update will come out and then there'll be all the complaints about how this game is blueballing.

At this point in the Dylan route, Sophia is struggling to reconcile Dylan's behaviour and the things he is asking of Sophia. The whole point of the Emma and Marie paths is for Dylan to be able to safely experiment with girls and learn how to treat a woman. That he is malleable and not as set in his ways as the college boys Marie is probably used to dating is likely why Marie is pursuing him.

And even for those that didn't do the Yoga event, there's the salon event on playable day 13 with Marie. So until this Marie path has reached its conclusion, the Sophia/Dylan events are likely just going to be filler, like packing peanuts

Who has foreseen this side of the prophecy?

 

[Bane71]

I don't play all possible routes for the same reason I don't eat cardboard - takes too long and is just bland.

I wonder when I stepped on your corn?
I see a clear desire to prick me. I believe only because I show understanding and tolerance towards L&P.
I perfectly understand that everyone has their own preferences, both in computer games and in food.
I could understand you if there were sex scenes in the game that you do not accept. And if we make an analogy with the consumption of food, then the table has not yet been set in the game, the discussion of the menu is dragging on for at least a couple of years, you have not even been invited to the table yet, and you are already showing disgust and dislike for some dishes that are on the table not yet.

But in any case, to each his own and I partly understand you.

 

[zoro nami]

I wish I get some sort of teaser or just a poster to feed me

 

[Bishop Robert]

I wish I get some sort of teaser or just a poster to feed me

I'm afraid the Minister won't be allowing anymore of those.

 

[Bane71]

I wish I get some sort of teaser or just a poster to feed me

Remember the past and relax!
I guess there is no more than 10 days left to wait.

 

[DanThaMan]

Remember the past and relax!
I guess there is no more than 10 months left to wait.

Fixed it for you..

 

[Dr.SigmundFap]

Follow the way of The One, The One Way, The One Way Forward.

Alright then.

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[PietruccioTheHilander]

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[PietruccioTheHilander]

As far as I understand, the story has already been written. Pre-translating everything should be the easiest thing he can do to speed things up. No reason why the translator can't be working in advance of where the story is. If any revisions are done, they can just put that ahead of the rest of it.

At least a few devs on here already have the story in code too, they just paste it over into renpy when they get to it. I don't see why he can't do that too.

Doing those things would probably save a month of development time. The art may be the bottleneck, but he can optimize the rest of it to make it a quicker process.

it is clear that the story is not completely written.
it has some sort of track with the main events but all the details and most of the dialogue it creates as the game develops

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

I guess there is no more than 10 days left to wait.

sure?
i think another 15
i better for 20 june

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

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[Dhanush dhanu]

Still 8 days need to release

 

[john_jones21]

Listen, you personally and other guys who think the same as you, that he does not only translate!
He wrote that he does translation and programming, but did you play the game at all? Have you noticed how many different routes there are in the game? He also checks all this to make sure that all the texts correspond to different routes and that the program works correctly and guides you in the game on the right route. If you do not understand this, I understand L&P when he calls people like you idiots.

In that case updates will only get slower over time, time between releases will increase and the number of events per release will fall further.

I would guess if people are here complaining about development time it's because they like the game and want to see it completed. Slow burn games always run the danger of being a severe disappointment once the tease portion of the story is over and really we have no idea if this one can ever deliver.

Let's say everything continues as-is: How long before the story stops and a "remaster" is needed to bring the visual style upto spec with the standards of the time? 2 years? 3? Hardware and software tools are moving forward all the time.

Are we expecting that L&P will be in his 30s or 40s, married with kids and still working on day X of this game? That's what's going to be needed for it to be finished.

 

[Aadalberto8152]

It'll be at 100% in 7 days then released for patreons then the next day it'll be here so 8 days.

 

[Alley_Cat]

One of the things I've noticed while I've been trying my hand at editing AWAM is how much unnecessary dialogue there is. I've occasionally taken out whole blocks just because they don't add anything to a particular scene, and removing it helps the scene flow better.

Which made me realise that for every block of conversation I take out, that's an unnecessary render. And I'm only on day 1. Really makes me curious how much I'll end up taking out after people have commented about not liking the amount of internal monologue Sophia has at times.

 

[Jude6]

As far as I understand, the story has already been written...

The story has already been outlined, meaning at most he's got notes for: Who, What, Why and When.
So back in late 2017 when the game first started the Changing Room scene with Dylan probably looked like - 'Day 17, Noon. Sophia + Dylan. Sophia shows Dylan her tits. Dylan convinces Sophia he needs experience with the female body'

He 100% doesn't have the actual 'He said, She said' dialogue or the narration written out before he starts rendering the scenes, and if you're thinking that's hella inefficient. Yes.

 

[Deleted member 3325933]

Still 8 days need to release

I think that is a bit to personal. Just Sayin'.

 

[Jude6]

One of the things I've noticed while I've been trying my hand at editing AWAM is how much unnecessary dialogue there is...

Oh my Gosh, yes!

You don't notice it so much when you're just reading through while playing the game - but when I was re-writing the dialogue for my thing I realized that the Ellie Shower scene has Ellie asking for 'Some specific techniques' Four times.
Sophia responds with 'Basic indication of do's and don'ts' and then they talk round in a circle before Ellie just repeats the same 'Some specific techniques' question again

A) Rule of threes, why make things messy by going round a fourth time
B) I think the intention was for Ellie's requests to escalate: She starts vague, but Sophia doesn't get it so she has to zero in on 'Show me how you touch yourself!' - But Ellie's actual request to see how Sophia enjoys herself doesn't come until after the fourth go around.

My speculation (this is a biased conclusion BTW) was that the repetition comes from the way L&P writes: He'll do a chunk of dialogue - then go away to mock-up renders (for however long that takes) - then come back to write the next chunk of dialogue, so there's a certain amount of forgetting what was said 3 or 4 lines ago.