VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.200] [Lust & Passion]

[nexer]

L&P could save the scene with a discussion between Patricia and Sophia about how they will dress. It could be a loophole, all intended as a way to shock the audience.
Otherwise, the lack of a bra will be a red flag for Patricia, and suspicions should show up in the discussion between them.

 

[ancienregimele]

So ummm, I only recently discovered this game. Don't know much of anything about the history of its development. But reading the last 3-4 pages of complaining about clothes and "class" this is the kind of vibes I'm getting from this community:

View attachment 1375082

Where did you get that picture of me from?! Seriously though that couldn't be more wrong. I grew up in a place that's within the top 2% of deprived areas in my country, ie 98% of the country was better off. Class & taste don't originate from the actual socio-economic group to which you may belong, or the area from which you come. Yes, I am a bit of a snob when it comes to Sophia's taste in clothes, or at least that's one way of looking at it. I prefer to think I've developed better taste over the years than the pre-pubescent school-boy I used to be.

 

[ancienregimele]

L&P could save the scene with a discussion between Patricia and Sophia about how they will dress. It could be a loophole, all intended as a way to shock the audience.
Otherwise, the lack of a bra will be a red flag for Patricia, and suspicions should show up in the discussion between them.

That gives a ray of hope & how I wish that it's true but I'm not putting any money on it.

 

[Sabertooth__]

I agree with exception. Not all his work is wow! I will not go down the path of that BS scene from the last update. That is far enough and we all know what I mean. He has failed and he has succeeded. We hope he will be in the success column more. His artwork is better than others for the most part (If KillJoys, wynlard, Pixil, Mando Logica, Jack Adams, St-pol got into actual production they all are as good IMO). Not really a question there. His writing however took a hit last update. Let's see what he does this update. No pressure. He is slowing production to the point of frustration.

Basic successful sales = Under promise and Over deliver. He is going with Over promise and Under deliver.

My thoughts on the 2nd job scene are just that I don't have a problem with the fetish portrayed but the way it went was not very good. He rushed it unlike all his other storylines and it came off as a scene thriving on porn logic.

As I stated before for this scene, all he needed to do was show that Sophia tried and tried and tried, a lot of different ways but failed to get the kids to understand and in the next class ( day ) accepted after trying once again. He didn't even need to spend time making full fledged scenes for that. Montages of Sophia trying different methods would be enough. Within 30 renders he could have shown Sophia having tried over 4-5 methods of teaching. An experienced teacher giving up immediately and letting the boys strip was indeed a poor and lazy effort. Which is indeed shocking considering how much effort he generally puts into the scenes. None of the other Storylines ever derailed so much from logic. So it is an exception. Though still not as bad as some other games I have played but from Awam standards not good at all

 

[Old Dog]

This scene sums it up for me.
It is something that you would of seen in National Lampoon's Animal House (1978) or in Porky's(1981) while funny at the time not so much these days.

 

[nexer]

This scene sums it up for me.
It is something that you would of seen in National Lampoon's Animal House (1978) or in Porky's(1981) while funny at the time not so much these days.
View attachment 1375206

True, updated this to these days

Spoiler: Waiting for Dylan, Christine...

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Sorry, is not Christine is Miley Cyrus

 

[Old Dog]

True, updated this to these days

Spoiler: Waiting for Dylan, Christine...

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Sorry, is not Christine is Miley Cyrus

Don't give the dev ideas nexer or he will be adding golden showers next

 

[ancienregimele]

Don't give the dev ideas nexer or he will be adding golden showers next

I live in dread of Ava Myers turning out to be a futa! Just as well I went back with the old codgers, who, despite being my generation, (roughly), still seem confused about the role of the carers in their ongoing recuperation.

 

[Old Dog]

I live in dread of Ava Myers turning out to be a futa! Just as well I went back with the old codgers, who, despite being my generation, (roughly), still seem confused about the role of the carers in their ongoing recuperation.

GOD NO.......................

 

[AchedCroissant]

This scene sums it up for me.
It is something that you would of seen in National Lampoon's Animal House (1978) or in Porky's(1981) while funny at the time not so much these days.
View attachment 1375206

Another target for Sophia? I don't remember her name

 

[deadh30775n]

Why there is not a gallery mod for this game

 

[Bullx]

Why there is not a gallery mod for this game

Because it doesn't make sense. For a gallery with sex scenes, Spohia has to have sex first

 

[deadh30775n]

Because it doesn't make sense. For a gallery with sex scenes, Spohia has to have sex first

U gotta be kidding me! A game with so much content and size and there is not a single sex scene.
Thank God I asked about this before downloading it.

 

[xxxorro]

L&P could save the scene with a discussion between Patricia and Sophia about how they will dress. It could be a loophole, all intended as a way to shock the audience.
Otherwise, the lack of a bra will be a red flag for Patricia, and suspicions should show up in the discussion between them.

I was thinking something like that too!
How funny would be that Patricia tells Sophia: "Sis, what the hell!? What's that thing that you are wearing, boob pockets?? (© GingerSweetGirl ) Come on, get back in there and put something more appropriate!!!".

Jokes aside, I'm curious to see if L&P will spend a few words in the dialogues to address the dress issue, like he did for e.g. Aiden event to address the suit size, the changing inside the store etc (not the bag, though ), which I like to think as a sort of answer to the (sometimes, silly) issues that have been raised in this forum.
I know, it's a little bit pretentious to think that we can influence the game, especially since he's not posting here anymore . But, who knows, maybe he's still reading every now and then to have a laugh to our theories (or getting angry at the critiques). For sure it's a pity that there is no constructive exchange.

 

[GingerSweetGirl]

I was thinking something like that too!
How funny would be that Patricia tells Sophia: "Sis, what the hell!? What's that thing that you are wearing, boob pockets?? (© GingerSweetGirl ) Come on, get back in there and put something more appropriate!!!".

Jokes aside, I'm curious to see if L&P will spend few words in the dialogue to address the dress issue, like he did for e.g. Aiden event to address the suit size, the changing inside the store etc (not the bag, though ), which I like to think as a sort of answer to the issues that have been raised in this forum.
I know, it's a little bit pretentious to think that we can influence the game, especially since he's not posting anymore here. But, who knows, maybe he's still reading every now and then to have a laugh to our theories (or getting angry at the critiques). For sure it's a pity that there is no constructive exchange.

I think he still reads the thread occasionally. I believe our criticism has stung him in the past, so he may not participate but I think he still lurks.

And I would really chuckle if there was an exchange between Patricia and Sophia over the outfit.

 

[Poser_Voyeur]

I agree with you and I have had these same thoughts myself for quite sometime now as I didn't like the direction that the game now seems to be going.
I am no longer a patron so please don't ask me for teasers as I cannot provide them.

Genuine wow KillJoys
I was counting on you as the relatively sane person who was both a Patreon member and on this thread regularly.
What was the final straw for you quitting as Patreon member?
I have always appreciated the snippets of info that you were able to give us non-Patreon members.
Thanks

 

[Poser_Voyeur]

L&P could save the scene with a discussion between Patricia and Sophia about how they will dress. It could be a loophole, all intended as a way to shock the audience.
Otherwise, the lack of a bra will be a red flag for Patricia, and suspicions should show up in the discussion between them.

If Patricia does in fact act as the voice of reason in the choice of attire, then it will be yet another thing that I am grateful to Patricia for.

 

[Old Dog]

Genuine wow KillJoys
I was counting on you as the relatively sane person who was both a Patreon member and on this thread regularly.
What was the final straw for you quitting as Patreon member?
I have always appreciated the snippets of info that you were able to give us non-Patreon members.
Thanks

I will PM you Poser_Voyeur as I don't want to start off another discussion on the subject in the forums

 

[Poser_Voyeur]

This scene sums it up for me.
It is something that you would of seen in National Lampoon's Animal House (1978) or in Porky's(1981) while funny at the time not so much these days.
View attachment 1375206

If Sophia was doing this, then heck yes would be fully in agreement with you.
But this is a young teen, probably 17 or 18, presumably teasing Dylan.

So I don't have problem with Christina acting like this once, albeit it might get tiresome if, like most things, was repeated.
If he starts doing anything similar with Sophia then.....

 

[Talcum Powder]

My thoughts on the 2nd job scene are just that I don't have a problem with the fetish portrayed but the way it went was not very good. He rushed it unlike all his other storylines and it came off as a scene thriving on porn logic.

As I stated before for this scene, all he needed to do was show that Sophia tried and tried and tried, a lot of different ways but failed to get the kids to understand and in the next class ( day ) accepted after trying once again. He didn't even need to spend time making full fledged scenes for that. Montages of Sophia trying different methods would be enough. Within 30 renders he could have shown Sophia having tried over 4-5 methods of teaching. An experienced teacher giving up immediately and letting the boys strip was indeed a poor and lazy effort. Which is indeed shocking considering how much effort he generally puts into the scenes. None of the other Storylines ever derailed so much from logic. So it is an exception. Though still not as bad as some other games I have played but from Awam standards not good at all

That's a great point. I am a broken record (and have been for a while on several topics), but if a picture is worth a thousand words then why does L&P need 42 pages of script? He shouldn't.

A montage of the marker board with various sketches and diagrams all crossed out, crazy arrows going all over the place, the kids looking confused and Sophia giving a facepalm or two. Could have said so, so, so much more with fewer renders - I don't even think it would take 30, he could have set up a scene that fades/cross-cuts or whatever through a series of images with zero dialogue. In each the poses are changed, the content of the board changed, in some shots the boys are laughing and in others looking genuinely lost, and in all of them Sophia stood there in increasing frustration and resignation. Break the montage with - "All right boys, this isn't working. Let's try a different approach."