wokaoa006

Member
Sep 5, 2017
179
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Episode 2 (part 2) released:

Hello Everyone,
We have released Episode2 part 2. This update we have released android version. Android version has been ported by our dear friend.

v0.2 includes:
Episode 2 part2 consists of:

- 472 renders.
- 1 sound effects and 6 new music added.
- 2 Game related animation.
- Another 5 scenes has been added.


We hope you guys enjoy this update.
If you guys liked this update don't forget to like and comment.

Also share this game to as many people as you can, and we also highly appreciate if you guys think that this game can do better by showing your support.

Any feedback or suggestions are highly appreciated, you can provide feedback and suggestions at our discord server.

If you guys decide to become a patron we highly appreciate it, because every dollar earned here would directly go to the development of the game.

Thank you everyone for giving our game a try and hope to see you soon.

- Blue Dragon Studios :)
I'm interested in this game because of the mind control TAB. I would love to see more about Mind Control .
 

Old Man Al

Active Member
Jan 18, 2022
872
5,781
I am a bit surprised by the 5 star reviews.
Don't get me wrong this is not a bad VN and maybe I am spoiled by the masterminds here, but... here are my issues with it:

1. Most of the time I don't know what is going on. The VN throws new people in my face every 2 minutes without really explaining what they are to the MC.

2. The prologue is kind of wasted if I am way in chapter 1 and still don't get most of what is happening.

3. The dialogues (and with them the not explained motives of people you talk to) are off most of the time, like no one is talking like that (I think at least, I am no english native speaker myself). For example: Working the part time job. Another girl I think I have never seen before waves me over. Oh it is X (not I think I have ever seen here before). Girl: I always had a crush on you. MC: Why didnt you tell me before? Why now? Girl: Lets fuck. MC: I am not that type of guy.
Beside the strange dialogue, an OPTION would have been nice here. Which brings me to

4. Way to little choices and those you have don't really matter, as far as I can tell, for the outcome. Not that I tried EVERYTHING, but when I did there was no difference in the end.

5. The story feels rushed and all over the place. The VN jumps from scene to scene - half of them (as far as I can tell) meaningless. Most, as said before, not explaining anything. Nearly all scenes feel like cut short even those meaningless. It feels like the story is going nowhere and everywhere at the same time.


As I said before, it is not outright bad. The renders are nice and also most of them are pretty uncommon I think. But for me this is a 3 star VN at best, closer to 2 way off 4. I guess I check this again after some more updates and hope it gets better on the points that feel off for me.
 

TiffanyMonroe

Forum Fanatic
May 29, 2018
5,767
13,706
Are we supposed to dislike the mc? I'm really struggling to make it through chapter 1 with how the mc acts. I was so close to deleting this when the mc was standing in the middle of the street like a retard. Did she put a spell on him? Is that why he's all "duuur Emily" when he knows nothing about her?
 

UncleFredo

Well-Known Member
Aug 29, 2020
1,934
3,644
Thanks for the update! In my prior comments I was pretty direct about your original approach to this VN. As I said then it's your story to tell your way. My feedback, for what worth you may find in it, is that I find the results of your rework dramatically superior to your original effort. The story hangs together better, immersion is maintainable, the characters interact in a more relatable fashion.

I said that I saw a lot of potential in your work, and IMHO you're demonstrating it as this version of the VN progresses. I find myself really enjoying it and look forward to the next release and where you take us. Thanks for all your hard work.
 

Blue Dragon Studios

Developing "Bite: Season One"
Game Developer
Apr 10, 2022
49
397
Hello everyone,

The development of Episode 3 (part1) is almost done with few images remaining to render which will be done by tomorrow.

We have decided to release v0.2.5 (Episode 3 pt1) of the game on 2nd July (02/07/2022).

This update has new content and some new characters are introduced which will set the path to future episodes.

Thank you so much for your support everyone.

Hope you enjoy this update and come back for more.

- Blue Dragon Studios :)
 

Krylo Zagato

Newbie
May 23, 2019
87
134
Went through prologue and part of episode 1. The premise is interesting, but this MC is one of the dumbest I've seen on here. The part with him just standing there in the middle of the street, almost getting run over, and then walking away to go look for Emily like it never happened is terrible.
 
2.50 star(s) 30 Votes