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MrFriendly

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my brother I know I'm not very smart but I hope I explain myself properly and didn't make a fool of myself
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No, you got it right. One of your best friends lays down the "law" about your road trip, ensures everyone understands it is supposed to be the 4 of you only, then tosses that out when he sees boobies. Another of your best friends, who didn't want these two new girls to come along, instantly bonds with one of them enough to allow her to touch her intimately... And then accuses the MC of being a pervert who spies on them. Seems she doesn't actually know the MC well enough to know he wouldn't do that, as presented Alex would be likely to do it but Summer doesn't even hesitate to believe the MC would peep on them. On top of which she decides to lure the MC into being naked in the water by performing various sex acts on him, even though she has never expressed ANY interest in him. And, of course, the MC can't say no because 1) there has to be some form of sex scene in the release and 2) the MC has to be left in an embarrassing situation as a cliffhanger.

Really how many people would be angry with Alex for suddenly inviting two new people without consulting his friends? Especially in front of everyone and then saying "my car, my decision".
How many women, if they thought their friend was peeping on them, would be more likely to find them and just accuse them and curse them out?
How many people when left blue balled, and naked in front of strangers (sure under water), would be extremely angry and embarrassed?
Would any of these people be friends at the end of this day? If I was the MC I would be finding a new ride and getting the hell away from these people. They obviously aren't the people the MC thought they were.
 
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No, you got it right. One of your best friends lays down the "law" about your road trip, ensures everyone understands it is supposed to be the 4 of you only, then tosses that out when he sees boobies. Another of your best friends, who didn't want these two new girls to come along, instantly bonds with one of them enough to allow her to touch her intimately... And then accuses the MC of being a pervert who spies on them. Seems she doesn't actually know the MC well enough to know he wouldn't do that, as presented Alex would be likely to do it but Summer doesn't even hesitate to believe the MC would peep on them. On top of which she decides to lure the MC into being naked in the water by performing various sex acts on him, even though she has never expressed ANY interest in him. And, of course, the MC can't say no because 1) there has to be some form of sex scene in the release and 2) the MC has to be left in an embarrassing situation as a cliffhanger.

Really how many people would be angry with Alex for suddenly inviting two new people without consulting his friends? Especially in front of everyone and then saying "my car, my decision".
How many women, if they thought their friend was peeping on them, would be more likely to find them and just accuse them and curse them out?
How many people when left blue balled, and naked in front of strangers (sure under water), would be extremely angry and embarrassed?
Would any of these people be friends at the end of this day? If I was the MC I would be finding a new ride and getting the hell away from these people. They obviously aren't the people the MC thought they were.
thank you brother

you know because of my reading disability I was worried I wouldn't be able to explain myself properly especially

to a developer I don't know
 

joe134

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May 22, 2017
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This is a stereotypical example of trying to compensate for lackluster writing with extremely well done renders.Would be more impressive if the player wasn't a passive participant in the story, unfortunately there aren't any meaningful choices to be made, the characters don't behave logically, and the best friend is so focused on the first set of big tits he sees that he lies to his friends in order to have the tits travel with them. The ending of the first episode leaves off with the MC blamed for the actions of someone else and staring at some new woman with gigantic tits. As if he and his idiot friend are incapable of thinking when confronted with breasts larger than a b cup. It seems likely that in the second installment the MC will once again be ridiculed by his friends and strangers in an attempt at humor. It would be nice if the developer surprised me and didn't go for the lowest common denominator.

You wrote a wall of text that ultimately amounts to nothing. You want a riveting story with reasonable characters, I suggest you read a novel. Adult video games, especially ones with a low budget, aren't going to give you any of those things you asked for.
 

omega_rugal

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Aug 24, 2018
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LOL...

some people make me laugh here...i don't care about story (if you want story read books... i don't want to pay a dev 11 euro by month to made story, i pay for good renders/animation it's logic. i'm a big fan of 3d girls in video games since my birth ><)...so please continue the renders and animation because i love it.

i love the 1st scene, i love you let heels on character ;)

for prove, i'll be your patreon :)
 
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You wrote a wall of text that ultimately amounts to nothing. You want a riveting story with reasonable characters, I suggest you read a novel. Adult video games, especially ones with a low budget, aren't going to give you any of those things you asked for.
with all due respect that is the dumbest thing I've ever heard I have played . Adult vn video games with stories so beautiful

it will bring tears to your eyes

in my opinion, the best Adult vn are

really amazing stories that just happened to have sex in them
 

joe134

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with all due respect that is the dumbest thing I've ever heard I have played . Adult vn video games with stories so beautiful

it will bring tears to your eyes

in my opinion, the best Adult vn are

really amazing stories that just happened to have sex in them
Calm your tits, buddy. You must think you are some porn aficionado after spewing that nonsense. The truth is, everyone plays adult games for the girls and sex, story is secondary. So let me repeat what I had said earlier, if you want engaging story and characters, go read a book.
 

HornyyPussy

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Calm your tits, buddy. You must think you are some porn aficionado after spewing that nonsense. The truth is, everyone plays adult games for the girls and sex, story is secondary. So let me repeat what I had said earlier, if you want engaging story and characters, go read a book.
WOW! You must be some kind of omnipotent being knowing what everyone plays VN's for!!!!

The only one here spewing nonsense is you if you think that people don't play VN's for the story.
 
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Calm your tits, buddy. You must think you are some porn aficionado after spewing that nonsense. The truth is, everyone plays adult games for the girls and sex, story is secondary. So let me repeat what I had said earlier, if you want engaging story and characters, go read a book.
with respect that is what you play it for not me

not everybody's the same

we all play for different reasons and that's okay and if you would read my comments properly you would remember

I have a reading disability

remember I can't read without software to help me
 

PunkHooligan

Onion Ninja
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Aug 10, 2020
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People looking for a logic and realism in a porn game. Sure, all of you want some sort of believable situations or character. If you don't like the game, no one forbid you to skip it. Can't please all. There're tonns of other games, books, movies. At the end of the day go out and make your own history if it's all not real enough or unfun for you.

And to the topic of "Story > lewds". If smut wouldn't be here, you wouldn't be at this website as well. I like good stories and writing, but these games must have sex and have it in sufficient amounts. Very very rarely I become too engaged in the story and forget about other part, but again, Story IS secondary in these for "consumers". At least I'm honest with myself.
 

HornyyPussy

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Apr 26, 2020
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People looking for a logic and realism in a porn game. Sure, all of you want some sort of believable situations or character. If you don't like the game, no one forbid you to skip it. Can't please all. There're tonns of other games, books, movies. At the end of the day go out and make your own history if it's all not real enough or unfun for you.

And to the topic of "Story > lewds". If smut wouldn't be here, you wouldn't be at this website as well. I like good stories and writing, but these games must have sex and have it in sufficient amounts. Very very rarely I become too engaged in the story and forget about other part, but again, Story IS secondary in these for "consumers". At least I'm honest with myself.
So anyone who disagree with you about a VN "have" to have sex is dishonest with themselves? Interesting........

A VN like Summer's Gone has a lot of content but no sex at all.......so I'm wrong in loving that VN?

Why do some people seem to have an inert need to tell other people how they should feel?
 
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People looking for a logic and realism in a porn game. Sure, all of you want some sort of believable situations or character. If you don't like the game, no one forbid you to skip it. Can't please all. There're tonns of other games, books, movies. At the end of the day go out and make your own history if it's all not real enough or unfun for you.

And to the topic of "Story > lewds". If smut wouldn't be here, you wouldn't be at this website as well. I like good stories and writing, but these games must have sex and have it in sufficient amounts. Very very rarely I become too engaged in the story and forget about other part, but again, Story IS secondary in these for "consumers". At least I'm honest with myself.
I have three words for you

leap of faith
 

kartolas

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Apr 10, 2021
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LOL...

some people make me laugh here...i don't care about story (if you want story read books... i don't want to pay a dev 11 euro by month to made story, i pay for good renders/animation it's logic. i'm a big fan of 3d girls in video games since my birth ><)...so please continue the renders and animation because i love it.

i love the 1st scene, i love you let heels on character ;)

for prove, i'll be your patreon :)
Betwen a VN with a good story and other with a bad one, which one would you choose "to pay a dev 11 euro by month"? Both have same render/animations quality.
 
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franzo

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insane good start of a game with great renders and a good story about college life and spring break. hopefully the " horrifying mystery " part wont get to creepy in the end. not sure if i ever was "happy" that mc didnt fuck a stunning girl like lea in the first episode.

looking forward to the next updates - great potential (y)(y)
 
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