VN Ren'Py Abandoned Tale of Pain [v0.3] [CosmosFantina]

[CutieLvr]

Boy, did I enjoy these little stories. I definitely have a dark side, albeit only for fantasy. But, I especially enjoyed the daughter being prepped by the doctor to be a good daughter by beating the shit out of her and fucking her everywhere, then taking her home and the daughter admiring her daddy's strong arms. Leading one to think that she has gotten used to being beaten and loving it and wanting daddy to do the same and fuck her just as the doctor did. Let's throw in more incest and beatings, more punches and bruising, oh, and if you can make the blood red not black, show more penetration shots. Why not bring in tags like beastiality, let's let Fido have some fun, pissing, and scat, of course, you make these optional for those who prefer not to see them .
It's kind of fun to let the dark side out, but just in fantasy and only in fantasy. Please make the stories longer and will you be continuing with these same stories and adding others?

 

[ChopTheHead]

Now I don't have any proof for the first and second stories, but considering the third one is blatantly ripped I suspect the same is true for these as well.

I can confirm that the first one is taken from Kaede Hime Kankan by Tsukusun.

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I can't identify the second one but at this point I'm convinced that story isn't original either. A shame, I was excited for some new fucked up stuff.

 

[dolfe67]

So, I think the dev thought no one would notice, but it seems they're literally ripping off doujin plots and remaking them in 3DCG. At least the third story is directly copied from the doujin ARCANUMS 34 Furima-chan Papa ni Hajimete o Otosareru by kugami angning. They didn't even bother changing the dialogue, as it's ripped word-for-word from the English fan TL:

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Now I don't have any proof for the first and second stories, but considering the third one is blatantly ripped I suspect the same is true for these as well.

I can confirm that the first one is taken from Kaede Hime Kankan by Tsukusun.

Spoiler: Proof

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I can't identify the second one but at this point I'm convinced that story isn't original either. A shame, I was excited for some new fucked up stuff.

 

[r4d213ck1]

very nice game
i want more

 

[GuardianWolf]

so basically ripped off Cheap copies of Gore and BDSM mangas and the "creator" wants money for it from people to continue Stealing other peoples work? no thanks

 

[Fappable One]

They put this on Patreon? Really?

Thanks for the heads up. Gonna download this now, before I potentially miss the boat

 

[Bloodguard]

I smell the Patreon ban-hammer. As soon as someone reports this shit.
Financial roadblocks for stolen content. That's some funny shit right there.

 

[Tuperr0]

Niceeee

 

[popober]

I'm not averse to some sadism myself-- but it stops at drawing blood, hacking off limbs, and actual murder.

 

[Psicomaniaco]

Oh man, shame this is stolen and is probably gonna be removed soon.

It had potential for something interesting, specially since most game creators are too afraid to try more hardcore stuff like amputation.

Anyway, I've downloaded it anyway, gonna enjoy what is already here at least.

 

[djweish]

I can confirm that the first one is taken from Kaede Hime Kankan by Tsukusun.

They didn't even bother to change the characters' names? That's a whole new level of lazy rip off!

 

[♍VoidTraveler]

Thanks for the heads up. Gonna download this now, before I potentially miss the boat

If you read the thread you'll quickly realize that there is nothing in there worth the bandwidth.
But eh.. knock yourself out if you want.

 

[madchef]

I'm not averse to some sadism myself-- but it stops at drawing blood, hacking off limbs, and actual murder.

There is actually very little sadism in this pooooor pooooor attempt at eroticising the extreme. Reminds me a fit of rage of a 12-year old smashing his sister's doll with a hammer retrieved from their daddy's toolbox... and then mistaking the heavy breathing from sheer physical exhaustion for a sign of sexual arousal. Awful artwork, zero plot or a proper composition of a sexually arousing atmosphere. Just 'punch-punch-punch-blood-blood-blood-rape-rape-rape-rape!!'.

There is a huge difference between being kinky, even extremely kinky and being mentally deranged with no emotional IQ at all. Just like there is a difference between drawing blood during a very intense yet still erotically motivated and consensual impact play session and punching someone squarely in the nose. What's next? Fapping to boxing bouts? Trying to retrieve Necrobabes or Rotten sites from the Wayback Machine?

 

[acc645785634]

What's next? Fapping to boxing bouts? Trying to retrieve Necrobabes or Rotten sites from the Wayback Machine?

Like & subscribe to my NSA Watch List to find out

 

[Rixen]

Why the fuck didn't I look at the screenshots before downloading that? I thought "oh well, I do enjoy some blackmail".
God damn, looks like something you'd find on a forgotten 4chan thread

 

[Nixi~]

Trying to retrieve Necrobabes or Rotten sites from the Wayback Machine?

...I did not need to know what that was.

 

[KingRocket]

So, I think the dev thought no one would notice, but it seems they're literally ripping off doujin plots and remaking them in 3DCG. At least the third story is directly copied from the doujin ARCANUMS 34 Furima-chan Papa ni Hajimete o Otosareru by kugami angning. They didn't even bother changing the dialogue, as it's ripped word-for-word from the English fan TL:

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Now I don't have any proof for the first and second stories, but considering the third one is blatantly ripped I suspect the same is true for these as well.

Haha, I knew I have seen that plot somewhere.
And even if the other 2 aren't ripped from a doujin, they are still pretty stock scenario in that genre which make it pretty hard to check through them all.

 

[CutieLvr]

I don't get it, it's just a work of art, a fantasy. It's not real, yet, so much negativism. You are not being forced to watch or play this game. If you don't like it, then just move on, there are plenty of other games to choose from. I don't know about the dev taking someone else's work, it's not my business or yours unless it's your work. What Patreon allows or doesn't is up to them. It sounds like you guys are sounding the alarm and egging Patreon on to act in this matter. I too draw the line at dismemberment, but I can fast-forward or skip it. Guys, this is all fantasy, in the world of fantasy I have found that I can become anything and think anyway I wish, but, it's all pretend, IT'S JUST INK. These adult game sites have opened up a new world of exploration and experimentation, doing things I would never do in real life. I do all this in my own living room or bedroom. When I walk out my door, I'm my same "normal" self. My avatar is not me, it's just me "playing" freeing myself, and just having fun. I love you guys.

 

[Deleted member 4238737]

Wtf

 

[MoneyMan181]

I don't know about the dev taking someone else's work, it's not my business or yours unless it's your work.

Plagiarism is everybody's business. That is, if you actually give a shit about anybody having even an ounce of integrity. If you don't give a shit, good for you. But don't go telling other people to just ignore such a shameless and disgusting act. Guess I should also just look the other way when I see people stealing things because it's not my business, right?