VN Ren'Py Abandoned College Girls [v0.05] [Mr Thick]

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Good start so far, very nice, just one thing, you have some really bad grammar, wrong word useage, wrong directed dialog and a few misspellings, not sure if its an issue to someone trying to use some sort of translator or what, but its early and can be easily corrected...
keep up the good work...
 
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Valmora said:
Good start so far, very nice, just one thing, you have some really bad grammar, wrong word useage, wrong directed dialog and a few misspellings, not sure if its an issue to someone trying to use some sort of translator or what, but its early and can be easily corrected...
keep up the good work...
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Hey, thanks for playing it. I'm not a native English speaker, so I can see that being a problem. It will be revised by a friend who's a native speaker in the future.
 
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Hey, thanks for playing it. I'm not a native English speaker, so I can see that being a problem. It will be revised by a friend who's a native speaker in the future.
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Thats great, cant wait to see further updates and play/read them...
So far in playing/reading so many of the visual novels, i have seen lots of places in many "novels" of misdirected dialog that never gets fixed, IE MC is suppose to be saying something yet the header has the nametag of another player... So dont let that get you down at all...
Yea, you have a great start going on...
I and im sure many other appreciate all your and your friends hard work, keep it going...
 
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Hey folks. I've been working on 0.05. Adding more to the characters' story, adding some new places, new cards and NPCs to play with and working on an introduction for the game. I've been also looking for new ways to create animations for the lewd scenes. Pictures are just me checking how it would look like in real time 3d.
 
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Alpha 0.05 Released
Hello guys,
Alpha 0.05 is finally here. It adds a better map, a proper introduction to the game, new places at college and 2 new characters. By the end of the month I will post the end of Celine's first quest.
Thank you all for waiting and for your support. I really appreciate it. Updates will be back to their normal schedule now, monthly.

Alpha Release 0.05
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Here's my crunched version.

Image/audio/video quality is reduced to make shit smaller. This is not a perfect process and sometimes can break a game. You've been warned so no bitching.

College Girls [v0.05] [Mr Thick] - Original Size: 753MB

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this was a promising game. the update sure seems to have taken a while , but i'm glad it didn't get abandoned. all the best luck to the dev.
 
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Hey folks. I've been working on 0.05. Adding more to the characters' story, adding some new places, new cards and NPCs to play with and working on an introduction for the game. I've been also looking for new ways to create animations for the lewd scenes. Pictures are just me checking how it would look like in real time 3d.
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Then he should ask
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for some help on how to do it
 
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