VN Ren'Py 12 Goddesses [v0.13] [HKProduction]

[wiseold6996]

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You know Mr.Dev, i fucking loved this game.This is one of the best game i've ever played, but this is just smashed my hope into pieces.Ok so Tia was apparently in a relationship with MC's father Biten and Darla too, tho i don't understand what Darla truly are to MC.Sometimes author refers her as MC's mother( i absolutely didn’t add any type of patch) or sometimes she's refer as MC's head maid..But the Dragon clan leader and elders accused her for loving a human, so i assume Darla was in a relationship with Biten too ( but MC's mother was named Calahari or something so they had an affair?).That's somewhat okay but while having sex with MC was it necessary for Tia to mention another man's name? Not only did she mentioned his name even comparing his dick and cum ( even jokingly coz i don't know was she jocking or not),i felt fucking disgusted by this truly.And i expected the MC to protest or at least feel bad too but he was taking it as a mere competition and started to obey her?
Nah man that was not a good move..not at all.
Everyone comparing MC to his Dad Biten and it was ok but during sex?And it didn't stop there,she feed MC his own cum WTF!!?Remind your woman writer that this is not a FMC led game. That's tier A disgusting, are you trying to make a sissy out of him? That whole scene is disgusting to put it mildly. Those weren’t spicy or dirty talk those were straight up cuck talk, and after that scene i pretty much uninstalled the game.And ngl you fucked up big time. Oh, you said there is no incest, then if Tia was only with Biten then Who is mimi to MC?
I'll be dropping this,but the game is great for those wandering.Good luck with your game Mr.Dev.

Mimi is defnitely the half-sister of mc

 

[|XenoN|]

Mimi is defnitely the half-sister of mc

It always disgust me to have intimate relationship with someone your father or any family member used to fuck...
Dropped Harem Hotel the moment One Li revealed she was so in love with MC's Grandpa and used to fuck him

 

[dragovianlord]

Pretty cool and funny game

 

[Woodstock_1983]

The Dev needs to make the female voices a lot louder. No matter what level i put the music, I can hardly hear the girls talk.

 

[hkproduction]

The Dev needs to make the female voices a lot louder. No matter what level i put the music, I can hardly hear the girls talk.

Thank, I will check that issue. May I know which version you are playing? (Android, Mac or Windows?)

 

[Woodstock_1983]

Thank, I will check that issue. May I know which version you are playing? (Android, Mac or Windows?)

Windows

 

[Virulenz]

Thank for your feedback .
Since the game is still in progress, if more players hate or not want the content, we will make it optional/skip able or add some warning triggers in later versions.

Count me in for the haters then. While i'm also not a fan of any kind of daddy-talk during sex i can ignore it, but the following scene is too much.
I'm lesbian and here for the story, however, the whole reason i dont date bisexual girls irl is the mere thought of eating a cumdump is absolutely disgusting for me...and this scene made me literally almost puke. Any way to skip this and similar planned scenes will be appreciated, right now i dont think i could replay the game, knowing this scene will be waiting on the way, once was already far too much.

 

[BTLD]

iin a harem with a male MC ... dev and writer thought it will be a good idea to force the MC to eat his own cum...
and have LIs tell him that his father were fucking them better....

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PS your writer might not have your best interest at heart .. and also if you removed incest because of patreon ( aka you want to earn money) maybe you should research what works in a harem VN and what doesn't... just saying... "publishing" a update with... controversial scenes/kink ...it will do you more harm than good but you do what you want

 

[Vortex@]

Sorry for not making the game up to your standard , and thank for taking time to write a longfeedback.

As the game is still in development, based on feedback from players, we will tone it down a bit or make it optional for player in later versions (and plug some plot holes here and there .

Good thing I haven't played the last few updates yet. This content is disgusting. Guess I'll be canceling my subscription . Unless I see something posted saying these scenes will be reworked. Fendom tag also needs added now

 

[Vortex@]

iin a harem with a male MC ... dev and writer thought it will be a good idea to force the MC to eat his own cum...
and have LIs tell him that his father were fucking them better....

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PS your writer might not have your best interest at heart .. and also if you removed incest because of patreon ( aka you want to earn money) maybe you should research what works in a harem VN and what doesn't... just saying... "publishing" a update with... controversial scenes/kink ...it will do you more harm than good but you do what you want

Garbage writer/material. Needs fendom tag now

 

[Vortex@]

Doesn't make it any better. You should have gone with your gut feelings and made it optional atleast.

People do all kind of things during sex. Some like to see their girls getting fucked by others. Some like to eat their own cum. Eating cum in not common that your writer thought of adding it just like that. I would be wary of your writer If I was in your place.

I would never let a writer tell me what to put in my VN. If it's trash, there is no reason that it's going to be good. Why listen just to kill your own vn?

 

[|XenoN|]

I would never let a writer tell me what to put in my VN. If it's trash, there is no reason that it's going to be good. Why listen just to kill your own vn?

I've said enough already...but if you are the boss and your employee suggest you some business ideas you as a boss should know what's better for the company, you don't let the employee make decisions for you.

 

[Chris2041]

Thank for your feedback .
Since the game is still in progress, if more players hate or not want the content, we will make it optional/skip able or add some warning triggers in later versions.

If the future of the game is gonna be like that it wil be better if you get another writer
Wtf dude this a harem game a male fantasy i dont want to see that

 

[Chris2041]

thank for taking time to write a detailed feedback. Based on feedback from players, we will tone it down a bit or make it optional for player in later versions .

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Or you know maybe i can apreciate the scene better if MC in this scene cut the crap of the girl and dont let himself be dominated and dominates her but that would be of making a MC whit balls that nowdays is really hard in porn games

 

[TKdropemoff]

I've said enough already...but if you are the boss and your employee suggest you some business ideas you as a boss should know what's better for the company, you don't let the employee make decisions for you.

i said enough too, but the dev also get as much as the blame.. if he rendered, and accepted that crap then that says alot.
Like I try to give some devs the benefit of the doubt depending on the situation.. But man I cannot believe he cleared that idea to have the mc eat his own cum, and have his love interest bitch him and tell him his father is a better lover than he ever was... Like just trash writing. I don't want to hear that shit dawg.


You just assassinated the MC, and the love interest that way.


By no means a writer should have much leeway of your story, and characters... Your vision should still stay in tact. Now if there are GOOD PITCHES of course in the writing that will benefit the character and story, Ok. as long as you the dev clears it, and find it acceptable to the point it will not harm your game, Then K. But in this case? pure trash.

It's just harmful to your audience and your game which is harem.
Now good thing is the dev can salvage this with a REWORK/REWRITE..
take out the cuck dialog, take out the forced femdom, and add MALEDOM to that scene as well, and make it OPTIONAL.

*cough* Get rid of that writer, and find a new one... *cough*

Bingo.

I am willing to give the dev another chance because the game been fine till now to be honest if he rewrite, and rewrote that scene.

 

[fUzZyDiZe]

Luckily I did read through the thread before download finished
Game is a lot closer to ignore-list instead now with that crap and it's not in the tags
I'll watch the thread a little while longer, before ignore-button is clicked, but not too long
I wish that Devs could see how many ignores their games generates, even if it's on just here on f95
I wonder how many payers that left

 

[tsunku]

Luckily I did read through the thread before download finished
Game is a lot closer to ignore-list instead now with that crap and it's not in the tags
I'll watch the thread a little while longer, before ignore-button is clicked, but not too long
I wish that Devs could see how many ignores their games generates, even if it's on just here on f95
I wonder how many payers that left

what fucking buttons do you mash? there is no fucking hint or clue and you always fuck up why?!?!?

edit: oops i forgot it gives you an option to skip the bs... whew, i hate mini-games and especially QTEs with like 0.0000000000000001ns time to press the button shown...

 

[Crankor]

Forced: Cuck dialog & mc eat his own cum. WTF? How-to turn something good into total fking trash.

Big ignore on this game and Dev.

 

[Sir Sam]

this is fucking stupid.........stupidly entertaining

 

[hkproduction]

Yay, finally, we managed to release v11. This is a small-medium size release (~20-40 mins of content).

The whole game is now a total of ~7.5 hours of content. We will take a 1-week short break before starting working on the next version. It will be a small/medium size release, an interlude for the next act.
We will consider adding more voice acting for the lewd scenes in this act if we can get more funds.

Changelog
Content

• A mid-size release, one goddess appears
• With three new spicy scenes. (Two long and one short)
• Interlude for the next act, the final act of the game
• One lewd scene from the last version was fixed to be optional based on player feedback (you will have a revenge scene in the next version ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Release Schedule

• Soul King tier and above can access the game and walkthrough today at this Patreon post.
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• Soul General will be able to access the post after 10/04/2024
• Supporters will be able to access the post after 13/04/2024
• Followers will be able to access the post after 18/04/2024.

Public Release: 20/04/2024