VN - Ren'Py - 16 Years Later! [Ep.14 Full] [Wetdreamwalker]

Typical VN, but done very well.
The graphics are amazing in terms of quality.
The idea is quite popular, but the plot is well developed.
Most of all, I like the expressive character of the characters.
As for me 5/5

We all know the story here. A father returns to his family after a long absence. While the story does focus more on the emotional aspects, it really forgets about the realistic parts of it all. The second the father returns home he is welcomed with opens arms and they are one happy family. The girls are way too attracted to the MC with little to no reason at all and the whole thing comes across as superficial.

It's a mix of boo-hoo tragedy and interesting storytelling. Personally I think the dev is focusing too much on constantly exploring the feelings of everyone. That'd be fine with me, but the characters aren't complicated and act unnatural.

I'd rate it 3.5 but have to lower the score due to how artificial it all feels. I know, I know, it's an adult game with sexual content but still...

Really good game with realistic walktrough. Dont jump the sex immedietly, first they build relationship. Also scenes are pretty hot, problem with most porn games nudity isn't sexy most of the time they need a story. if we want to watch simple sex we can just look for the porn or hentai.

I am always looking for a good dad/daughters incest story and this is a very well written one.
All characters are very charming and you will fall in love with them. Most importantly, they do not look like kids but young adults which i really prefer.
The story has potential and opens choices for different path. I did not go the rude route. Perhaps i will try that sometime. I actually tried to piss off everyone and it was game over.
What i like most, you do not see yourself all the time. Most of the time you are invisible. So important to me.
And when you are in front, its because of the story and scene.
I truly fell in love with this game.
If you romantic, this has a path for you. Its like a forbidden fruit. Of course we like to eat it and so will you enjoy your daughters.
I can not say too much of it, since the story ends before anything happens in bed but its stimulating in the right way.
So if that appeals to you, maybe try it out. I do not think you will regret it.
Thanks for making the game, dev and hope we see the story continue.

Just want to add, that the strict route is actually pretty nice too, if you like it rough.
I did it in the game mode so not much choices but at the same time no game over.
This path is the "put you in your place" path. You are the domino, i mean dominant men and make everyone else (women) submissive to you.
Works well, if you like that kind of path.
Personally i like the romance a tick better.

Amazing Game! This is one of the few games that I actually enjoy reading (most) of the plot/story! I think the renders are amazing!

I am not sure if the creator of the game reads these or not but if they/he/she does I hope they will strive to not rush the major scenes like I did the first time I saw a pussy... Remember this guy is mature he knows how to handle his stuff... He is not the raging teenager who cums before he puts it in... I hope you will go slow with the first major scenes... Secondly, I am sure your grammar is better than mine but I am amazed that creators don't use free services like grammarly or something similar like prowritingaid... might make your job a little easier... But all in all great game and amazing characters!

The game is ok. The girls look good, the setting is ok. It's all very predictable and unoriginal but sometimes you just want a burger after you've had haute cuisine.

What I dislike very much is the need to click even if there is just one choice, get rid of that please dev, it serves no purpose for the player ( or reader).

English: 5
User Interface: 4
User Experience: 3
Art: 5
Dialogue: 2
Story: 3
Opinion: 1
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Avg: 3.29

I figure it's been about a year and I should come back to this, I changed how I review things, and honestly, I don't know why I would give some of these games benefit of the doubt. Especially given the "inspiration" this references BEFORE THE GAME EVEN STARTS. Like, c'mon man, have confidence in your own work to not say "I like this other game and wanted to make one just like it." Right as it starts. And once again "English isn't my native language" right after, like, just make the game in your native language, then hire a translator. Reading stiff and broken English, and I'm sure this is true for reading in any language, is one of the worst experiences you can have IN A GAME THAT IS MEANT TO BE READ. I get Americans are dumb, horny and throw money at literally nothing, but it just feels like a joke when you play something that's poorly localized. Now, that rant being said, what's here is just not good. It's the same "Dad and daughters suddenly want sex" drivel trying to appeal to the "wholesome" crowd and the sexual assault crowd at the same time.

There really isn't much of a story, Like you might read in my old review, Step-Dad comes home from prison after 16 years to reunite with three daughters "in hopes of redemption." Notice the quotes? It's because all MC does is say sorry, internalize EVERYTHING that just happened repeatedly, and say "I shouldn't look at my girls like that." then proceeds to look at his girls like that. I don't get it. I'm so unbelievably tired of this same dried out porn plot. Notice how I haven't continued the story yet? There is none, it's just MC walking from one room to another as another love interest says he's so different then sex happens. And that's if you do the "wholesome" route. Then all that pretense is gone and MC is just a sexually abusive asshole and honestly enjoying that route should get you put on a list somewhere. Every interaction, essentially, goes like this (and again I can barely only stomach the romance route):

MC meets the girl.
MC apologizes to the girl for being an ex-con.
The girl waves away MC's worries.
The girl proceeds to explain every character trait she has and every trauma she's been through.
MC says "But you're okay now."
The girl starts to swoon over him as if he was that most amazing man ever.
They then come up with a contrived reason to continue seeing each other for MC to leer at and ogle the girl.
Repeat.

And at this point in the story, MC has been home maybe 3 days. Enough to have sex dream about all his daughters. MC's internal monologue is completely unnecessary too. For every line of dialog said, MC has 5 lines that he thinks to himself dissecting the situation as if he knows everything. And a lot of it comes off as a little creepy too. I don't know, I don't want to continue to bash this, it's technically not the worst game I've played, but it takes too much from it's inspiration and MC ultimately acts like a scummy white knight.

The English is stiff, full of misspellings, and definitely needs work. The UI is slightly edited, the textbox and font, but the navigation menu is edited to make it hard to read which is hilarious. The art is fine. I think I'm one of the only advocates of having character sprites over a background, but the Dev refreshes the entire screen every single time a new sprite is shown. So it eliminates the cohesive look of sprites... My rants of the story and dialogue are all above. I'm glad I came back to this so I can accurately review it, but I don't think I will ever like this, nor will I try it again.

To the dev, if steam isn't coming out of your ears reading this. And you haven't flagged this to be deleted. I see where you're coming from, but you need to write characters better. Having 18-27 year old women act like their eight and MC monologuing constantly is not a good reading experience and is frankly weird. But anyway, best of luck to you.

Well, after last update played i decided to rate it. It earns four stars for the story, story details are nice,not so fast forwarded, i like that a lot.
About graphics,well... That could be better , input some good animations, need to put in more work in graphics. This could go further with better graphic layout.

I was reluctant to play this game because of the 1-star reviews, and I am really glad that I gave it a chance, I played a lot of incest games and although it is a very simple concept, many fail to execute it right either by rushing into the relationships or by making it very slow paced to the point it's boring but 16 YL did it right. The story is good for a game that has incest as the main plot, the renders are decent, the models are gorgeous, the writing is passable, the relationships and character development is wonderful and full of wholesome moments.
Keep up the good work, dev.

With close to 400 VNs under my belt and my own one in development, I stopped writing reviews recently, I don't want to appear like I'm "shitting on the competition", so now I only write reviews if I have mostly good things to say. I needed to mention this as a disclaimer, so you see where I'm coming from with my critique, negative, or positive.

What drew me in the first moment was that you don't have the typical wealthy macho MC here who only has to lift a pinky to get his dick sucked. We have a middle-aged bum here whose only success stems from charisma and/or manipulation. That creates an immediate connection most other VNs don't. Let's be honest, most of us will have it easier to step in the shoes of this guy than some Elon Musk meets Johnny Sins kind of male specimen. This quality, to be just familiar enough to be relatable, but still unpredictable enough to be interesting is what draws you in, it's a motif that follows you through the entire VN.

The love interests aren't just different looking wet holes to dip your virtual stick into, they all have their own personas, interests, aspirations, reaching far beyond the regular VN where characters are only defined within the close confines of how they relate to the MC.

At the same time the writing is simple. Not simplistic, simple. No convoluted trains of thought, no theatrics, every character behaves and speaks how people normally do, everyone uses verbal and nonverbal mannerisms appropriate to their socioeconomic background. That's extremely rare to see and hard to get right.

Apart from the bumpy beginning and a - well justified - hiatus recently, the development cycle has been stable, dates were kept, leaving only people to complain about a schedule who don't bother reading the schedule, who don't care to bother with trying to understand how the tier of their patreon pledges influences their ETA of the material (for everyone else there's F95zone, am I right?).

What I haven't talked about yet, which for me is only the second most important aspect of a good story - visually represented or not - are the graphics. This is where I would say that the graphics are passable at best, if I wouldn't have any foreknowledge in rendering, and wouldn't know what kind of 10 year old potato of a laptop this VN has been made with. Since I do, I have to say that the developer has done an exceptional job with the hardware he's been given, but effort only goes so far, at the end of the day all that matters is the result. So the graphics are far from exceptional, but the developer still couldn't have done better, even if he wanted to, given his hardware limitations, which eventually factors into my scoring.


All in all I think this VN fully deserves a 4/5 rating, if I'm being fair, if I'm judging the entire body of work as a whole, instead of subjectively rating it superficially for its adequacy as fap material.

oops, looks like it's a future hit. the graphics are almost flawless, sometimes even overdoing it with transparent clothes, but it looks like the man is on to good debauchery and will get better next, judging from the last update.

now there is almost no content in the beginning, only teasing(but good teasing), there is already one rough/non-rough depends of the opinion scene.

upd. emm, I feel like completely diff person writed above. too much teasing, no scenes for the update. feeling like the scenes will come never.

16 Years Later! [v0.5.3]

1. Fairly good emotional reasoning of the story. Three step daughters portrayed different personality is very nice. Especially the youngest one being much odd type is well characterized
2. Good reasoning for the forbidden relationship
3. Good quality of image/rendering
4. No bugs
5. In summary a Fairly Good

It's a good game, and it doesn't deserve all the 1 star ratings in my opinion. Initially it was too similar to MNF, but at this point it's a different game that maybe shares a similar backstory.

It's still not done, but what is there already looks pretty good. The scenes look nice, dialogues are not bad, the relationships develop a little fast but I don't mind that, in fact I prefer it that way. Overall it gets a recommendation from me

I love this game. In most games there is only one route. In this game there are two paths with each character which can lead to interesting mix-ups. I'd definitely like to see more of this and I'm very curious to see where this game goes. What I've seen so far is a great start and I hope it will continue in the same way.

I definitely rate this game 5 stars.Beautiful models great story.I know that the story is based on the MNF, but it's fantastic how the developer of the game is shaping the story to his own ideas.
Incest games are all very similar. This game is very complex and your answers really matter.
In this game, your relationships really do develop the way you want them to. The game is in its infancy but has great potential. This game is just as similar to another game as an action movie is to another action movie.

v0.5.3

Can't complain so far with the game, yes the tease with Felicia in the rip off Bulls jersey was a really naughty thing to do, devs. Naughty naughty, you're teasing me. And it is worsened by the fact that there is technically no penetration scenes.

But the game does everything else right. The character designs are great, the plot is interesting, the game has a lot of choices and most importantly of all, the choices make sense...well 90% of the them make sense, which is pretty much 100% in my book from the experiences I've had so far with games on here. And that's a lot of experience.

To summarize it for new downloaders, it's about 4 hours of content, no penetration scenes, but a game you should definitely stick with in the future updates, because you don't wanna miss it. I have a feeling the dev has a clue about how to do sex scenes, judging from the teasing he has done so far.

Review based on v0.5.3:

Wow, this was quite the hidden gem for me. I usually don't try games that "linger" around the 3 star rating but I was out of games and wanted to just try some different games whatever the rating. After now having played it from start to current end so have I found out two things..

1. Damn was I missing out.
2. Why the "low" rating?

The story is ok and does not try to be some masterpiece with a deep meaning, but what it does have is some interesting characters that for me felt to be introduced in a timely and well paced manner. The story itself also develops in a good manner and does know what it is so you are not sitting and reading a novel before you get any action, so for me just the right amount of story for each lewd scene. And the lewd scenes are good, maybe the animation leaves something to be desired but animations are not that important for me so its ok. Characters however are the star of the show in this game. Really nice designs that are both unique to each other and really good looking. The sound design however sucks, the moaning sound in the lewd scenes is maybe 2 seconds long and repeats forever, also all sound effects are under the music option so you cant just mute the sex sounds.. Music is ok but nothing special.

All in all a good game with what I found few spelling mistakes, a coherent story, great looking characters and decent amount of lewd scenes. Color me impressed! 5/5

(Review based on game version 0.5.3)

Renders: ★★★★★ (Top notch)
UI: ★★★★★
Story/plot: ★★★☆☆ (Story is decent but there are A LOT of weird spelling errors that constantly break the immersion)
Gameplay: ★★★★★ (Lots of choices that actually affect the story)

I like the concept and the characters are likeable. If the grammar was better and broke the immersion less I would rate 5 out of 5. Good game; would recommend.

There are some things I like in this, other that makes just want to give it 1*. The girls are pretty with good graphics, the MC is not someone I wanna be, the story is so bad sometimes ecept when it's copied from MNF. So I don't know how this game can get better, sorry for not so much constructive critique. Except change the look of the MC.

I waited one update before writing this, but I'll think thgat I'll stop playing this game. Maybe come back after some more uodates.

This is rough.

the idea behind this is solid but the execution is pretty bad.
they re-wrote the first part of the story and now it's better but the new content is now pretty bad.
the English is really rough and keeps taking me out of the immersion.
I was pretty interested in the story and the setting but honestly there's so much conversation about it (in really bad English) that after a while I just didn't care anymore.
not to mention there's barely ant thing sexual in the game. I know it's early but basically anything sexual is just in the guy's fantasy.
also, the model of the guy looks awful. his hair and his mutant goblin face!
the story is too self-contained. everything just happens in the small house and its surroundings and the MC looks like doesn't even have a life and doesn't plan on getting a life either.

the models of the girls look pretty good.