VN Ren'Py Completed 23 Sisters [v1.0 Final] [Abere Lucifer]

[TheSidewinder]

Hey Doc5252 Productions it seems the Mega link got nuked. Damned prudes.

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

Hey Doc5252 Productions it seems the Mega link got nuked. Damned prudes.

I saw. Nothing I can really do about it. Mega hates me.

 

[LorgarAurelian]

Crusader Kings 2... But unless you have more money than a normal person deserves... Let's just say: Enjoy the DLC Hell.

You must be registered to see the links

Or go stright to Crusader Kings III, a lot less DLC(at least currently, I imagine they will give CKIII the CKII treatment over time)

 

[MGUltimate]

Right after someone was saying it should be removed from here. Suspicious.

 

[ZakAttak]

I don't know if this has been addressed yet, but when I go to start a new game some text pops up for a fraction of a second before disappearing. It then has a choice of Yes or No, but I don't know what Yes and No are answers to, here.

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

I don't know if this has been addressed yet, but when I go to start a new game some text pops up for a fraction of a second before disappearing. It then has a choice of Yes or No, but I don't know what Yes and No are answers to, here.

I'm not sure what's happening. I'm guessing you're running Android. It's asking you if you want to use the built-in walkthrough.

 

[LorgarAurelian]

I don't know if this has been addressed yet, but when I go to start a new game some text pops up for a fraction of a second before disappearing. It then has a choice of Yes or No, but I don't know what Yes and No are answers to, here.

It asks if you want to use the in-game walktrough.

Edit: just look at Doc's answer, he was faster than me.

 

[TommyTuba]

I think

I do sound like that on purpose, yes. Here is why:

Sex scenes [the heart of an adult game!]: This game has deteriorated exponentially, I'm afraid. This game got SO bad, so fast over just the past 3 or so updates. Literally from bad to worse. What the hell happened?? The last two updates (0.6 and 0.7) just murdered this game for me. The sex scenes show nothing - no penetrations, no alternate angles, and the sex scenes have been cut down from many many sex scenes per update, down to like only 2 terribly framed crappy scenes. What happened??

Visual Modelling: The models appear to be modelled inconsistently. Some of them are nice, others are, well, not so nice. Some of them look like they're supposed to be teens, but they are taller than the "older" characters?? We may have to partially blame DAZ3D for this, I suppose? Dunno where Doc buys his 3D models and assets from. But we certainly can't blame DAZ for the sharp decline in writing quality, story structure and character building.

Writing: The comedy - usually its saving grace - appears to have faltered as well. Badly. This is now just as herewithered as listening to Vogon Poetry (Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy). This latest update did not even make me smile accidentally! Come on, man! Now there is just nothing worth tying the audience to the Visual Novel/Game any longer.

Also, there seems to just appear new unknown characters, without adequate introductions and so on. The story has developed several chaotic branched story tangents, and I'm convinced that Doc has forgotten what many of those loose ends in the story lines were meant to be, and just left these strands to fray in the end. This is, of course, all just my personal opinion. No offense to Doc. This is just critique.

Just leave and let the rest of you enjoy it? Yup, that is EXACTLY what I will be doing. I'll be leaving this game SO DARN far behind me and never ever look in the mirror again, ever. Permanently. This latest update (0.7 at the time of this writing) just convinced me that Doc has lost the plot completely - quite literally, I'm afraid. The "sex scenes" are not quite fappable, either, so I am not sure exactly how you would continue to "enjoy" this one, but hey, have all the fun you want, of course.

This game is now dead to me. It is therefore now ready, in my opinion, to be nuked indeed, under Rule 7.

It's just so bad now! Sorry, Doc. Not sure why you dropped the quality of this game so drastically, but it is what it is now, I fear. Maybe you can try make up for it with DLG, although the latter has also seen some unfortunate deterioration from its initial promising status, in my opinion. This is SO damned depressing!

Cheers Doc! I'm OUT!

Thank GOD for Blackheart Games!

I think you're right about the sex scenes in 23 and Blackheart Games.

 

[TommyTuba]

Animations are kind of off putting but other that that it good for a porn game

Agree. The animations are too primitive. The sex scenes should be hot. Instead they are cartoonish. Still like the game and hope it will get better. Starting to get very confused with all the new characters. Wish the story would dive deeper with some of them.

 

[Badjourasmix]

Agree. The animations are too primitive. The sex scenes should be hot. Instead they are cartoonish. Still like the game and hope it will get better. Starting to get very confused with all the new characters. Wish the story would dive deeper with some of them.

Compared to how the game was at the beginning the animations right now are way better.

 

[Shark_inA-chiar]

Writing: The comedy - usually its saving grace - appears to have faltered as well. Badly. This is now just as herewithered as listening to Vogon Poetry (Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy). This latest update did not even make me smile accidentally! Come on, man! Now there is just nothing worth tying the audience to the Visual Novel/Game any longer.


[/QUOTE] Comedy saving grace?? my god id hate to see bad comedies then the comdy in the game is like a 4 year old just found out about year 2000s memes

 

[Badjourasmix]

I don't know why people are complaining so much about the comedy now. It has been pretty much the same since the beginning of the game.

 

[Kargan3033]

Hey Doc5252 Productions it seems the Mega link got nuked. Damned prudes.

True, btw thanks for the info on CK2.

 

[TommyTuba]

I don't know why people are complaining so much about the comedy now. It has been pretty much the same since the beginning of the game.

True. Maybe it's starting to get old? Dunno.

 

[red_faced]

Is the writing in this game still pretty goofy?

 

[Osamabeenfappin]

True. Maybe it's starting to get old? Dunno.

Some people just hate happiness lol

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

I know the comedy wasn't great in the last update. It's hard to write comedy when your down. I probably should have delayed the update until it was above par and I was feeling better. That's why in the next update to DLG I'm doubling the amount of jokes that I usually put in a game. I'm going all out. I've posted a few on the thread if you're interested.

https://f95zone.to/threads/daddys-little-girls-v0-4bcs-doc5252.85950/

Again, I'm really sorry about that. I promise to do better.

 

[MGUltimate]

Maybe add some anal? In DLG I mean, and more sex overall in it.

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

Maybe add some anal? In DLG I mean, and more sex overall in it.

The Alpha for DLG will have double the amount of animations in it. I usually do 2 per half update, but this time I'm doing 4. I'm gonna try to get 8 animations in per update for both games from now on. The amount of sex scenes in the last update to 23 Sisters was horrible. I know i can do a lot better. I am thinking of putting an anal scene in either the Alpha or the second half of the DLG. It is talked about by the MC and someone else.

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

APOLOGY LETTER


I do want to apologize to you guys and gals about the sub par last update to 23 Sisters. When I was writing the script I wasn't in the best of moods to be writing something funny. Because of this the update was a pile of shit. I liked the characters, but the way they interacted was just complete garbage. I probably should have delayed the update until I was in a much better mood. I have been in a great mod since yesterday, and am doubling the amount of jokes and sex animations that are in a normal update for DLG. I'm gonna try to get in at least 8 animations per update from now on. I've already gotten 4 written for the Alpha. Please forgive me. Again, I am sorry. i will do better.