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tyuiasdf said:
What a great comic. So much potential.

It’s great when an artist takes their time when crafting a story like this - to spend enough time investing in characters before making the transformation go from 0-100 in one or two issues.

I saw plastic surgery being discussed related to this comic and I wanted to add my 2 cents.

I think that a physical change of some kind is required to make this type of story work. You could have a story where a manly woman embraces her femininity through dresses and makeup, and you could have a fat woman become very fit... but some physical change needs to happen to parallel the internal transformation in her personality etc.

When you start with a gorgeous protagonist, you can’t use the above examples. So you’re forced to go further, and plastic surgery is really the only option rooted in reality.

But having said that, I think that (semi)permanent physical changes like tattoos, piercings, and plastic surgery are the best way to visually represent the internal changes that make these kinds of stories compelling. I think that the main appeal of these stories is to see someone who has mostly rejected their sexuality making the decision to overcompensate and fully embrace it beyond what is normal.

It is both the reason for the change and the change itself that makes the story exciting.

Regardless, I hope that the author keeps going with this project because it is off to a great start. My only suggestion would be to include a couple other supporting female characters to 1) act as a foil to the main character, and 2) to be available as transformation candidates to continue the story once the main character is starting to run out of momentum.
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I'm glad you've taken a liking to it. I hope I continue to please you in terms of quality!

Plastic Surgery will be a part of the comic as will piercing etc, but that's only because the story I have planned kind of relies on her getting that done. I'd explain more, but don't want to give away what I'm planning just yet.

There will be more female characters. One especially who you'll meet in Chapter Two. The story will revolve mostly around Claire, Priya and this unknown character.

Thanks for the post. I've taken note and just want you to know I appreciate it.

Cheers

EDIT: I plan on making this several chapters long, so I ain't going anywhere.
 
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3DK-x said:
I'm glad you've taken a liking to it. I hope I continue to please you in terms of quality!

Plastic Surgery will be a part of the comic as will piercing etc, but that's only because the story I have planned kind of relies on her getting that done. I'd explain more, but don't want to give away what I'm planning just yet.

There will be more female characters. One especially who you'll meet in Chapter Two. The story will revolve mostly around Claire, Priya and this unknown character.

Thanks for the post. I've taken note and just want you to know I appreciate it.

Cheers

EDIT: I plan on making this several chapters long, so I ain't going anywhere.
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I love this story so far & look forward to updates. It's building very nicely. I'm always dismayed, however, when plastic surgery is mentioned. I'll get straight to the point. Priya doesn't need it as she's already gorgeous. She certainly shouldn't get breast implants because she will become disproportionate & top-heavy. Bad backs are real, leaking silicone is a hazard & most women with implants look less than natural. Beach-ball breast syndrome is spreading throughout render-land & I hate it. Then there's "bee-stung" lips....hideous, along with the "trout-pouts" so often seen in real life. Tattoos & piercings can add to appeal, (sometimes) but plastic surgery is a real turn-off. I certainly hope we won't end up with a grotesque parody of a woman in this story because it would ruin the whole thing.
 
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ancienregimele said:
... Priya doesn't need it as she's already gorgeous. ...Then there's "bee-stung" lips....hideous, plastic surgery is a real turn-off. ...I certainly hope we won't end up with a grotesque parody of a woman in this story because it would ruin the whole thing.
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I completely agree.
 
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ancienregimele said:
I love this story so far & look forward to updates. It's building very nicely. I'm always dismayed, however, when plastic surgery is mentioned. I'll get straight to the point. Priya doesn't need it as she's already gorgeous. She certainly shouldn't get breast implants because she will become disproportionate & top-heavy. Bad backs are real, leaking silicone is a hazard & most women with implants look less than natural. Beach-ball breast syndrome is spreading throughout render-land & I hate it. Then there's "bee-stung" lips....hideous, along with the "trout-pouts" so often seen in real life. Tattoos & piercings can add to appeal, (sometimes) but plastic surgery is a real turn-off. I certainly hope we won't end up with a grotesque parody of a woman in this story because it would ruin the whole thing.
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Let me clear this up as a lot of people are unaware of how I'm planning the whole plastic surgery scenario.

- Breast implants would never be balloon-like or anything like that. It would if anything be a different shape and slightly bigger.

- Lips will be natural looking injections. 1ml in terms of injection fluid. Make them more plump, but in no way make them looking stupid.

- Tattoos and Piercings will not be extreme. For example it will be nipple piercings and possibly some kind of nose piercing. Tattoo's will be used to coincide with her new found self.

This will not be a parody of any sort. I've got a story in mind that I've wanted to do for a while. One with twists and turns and plenty of sexual content, but one that's still a story at it's core. I will not ruin a characters appearance for story's sake. I plan on always making appealing characters and extreme bimboification is something I hate.

Hope this clears things up for anybody who's curious :).
 
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Love the update(s)! I couldn't vote on Patreon, but would opt for the 'no blackmail' route. Only by a slim margin though.
Great work!
 
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Hi all,

Update here -
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- Please read the post, it's very important to me.

Thank you!
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"No blackmail" is best for sure.

That's the direction you seemed to be heading from the beginning. Claire doesn't seem like she's being blackmailed or manipulated. She's just happy and free. She's living the life that Priya secretly wants.

I mean, in an ideal world, the husband isn't a pathetic loser who gets ridiculed by the wife and her new porn-mogul boyfriend. I'd much rather see the wife confess to her husband that she has fantasies about being a porn star and the husband says "only if i'm your manager."

I find that these corruption stories rely too much on beating up on the husband character. I'd rather see him embrace his new hotwife.

You could even have Priya bring Claire for a visit to her place, and have her husband's subtle reaction to Claire convince Priya that her fantasy is something that her husband would actually like?

But like I said before, you are the author so you pick the things that you want in your stories. If this feedback is helpful, then let me know, but if you don't like it then go in the direction that *you* want to go. You're the one putting the effort into learning the art and writing the scripts. You get to drive the story.
 
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I think both versions were well-written but I much preferred the blackmail route. Priya wouldn't suddenly become an instant prostitute. She might become a sex worker at some point but only after every other fund-raising possibility had been tried. On the other hand being co-erced in a relatively alien setting, by a predatory opportunist male, has a greater ring of truth to it, given her current insecurities. There are many on F95 who hate blackmail but we must remember this is not real life. No renders would be harmed in the making of this fantasy.
 
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Thank you to everybody who took time to leave a comment. I really appreciate it! I know what I'm doing now, so thank you. I'll let everybody know soon enough, but Patrons take priority with this for now. :)
 
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Just to make it easier for everybody here. Here's the viewers for both routes of Unchaste. Look-out for prompt as to when comic is changing due to different route.

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Any feedback is welcome!
 
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I enjoyed it. Nothing groundbreaking, but the model is nice and the writing seems decent enough. Good start, I would say.
 
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is there a fan art page for unchaste if plz link me and btw love the work so far on this art work is great story line great also
 
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