So I just played through it! So far the story is great. The renders are pretty good and the MC has a distinct look to her that I appreciate a whole lot. Man the scene at the end! Let say, without spoiling anything for anyone, that the region that was played with is my favorite region and I wish it went further so much hahaha. Then again if it's a real story, what I just said is fucked up :I . But yeah looking forward to the rest!
Now for the criticism part. Well obviously RPGM made it a bit of a pain in my personal opinion and I think this would've been amazing in Ren'py. But hey, you do you. If you are more comfortable and satisfied with RPGM then so be it!
Other than that I think sometimes your images and videos linger for too long. In fact way more often than not. I understand the intent but being able to go to the next image/video/text/etc without having to wait for it to finish playing would be extremely nice. Especially that now your content ends without offering us to save, so I'll have to watch all the unskippable stuff later, aka the whole end sequence again and that'll be a drag.
Also of course finding someone to correct your errors and proofreading it would be best. I did understand everything going on but the English is very broken and it could take some people out of it. But...weirdly enough now that I think about it it kinda gave it a charm weirdly enough? Anyways haha.
So yeah, looking forward to the next update and thanks for your hard work!