- Jul 23, 2017
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Great game but a few points of criticism;
So yeah that's my feedback on the game in general it is a nice game but if you aren't planning on using the angel/devil choices to make a branching story then you'd be better off going full kinetic novel would also help decrease the bugs you have as then you don't need variables and story jump commands and such in Renpy
- This Renpy game needs better testing, at least play through your own game a few times before releasing it a lot of bugs are very blatant like misnamed scene names (the video files don't play without the bug fix) and stuff. Some people here have released a bug fix for all the bugs but these should have been spotted by dev already
- There are scenes that don't use the variables correctly even with the bug fix. For example in the car when you are driven home after the drug selling gone wrong, you always listen to the devil even if you've remained pure all game. I don't know if this is intentional but I would have expected this scene to play out differently if you are pure or corrupted
- Speaking about variables, in many ways this actually plays a lot more like a Kinetic novel. The few choices you get just change the scene in that moment but they don't seem to have any long lasting consequences and the story plays out identical regardless if you stay pure or corrupt
- For example you always give a blowjob to the drug dealer when disguised as a nurse - these moments and the one I mentioned before in the car is where I'd have expected to see the story branch off between pure and corrupt
- Another one is the message, I would have expected the scene with the brother's friend not to play if you are pure or to at least play differently if you told the brother off or not for masturbating. The angel even says if you don't tell him off he will do it again but regardless it all seems to work out the same
- The party sequence is another example of this as is the sequence where you are sent to get the item from the guy's house and he almost rapes you
- At the party you always end up on the rooftop almost having sex angel route just sends you to bathroom where you catch the aftermath of the threesome, while devil route you give a handjob to the guy in the crowd
- Perhaps devil route you actually end up having anal sex with the guy on the rooftop while angel route your friend comes to save you on time like what happens now
- Similar change would be good in the house sneaking, if you've always picked angel choices you don't even let him undress you and almost rape you if you picked devil choices he takes your virginity there
So yeah that's my feedback on the game in general it is a nice game but if you aren't planning on using the angel/devil choices to make a branching story then you'd be better off going full kinetic novel would also help decrease the bugs you have as then you don't need variables and story jump commands and such in Renpy