VN Ren'Py Completed Two Weeks [Ep. 6 Fixed] [Madek]

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Overview:
You play as a young student, due to a difficult divorce you ended up living with your father.
Your father had to leave the country because of his work, so you barely see anymore your mother and sister. Usually, you spend two weeks each summer in your mother's house but last year you couldn't make it due to the amount of work you had to do to pass succesully your exams. After two years you finally see them again and a lot of things has changed.
This is the first day.​

Updated: 2019-01-05
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[Papa Ernie]

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Overview:
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You play as a young student, due to a difficult divorce you ended up living with your father.
Your father had to leave the country because of his work, so you barely see anymore your mother and sister.
Usually, you spend two weeks each summer in your mother's house but last year you couldn't make it due to the amount of work you had to do to pass succesully your exams.
After two years you finally see them again and a lot of things has changed.
This is the first day.

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Side note : It's my first game, i'd be happy to hear your critics.(be indulgent with me )

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Nice renders and the writing is decent. Good luck with your game!

Bug: In the intro, right after inputting your name, "Mike" is used instead of the player's name.

 

[User_23654]

Edited the OP, moved it.

 

[a1fox3]

Any game with incest in it grabs my attention and I will go play it.

 

[wep]

@dekmma Are you the dev? In case, in the patreon page you talked about incest. Probably it is not the best move if you like to keep the page open.

 

[Razielprince]

he should definetly delete the part about the incest on his patreon page so that none of those patreon police fuckers destroy another game, which could have a lot of potetial.

 

[a1fox3]

With only having 2 weeks to do something its going to have to be fast because that 1st day was really fast and very short on game play.

To me it feels more like a demo than a game.

 

[Papy.ion6984]

Great work ! TY

 

[Woolfie]

great job, the render are beautiful, a bit short.
Waiting for the next day

 

[dekmma]

Nice renders and the writing is decent. Good luck with your game!

Bug: In the intro, right after inputting your name, "Mike" is used instead of the player's name.

It works fine for me but i'll look into it tomorrow. (if anyone has the same bug, report it please)

Thanks for the thing about incest on patreon, edited !
This episode is a bit short because i wanted some feedback first, next should be longer.

Thanks everyone !

 

[Gagi114]

Kind of short but looks promising. Waiting 4 the next release!

 

[Papa Ernie]

It works fine for me but i'll look into it tomorrow. (if anyone has the same bug, report it please)

Thanks for the thing about incest on patreon, edited !
This episode is a bit short because i wanted some feedback first, next should be longer.

Thanks everyone !

Here's a screenshot of the bug I was referring to. I named my character Hellboy. :biggrin:

 

[Papy.ion6984]

Here's a screenshot of the bug I was referring to. I named my character Hellboy. :biggrin:
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Same thing for me

 

[Paprika]

I haven't played this yet, but it looks mighty nice and without shenanigans. The sis' ass looked a little flat maybe, on the bending pose screen. Anyway the girls look great, I just think I'll be more a mom's fan, since I like curvy girls more.
P.S.: Incest theme is the best.

 

[Theballs]

Seriously, another game with another scene where you buy clothes with the girl???

 

[dekmma]

Here's a screenshot of the bug I was referring to. I named my character Hellboy. :biggrin:
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Ok i understand now (it's an image), i'm retarded >_>, thanks.

 

[Razielprince]

@dekmma
Also don't forget to tell all your patrons to not post about the characters with mom or sister in theyr sentences. Rather only refer to the characters by name, only say short stuff about the main character life(that his parents are divorced, he stays with his dad but after finally getting in his final year he can do what he wants, he wants to live on his own, he goes to live in an apartment with his renter and her daughter, you know eliminate the incest relationship on patreon page, but stay true to the story inside the game, thats what some devs did, otherwise they will check your game and if they see anything related to incest or anything they dont allow they will shut you down). Say that he will spend 2 weeks to find a job that will also give him time to study and gain profesional experience, untill he can move on his own or something. You're a smart guy you will think up of something.

Edit: Or you can make it so that they appear to not have any blood relation on your patreon with saying that the father divorced his stepmom, but since you had a good relationship you stayed in contact and went to visit them every year for two weeks and that works since she isn't his stepmom anymore since the divorce and the sister isn't his sister either then, it will be like having relationships with your neighbours. And that way the patreon police can go fuck themselves and wont botter checking your game for inconsistencies.

 

[Bohus]

Same thing for me

So many people calling their MC Hellboy... crazy stuff ! :tf:

 

[Zippity]

I haven't played this yet, but it looks mighty nice and without shenanigans. The sis' ass looked a little flat maybe, on the bending pose screen. Anyway the girls look great, I just think I'll be more a mom's fan, since I like curvy girls more.
P.S.: Incest theme is the best.

It uses a lot of events we see far too often in many other introductions of this genre of visual novel/game... Not much creativity beyond the character visuals, backstory, and the two week story time frame concept... Have to wait and see if it gets better with a bit more originality, as it develops... I'll revisit it sometime down the line, but for now it's a pretty average so-so VN/Game... I posted my review...

 

[Rhialto]

It is a nice brief intro. A few errors like a pronoun needing to be changed from masculine to feminine when referencing the mother. As well as whine being used when you mean wine. Renders are very nice.