Rinbael

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He, he. King Solomon had 700 wives and 300 concubines. Maybe the MC is going after that record.
I was thinking more about Chinese emperors who could end up with around 10,000 which at the rate this game is going might end up happening at some point.
 

tigerdiamond

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Yeah your right the problem I see with future updates is there is no overall story yet. It's only a first release but there is already six girls in the MCs harem and he has already fucked most of them and had an orgy with most of them. I personally think the dev has blown his load to early with the amount of girls introduced as well as having the orgy so early on in the game.

The game is going to struggle to keep the story interesting unless he just keeps adding girls which is fine if he wants to make a harem fuckfest game but it might end up with a ridiculous amount of girls living in the MCs tiny apartment.
That just means that we'll have to move into a bigger house lol. If Max's life can do it anyone can
 

FormerlyknownasOlheden

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I actually enjoyed this! Yes, it's a total fuck fest with no build up and very little story, but the sex was enjoyable and perfect for a perv like me. Admittedly the visuals aren't very impressive, everything quite gray and grainy, but the girls are cute, MC quite likeable ... would have liked some more close ups, especially in the closing orgy, but considering it's a first release I'm pretty impressed and I seem to have overlapping kinks with the dev so I'll be back for more whenever the next episode drops.
 

Spfjolietjake

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Is the Futa/Trans stuff avoidable?
Just a tip always check the developers notes, usually always something useful there
This is my first time working with studio neo and renpy.
I just want to see what I can do so please tell everything I did wrong and hopefully somethings I did right.
The game has urination but if you say no the first time it comes up you won't see any of it.
Same goes for the trans girl you can choose not to have her involved.
/QUOTE]
 

tigerdiamond

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Is the Futa/Trans stuff avoidable?
Technically yes, but there is a bug where anyone you reject is still present at the orgy. (Probably less of a bug and more the dev not making 15 different versions of the event to account for every iteration of who you did and did not reject in the first release)
 

tigerdiamond

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In the scene right before you go shopping for Holly's clothes one of her lines is labeled as being said by Ash
 

Macgamer

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Technically yes, but there is a bug where anyone you reject is still present at the orgy. (Probably less of a bug and more the dev not making 15 different versions of the event to account for every iteration of who you did and did not reject in the first release)
Well thanks for the warning. Think I will pass on this one then.:cautious:
 
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Azaliel

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Think I will wait to check it out once the futa/trans stuff is avoidable. Not hating on it or anything, just not my cup of tea.
 

juanito

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I really like fairies so I think I'll like the game.
But it is somewhat of a shame that she isn't very… pretty :/
Think I will wait to check it out once the futa/trans stuff is avoidable. Not hating on it or anything, just not my cup of tea.
And thanks for saying this before I got there. I'll also wait.
 

damien_sensei

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Wow this is a great first release with loads of content, this game delivers to the point of what u want. All girls are great and models are looking good, h scenes are pretty hot and kinda love the way that Ash just does what everyone does in the scene, and with the first release ending in a hot orgy i can't wait to see what the dev planned for the future...and just a minor gripe would be the auto pullout during scenes :cautious: , all in all a good game if u looking for sex and on top of that a decent MC who is not a creep..
 

BuckyOHare

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Oct 14, 2018
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Alright, first off, well done for a first release, especially as a new dev.

As for improvements: I have a few things, and most of this has already been mentioned, but

1. Optional content needs to actually be optional. Personally, I'm a huge perv, so I played first playthrough with every choice a yes, and was not at all disappointed (please gib more content kthx), but people have preferences.

2. It would be nice if I could actually say yes or no to everyone, or at least mostly everyone (I get that cutting e.g. the sister out of the story might be difficult).

3. The renders are the usual for these HS style games, not particularly good, not particularly bad. I personally have no experience with graphics work (I'm a developer in my day job, not a graphics artist), so I have no clue how easy or hard that part would be to change. It's not ruining the game as is, so it wouldn't be my first priority regardless.

4. If you intend this as a long term project, some more story would be required, otherwise it's just porn, and I might as well watch a vid on insert favorite porn site here. The story would probably have to revolve around the fairie girl, to make sense, which means any magical concept you could come up with would work.

5. The English could use a bit of work, but it's not too bad. If you want, I'd be happy to proof-read a script for you. Not something I'd normally offer, but this game has potential!

All of that said, don't take any of this as anything except advice on how to improve. You have delivered great content, especially for a newbie. Please don't stop doing so.
 

Raerngaming

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When it was getting close to the end it started having trouble and I had to ignore it a few times. Also there was a choice when you meet the trap girl, and I did not choice to be with her, yet at the end the trap was in the picture. That is the few things that needs to be fixed.
 
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