- Sep 20, 2018
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I totally get the the college kids coming on too strong, I was just hoping for a scenario where a sober Nat could have fun with both of them anyway. It's depressingly hard to find AVNs where the heroine doesn't have to be drugged/blackmailed/browbeaten into having sex with multiple guys, and it didn't seem like it was a stumbling block for Nat prior to this (at least on the path I'd taken).Thanks a lot. That helps out. I had to proofread near to 30k words for this update in a rush.
The pill thing, I thought it out in a way that the guys didn't actually need to use the pill on Nat. Because if she refuses to take the pill, she still goes to have sex with one of them. All they had to do was play a bit smarter. But since they are college guys, they are impatient and inexperienced.
Well, I'm not an excellent writer. I guess, there could have been more improvement on that concept and as you've said, I'm pressed to keep paths tidy.
But that's just me looking to feed my personal kinks. This game does a good enough job offering us choices that I can still find fun things to do even if my preferred option is blocked.