VN Ren'Py A Dark Horse Riding [Ch. 3.0 Beta] [Turning Tricks]

[Woodstock_1983]

I messed it up. My mother has the tattoo.
I never change the characters' names, so I dont know. Maybe the gang members will call him by your nickname.


I didn't notice that it would have an effect. As far as I know, the only mistake is if you deflower daughter.

What kind of mistake? I'm on the part where she used her powers and asked the MC to make love to her. Is it a mistake like a game over or something else?
Edit: NM, I earned the hard way lol.

 

[colobancuz]

I wish when Devs tries to speak in a different language, they put in () what they are saying. I had to stop plying and try to use Google translate just to understand what is being said.

It's a spell, there's no need to understand it. It could just as well have been written as something like ‘abracadabra’ — the meaning is the same.
Besides, it's immortal Latin, or don't schools study it anymore?

 

[Woodstock_1983]

this game needs some grammar tests done. How can you be sorry worried?

 

[PhineasFlynn]

What kind of mistake? I'm on the part where she used her powers and asked the MC to make love to her. Is it a mistake like a game over or something else?
Edit: NM, I earned the hard way lol.

Wrong translation. Not my mom, MC's mom had tattoo.
By mistake I mean bad end.

Looks like you know it now

 

[Turning Tricks]

What is the point of having a player choose a nickname if the game refuses to use it and choose one instead? I Never used Chipmunk as the the nickname, I used Nighthawk but it keeps calling the MC nickname Chipmunk. I decided to change the nickname to Chipmunk being the game refused to use the nickname I originally used.

Chipmunk is the mother's pet name for Ryan. It has it's own canon and Kelly even got a tattoo of it and it's a big part of the back story. Kelly is usually the only one to ever use it, except for one or two times the other guys rib him about it. The nickname you choose is different and used in various spots during other dialogue with other characters.

I'm not going to say anything, I'm just going to let the pictures decide what is wrong here lol. Just wanted to say that i named the MC Zeus.

Did you play my other VN Whoremonger as well and named the MC there Zeus as well? That was an issue before as I added some crossover events and am using a multi-persistent variable that keeps track of the character names in any game/VN made by me. I changed it a while back to use the defaults, if you never played both. In ADHR the MC default is Ryan and in Whoremonger, it's Mark.

this game needs some grammar tests done. How can you be sorry worried? View attachment 5345131

It's a typo that slipped through. Just fixed it. Grammar is harder to check for as you first have to extract the dialogue from the code and then run it through the spell/grammar checks and it's got all the variable tags mixed in.

That's why it's a Beta still

 

[Woodstock_1983]

Chipmunk is the mother's pet name for Ryan. It has it's own canon and Kelly even got a tattoo of it and it's a big part of the back story. Kelly is usually the only one to ever use it, except for one or two times the other guys rib him about it. The nickname you choose is different and used in various spots during other dialogue with other characters.




Did you play my other VN Whoremonger as well and named the MC there Zeus as well? That was an issue before as I added some crossover events and am using a multi-persistent variable that keeps track of the character names in any game/VN made by me. I changed it a while back to use the defaults, if you never played both. In ADHR the MC default is Ryan and in Whoremonger, it's Mark.





It's a typo that slipped through. Just fixed it. Grammar is harder to check for as you first have to extract the dialogue from the code and then run it through the spell/grammar checks and it's got all the variable tags mixed in.

That's why it's a Beta still

My bad, i never noticed it was still in beta lol. As for 2nd part, that explains it. I've never seen a Dev transfer info from one of their games to another sorry.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

I wouldn't be surprised if the MC the the father to Agnes, Lisa and Kim and doesn't know it lol. Like when his mom was drunk when he was young ended up having sex with him and didn't realize it and his sister had sex with him when she was 16 and don't remember lol.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

turning tricks: Please slow this part down so we can read it. It changed so fast i couldn't read it. from picture 1 to picture 2.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

i hope the mother and daughter get over their childish jealousy and both go after the brother and son together lol. I hate games that the females gets jealous of each other when they can all get alone and share the MC with each other.

 

[kaine3d]

this one is pretty good i like whoremonger better though but i did finally decide to check this one out.... also cool how you have links between the 2 games

 

[Spfjolietjake]

Amazing how Agnes goes from beautiful to not at all attractive with a hair cut. It may be a "PITA" but man I wish the dev would have kept it long.

I'm enjoying the vn, not as much as whoremonger but it's been entertaining just was shocked with the forced hair cut.

Best of luck anyway

 

[Turning Tricks]

I may revisit the hair.

I'll think about it over the next couple of months while working on my other VN. May throw a poll up for my subscribers. I'll make the decision after Christmas, when I am back working on this story,