Well, at first this kinetic visual novel seemed to have a unique and creative theme going... With most of the characters looking semi-realistic, especially for their proper ages... The protagonist on the other hand has a mutant penis, and looks so unrealistic and insanely large, he would probably black out every time he got aroused... It was ridiculous... The biggest inherent flaw in this VN, was the huge amount of broken English and misuse of words... The story concept itself, being about the protagonist being punished by his father, having to work for a summer around more mature women on a farm/resort, was interesting... But you can tell it needs a lot of work on the current content, before even moving ahead with future content... I went ahead and posted my review...