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I don't see a problem with the spoilered part. It's just as much MC's past as it is hers, and is related to the flashbacks/locked memories/reincarnation, which seems to be a big part of MC's story.
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- Apr 2, 2020
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So wrong I coughed up my breakfast... I'll play your VN nowHmmm... wrong thread?
Nun outfits? Of COURSE! They ARE nuns.
You're going to enjoy chapter V - when they finally leave the undercroft.
- Jul 31, 2017
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This was just so good. First time trying it, can't believe I've missed it. Just, everything was great. Very intriguing story and has me invested in it. Thanks for this and looking forward to what comes next!
Thanks for the advice.
All the characters have been introduced, so things will be moving on in Chapter V.
Praise (insert your preferred religious figure here) i'm converted!. Only took me 4 chapters =)
Slow burn, no burn, whatever burn people are talking about i wasn't getting that impression at all...The first 4 chapters where more or less entirely used for worldbuilding, explaining the rules and all that mixed in with some humor along the way...I liked it and i'm sure the game will slow down a little soon enough
Slow burn, no burn, whatever burn people are talking about i wasn't getting that impression at all...The first 4 chapters where more or less entirely used for worldbuilding, explaining the rules and all that mixed in with some humor along the way...I liked it and i'm sure the game will slow down a little soon enough
- Dec 24, 2018
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I quite enjoyed this update.
Tilly scaring the bejesus out of Karina was hilarious and fantastic. Just fantastic.
Don't ever change Tilly.
Look into Karina's past as to how she got recruited into Misericordae was quite interesting too (I do wonder whether we'll see it for each of the nuns?)
I admit the whole "reincarnation" throws an interesting new wrinkle in the theory as to the whole why there is a big age gap between MC and Maddy.
As UncleFredo said getting Maddy's soul back is something which would be better if it is resolved sooner rather than later, but I think also explanation of the whole age gap would be better off explained when Maddy comes back to us, so the story can focus on MC's own story and his new relations with the nuns, and Maddy (that is, if she ends up being a LI).
One thing I would ask is, would there be actual human antagonists in the game?
So far we've seen a creature (Karina's memories), mention of Wendigo.
While the previous Priest was murdered, there has been no indication of how he was murdered (and by what exactly).
Not to mention Maddy mentioned the one who broke her back was a "she" (I mean that could mean a monster as well, but I'm getting a bit of suspicion it could be a powerful human magic user who did that number on Maddy).
Anyway, it was fun and looking forward to next update in May.
Tilly scaring the bejesus out of Karina was hilarious and fantastic. Just fantastic.
Don't ever change Tilly.
Look into Karina's past as to how she got recruited into Misericordae was quite interesting too (I do wonder whether we'll see it for each of the nuns?)
I admit the whole "reincarnation" throws an interesting new wrinkle in the theory as to the whole why there is a big age gap between MC and Maddy.
As UncleFredo said getting Maddy's soul back is something which would be better if it is resolved sooner rather than later, but I think also explanation of the whole age gap would be better off explained when Maddy comes back to us, so the story can focus on MC's own story and his new relations with the nuns, and Maddy (that is, if she ends up being a LI).
One thing I would ask is, would there be actual human antagonists in the game?
So far we've seen a creature (Karina's memories), mention of Wendigo.
While the previous Priest was murdered, there has been no indication of how he was murdered (and by what exactly).
Not to mention Maddy mentioned the one who broke her back was a "she" (I mean that could mean a monster as well, but I'm getting a bit of suspicion it could be a powerful human magic user who did that number on Maddy).
Anyway, it was fun and looking forward to next update in May.
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No, but if I don't succeed the first time, I'll try again and again, until you spill the beans.
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Hahahaha.No, but if I don't succeed the first time, I'll try again and again, until you spill the beans.
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Only 3.5 weeks until the next update!
Ah... artistic license?
Ya, that's it!
You really speak Latin or did you google it like I did?
- Nov 18, 2019
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Not exactly memento is an object used to remember a fact or an occasion and to an extention is used as synonym but the most correct latin word should be either recordor [rĕcordāris, recordatus sum, rĕcordāri] or reminicso [ rĕmĭniscĕris, rĕmĭnisci].
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How about meminisse?Not exactly memento is an object used to remember a fact or an occasion and to an extention is used as synonym but the most correct latin word should be either recordor [rĕcordāris, recordatus sum, rĕcordāri] or reminicso [ rĕmĭniscĕris, rĕmĭnisci].
Memento it's literally :you have to remember
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Yes it's a good alternative, even if more formal.
And yes because memento it's bound to a specific thing or occasion, not a colloquial word that can be used while talking, infact is specific use is for monitions like the famous/infamous quote "memento mori".
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I learned Latin in high school (I'm italian) but I remember almost nothingAh... artistic license?
Ya, that's it!
You really speak Latin or did you google it like I did?
This one though stick to me because of the movie
That is great btw
I hope you appreciate that my comments were intended as (hopefully) constructive feedback. This is your story and I fully support that you are free to tell it as you see fit. As I said, I'm looking forward to where you take this, Huge potential here. Simply huge. It will be hard to wait for updates.
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I'm enjoying this one quite a bit so far. It has strayed far from the path of the norm on this site, yet promises some solid perversion in the future. Well, knowing your other projects makes me believe that at least.
Did someone mention nuns in tight latex? No. Maybe that was just me.
Still, great renders and an interesting story will definitely keep my attention here.
Did someone mention nuns in tight latex? No. Maybe that was just me.
Still, great renders and an interesting story will definitely keep my attention here.