VN Ren'Py A Father's Sins [Ch. 34] [Pixieblink]

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I played this first time and there were parts where story was really well written and capturing me totally. And then there were times when story was just too goofy for my liking. But generally it was nice to see how story unfolded.

I'm hoping to see bit more action in the future. That has to be best way to recharge the ring, right? Especially that hot mother and daughter pair could use some affection to keep them happy.

Anyway, I'm interested at seeing how our priest gets corrupted with the powers he has got.

Btw. there were plenty of typoes. These caught my eye.
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Moonis said:
I played this first time and there were parts where story was really well written and capturing me totally. And then there were times when story was just too goofy for my liking. But generally it was nice to see how story unfolded.

I'm hoping to see bit more action in the future. That has to be best way to recharge the ring, right? Especially that hot mother and daughter pair could use some affection to keep them happy.

Anyway, I'm interested at seeing how our priest gets corrupted with the powers he has got.

Btw. there were plenty of typoes. These caught my eye.
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I assume the V/W errors are wanted, because Karina is Russian (?).
 
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well even mc's talk has typos but i ignore those since typos won't vanish on pix's games.
 
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Moonis said:
I played this first time and there were parts where story was really well written and capturing me totally. And then there were times when story was just too goofy for my liking. But generally it was nice to see how story unfolded.

I'm hoping to see bit more action in the future. That has to be best way to recharge the ring, right? Especially that hot mother and daughter pair could use some affection to keep them happy.

Anyway, I'm interested at seeing how our priest gets corrupted with the powers he has got.

Btw. there were plenty of typoes. These caught my eye.
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I assume the V/W errors are wanted, because Karina is Russian (?).
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Yes, exactly. There are some other mistakes, but the v's are meant to replace w's to indicate the accent differences. Those are not typos because they're intentional. Those are throughout the whole VN, so you are missing tons of instances if only those caught your eye. :LOL:
 
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Moonis said:
I played this first time and there were parts where story was really well written and capturing me totally. And then there were times when story was just too goofy for my liking. But generally it was nice to see how story unfolded.

I'm hoping to see bit more action in the future. That has to be best way to recharge the ring, right? Especially that hot mother and daughter pair could use some affection to keep them happy.

Anyway, I'm interested at seeing how our priest gets corrupted with the powers he has got.

Btw. there were plenty of typoes. These caught my eye.
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Thanks for pointing them out, I'll get them fixed in the next update.
The V instead of W when Karina is speaking is intentional, as she is Russian.
 
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A Father's Sins Chapter 10 - Now available on our
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About 30 minutes game play. With animations. Of course.

No previews this month.
Because chapter 10 is the one that starts pulling the entire story together.

I know it sounds lame, but there really wasn't any way of posting teasers
that won't give away some of the major plot twists. :rolleyes:

Wouldn't be much of a shocker if you knew what to expect.

All I'm willing to say is right now is that ALL the beta-testers responded with a big
"HELL YA - GOOD STORY !!!"
 
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Ok - what do we know so far:

- The Cardinal and Sister Bernadette are missing
- Detective Maddy, Sadie and MC are going to form some trinity
- There's a wendigo (disguised as a female) walking around in town
- Danny is really ruthless when it comes to tips
- Tilly and Karina are at least bi-curious

Really curious about the plot twists - great story

Edit: Forgot Sister Francine's healer syndrome
 
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Ok - what do we know so far:

- The Cardinal and Sister Bernadette are missing
- Detective Maddy, Sadie and MC are going to form some trinity
- There's a wendigo (disguised as a female) walking around in town
- Danny is really ruthless when it comes to tips
- Tilly and Karina are at least bi-curious

Really curious about the plot twists - great story

Edit: Forgot Sister Francine's healer syndrome
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Wouldn't it be hilarious if Danny goes all Sofia Al-Azwar (i.e., Jane Wick) on the wendigo and destroys it without the need for any holy items or intervention? I mean, this isn't The Professor so I can't see that happening, but still.
 
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Smbt3D said:
Ok - what do we know so far:

- The Cardinal and Sister Bernadette are missing
- Detective Maddy, Sadie and MC are going to form some trinity
- There's a wendigo (disguised as a female) walking around in town
- Danny is really ruthless when it comes to tips
- Tilly and Karina are at least bi-curious

Really curious about the plot twists - great story

Edit: Forgot Sister Francine's healer syndrome
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Glad you're enjoying the game.
Spread the word?

In these tough times we starving devs can use all the help we can get.
 
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Right, so I had decided NOT to post any previews from Chapter 10, as I thought it would give away to much of the story. Ain't much of a surprise if you know what to expect now, is it?

So if you're really into the story... don't peek! :rolleyes:

For everyone else that can't live without them... enjoy.
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