Ren'Py Completed A Few Days [Final Bugfixed] [Mickydoo]

[mickydoo]

mickydoo, your "gramaphone" is a gramophone actually (except you invented something new, not only gramatically ).

Btw, I was slightly confused about that painting in the painting and MC's conclusion lead to Maddie (or was is Maggie? I always confound them...). Was a bit difficult to retrace how MC came to this conclusion...

And about the 3 branches: wouldn't it be better if you could let the player choose with whom MC will be going on that island boat trip instead of the 3-different-script-files download/insert procedure at the very end of this episode? That would surely be much more immersive and less "complicated"...

However, still enjoyed the continuation of events plot- and lewd-wise... (the latter could be even more frequent than only the one-scene-at-the-end-of-each-episode thing for me and maybe a little more "seductive" - but well, one may have wishes at least ).
Keep it going and thanks for the update!

Gramaphone, google fail on my behalf as I googled it and copy pasted it.

Maddie, not Maggie. On the painting is the inscription The someone family 1887 or whatever it is, if you hide the dialogue box you can see it. Maddie painted something that didn't exist at that time in the painting. The MC knows her painting style to start with, but he also says that's what she does, puts something in paintings that historically incorrect just see if anyone notices. He also says Maddie told him about His Masters Voice once before. I got the idea from a TV show and doctored photo. I explain more about the painting in next episode, as opposed to a lot of things I put in the story, this one I had planned from the start, there is a reason for it that will be more apparent later.

The three branches with the three girls have nothing to do with the girl strictly speaking. I needed Casey in her bit cos she is a cop, I needed someone beside Charlie on the Elle one because I needed Charlie back home for the camera and it couldn't be Sue cos she had to work cos Dale was with you. I took Charlie on the Charlie because she is Charlie The only reason I put the script files in it because ppl will just ask for saves and likes anyway, there is no need to use them and I only put them in it for my test players and just left them see if ppl cared for them or not.

The H-scenes are taking me longer to make than Hustle Town as I know how to at least attempt to make them better, but I hear you and and agree so I'll find some time.

If I try and be seductive I come across creepy

 

[Gorse]

The H-scenes are taking me longer to make than Hustle Town as I know how to at least attempt to make them better, but I hear you and and agree so I'll find some time.

If I try and be seductive I come across creepy

Thanks for tryin' to find some time for a little more lewd content and for your response!
And you don't have to come across"creepy", maybe some more erotic build-up should do as well

I explain more about the painting in next episode

Glad you are going to do that and again thanks for the clarification so far. Now I'm much less confused than before.

The three branches with the three girls have nothing to do with the girl strictly speaking.

Well, okay. Nevertheless it is maybe a chance to improve by branching a bit and givin' the player another choice if you set one specific camera and the following "path" to one specific girl. But if a combination of all scripts to one with the choice to visit the island with either Elle or Casey or Charlie isn't possible (or a good idea) it wouldn't harm the gameplay significantly.
On the other side it could benefit to some "replayability" perhaps. Only an idea of course!

Looking forward to the further updates then

 

[Matt-Stu]

Nice render.

 

[cxx]

I have seen some render issues in the past, but how the heck did this get by you?

what's wrong on it?

sigh, you haven't learned anything, age is just a number! it's whether they've reached menarche or not. haha

yea and if they are underagers it's jailtime baby when parent/s find out.

 

[_tewi]

CHAWLIE badly needs a dicking

 

[tsunku]

yea and if they are underagers it's jailtime baby when parent/s find out.

yes and like a girl getting pregnant, that's why you a. never give a real name, b. never let them know where you live.

 

[cxx]

yes and like a girl getting pregnant, that's why you a. never give a real name, b. never let them know where you live.

well yea except with today's world where ppls (read: idiots) have sent their dnas on various services chances that daddy's cousin etc is found and daddy will be caught is possible. same thing on facepalm, twitter, etc that finding person isn't exactly difficult anymore unless lives as hermit in the middle of nowhere and grows/hunts own food (potatoes, veggies, deer/moose, ........).

 

[HoshiEx]

pls update android port to ep.7 caxhub.
thank you

 

[caxhub]

pls update android port to ep.7 caxhub.
thank you

I just uploaded the Android version on the my website website yesterday, it will take 1-2 days to wait for a response from the user, if there are no errors then I will post here.

 

[cxx]

man, finding that stupid camera was difficult and moving on 1st screen of yacht wasn't easy either.

mickydoo i'm beginning to think that you need proofreader, this update has quite a few typos like when mc talks to casey about camera she says so hopfully ......... so where she's gonna hop?

 

[HoshiEx]

I just uploaded the Android version on the my website website yesterday, it will take 1-2 days to wait for a response from the user, if there are no errors then I will post here.

alright.

 

[tsunku]

well yea except with today's world where ppls (read: idiots) have sent their dnas on various services chances that daddy's cousin etc is found and daddy will be caught is possible. same thing on facepalm, twitter, etc that finding person isn't exactly difficult anymore unless lives as hermit in the middle of nowhere and grows/hunts own food (potatoes, veggies, deer/moose, ........).

you left out been arrested. more and more they are collecting dna from just an arrest, usually only ones where you end up in intake. it has helped them solved many crimes that might have gone otherwise unsolved for decades. btw i don't use social media, i also don't allow ppl to take photos or videos of me.

 

[cxx]

weird end if that really was end, after mc has talked to casey and visited other places no advancing/returning home since all are greyed out.

you left out been arrested. more and more they are collecting dna from just an arrest, usually only ones where you end up in intake. it has helped them solved many crimes that might have gone otherwise unsolved for decades. btw i don't use social media, i also don't allow ppl to take photos or videos of me.

well there are tons of public cameras so you have been video'd many times and very possibly on many pics background when you have been walking by when some1 has taken a pic of something/some1.

 

[mickydoo]

weird end if that really was end, after mc has talked to casey and visited other places no advancing/returning home since all are greyed out.

It happened to someone else and they got around it, its some fuck up on my behalf
https://f95zone.to/threads/a-few-days-ep-7-mickydoo.62947/post-6297098

 

[KGregory]

It happened to someone else and they got around it, its some fuck up on my behalf
https://f95zone.to/threads/a-few-days-ep-7-mickydoo.62947/post-6297098

That happened to me. I replayed from my previous save and when I got back to the screens I left Casey until last and the VN progressed without a hitch. Hope that helps.

 

[fishbrain]

And about the 3 branches: wouldn't it be better if you could let the player choose with whom MC will be going on that island boat trip instead of the 3-different-script-files download/insert procedure at the very end of this episode? That would surely be much more immersive and less "complicated"...

Wait, is that the only way to see the scenes with anyone other than Charlie? if that's the case I wasted a ton of time earlier.

 

[Gorse]

Wait, is that the only way to see the scenes with anyone other than Charlie? if that's the case I wasted a ton of time earlier.

If you're referring to the island trip (branching) scenes in EP7 where MC, Dale and one of the girls are going for the generator and the computer monitors: yeah, the different downloadable scipt files seem to be the only option to trip with a different girl (for me it first was Elle originally leading to CAM3, the camera nearby the residence apartments of MC )
But maybe the original scipt file also includes random encounters (so far I might understand the dev right) ?! I don't know honestly...

That's why I suggested to combine all these script files to one and give us players the choice with which girl this island trip is going to happen (and which camera we're going to activate/find later on)

 

[fishbrain]

If you're referring to the island trip (branching) scenes in EP7 where MC, Dale and one of the girls are going for the generator and the computer monitors: yeah, the different downloadable scipt files seem to be the only option to trip with a different girl (for me it first was Elle originally leading to CAM3, the camera nearby the residence apartments of MC )
But maybe the original scipt file also includes random encounters (so far I might understand the dev right) ?! I don't know honestly...

That's why I suggested to combine all these script files to one and give us players the choice with which girl this island trip is going to happen (and which camera we're going to activate/find later on)

I agree, I initially went with the cheating husband route then after seeing that

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I had just started this and played all the way through so I was deep into the story and would've preferred seeing it with someone else anyway but that just made me lose interest. Hopefully there is an adjustment made in the next release!

 

[mickydoo]

fishbrain and Gorse and to anyone else who posted similar.

I done me some thinking and I have come up with this -

After Dale says you can bring someone with you I'll make a choice for the three girls. The paths I have in place will remain the same, but your choice will be remembered. At the the start of the next chapter I'll put in a choice menu prompting you to tell renpy what girl you took to the island, so assuming you used the scripts just pick one. I'll then remove that choice in the following update.

Also there will be my normal progressive sex scene, ain't worked that out yet exactly, but in the evenings I'm going to make it possible to go and see females. I did that in Hustle Town but it was just for shit talking or to get stoned with Penny, this time around it will be for sexy time. I'll give you two choices this next chapter, both on a random so they may or may not be home, if the first one is not the other one will be, the one you don't don't go and see will be leftover for the next chapter, which I will try include three choices to go and see. The build up to sex scenes in these scenarios will not be overly long but will be animated.

 

[Gorse]

fishbrain and Gorse and to anyone else who posted similar.

I done me some thinking and I have come up with this -

After Dale says you can bring someone with you I'll make a choice for the three girls. The paths I have in place will remain the same, but your choice will be remembered. At the the start of the next chapter I'll put in a choice menu prompting you to tell renpy what girl you took to the island, so assuming you used the scripts just pick one. I'll then remove that choice in the following update.

Also there will be my normal progressive sex scene, ain't worked that out yet exactly, but in the evenings I'm going to make it possible to go and see females. I did that in Hustle Town but it was just for shit talking or to get stoned with Penny, this time around it will be for sexy time. I'll give you two choices this next chapter, both on a random so they may or may not be home, if the first one is not the other one will be, the one you don't don't go and see will be leftover for the next chapter, which I will try include three choices to go and see. The build up to sex scenes in these scenarios will not be overly long but will be animated.

Splendid, mickydoo ! Thank you for takin' our thoughts into consideration.
Appreciate and look forward to that and the next chapter then