I reckon he just needs to scratch the whole "came out of state to visit my best friend" arc and go for selling his house in the city, and moving to the small town where his bestfriend lives because it's more affordable. The story is all over the place at the moment.
As I said before, the premise is great; and you don't need supernatural, mind-control stuff to make a believable naughty story. The Free World is already liberated when it comes to sex so I love all this down to earth story about a young man looking to hit every ass possible.
My humble advice to the dev would be to review the intro of the story, make sure it's all chronological because some things don't make much sense right now ( e.g. the MC stated that he wants to stay as long as possible for some reason and decided to leave after two days, finding his flight is cancelled, returning back to Chloe talking about the advice he gave "the other night" which is wrong... It must have been a while, no? ).