I don't know why you changed Joey's wife model , she used to be perfect now she's 5 out of 10 and also there are some part where Nicolas face looks weird like you just cut the face and paste it in a different picture of him and also there some writing mistakes, like even if you don't touch her mother ass it says you had to touch it didn't you, these are the thinks that I didn't liked and what i like was the story you add after she come home and had a talk with him, i like how the story is going but artwork is terrible in some parts like her skin tone, body smoothness on her when she sit on you, and in some parts contrast is too much.