Honestly, after seeing some of these games, I've thought about making one of my own, with better grammar, and some dark and twisted backgrounds. I just don't have the technical know-how to actually write a game from scratch.That description you made maybe too muxh of summary.
I think you need to tell the public more about her past.
I could easily come up with fully fleshed out backstories of established characters, like fan-fic, but I also don't wanna steal someone else's work just to fulfill my twistedness lol.