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Ren'Py A House in the Rift [v0.7.16r4] [Zanith]

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Zoran89

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ZanithOne
As a bit of feedback:
I am playing through the latest updates and I've just noticed that, when you are talking with Rae at the pool, when she explains who Sagarie is, she tends to use "Dear" in every other sentence.
I think this is stylistically jarring, as nobody will actually talk like this:
-Hey, sweetie I made you a cake. It was made from chocolate and cream, sweetie. I hope you like it, sweetie.
-Yes, it's delicious
-I am glad to hear it, sweetie. Sweetie, could you...

You know what I mean? Compare it to

-Hey, sweetie I made you a cake. It was made from chocolate and cream - I hope you like it.
-Yes, it's delicious
-I am glad to hear it. Say, could you...

This IMO sounds MUCH more natural.
Anyway, back to reading, just wanted to point this out before I forgot about it.
 
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Zoran89 said:
ZanithOne
As a bit of feedback:
I am playing through the latest updates and I've just noticed that, when you are talking with Rae at the pool, when she explains who Sagarie is, she tends to use "Dear" in every other sentence.
I think this is stylistically jarring, as nobody will actually talk like this:
-Hey, sweetie I made you a cake. It was made from chocolate and cream, sweetie. I hope you like it, sweetie.
-Yes, it's delicious
-I am glad to hear it, sweetie. Sweetie, could you...

You know what I mean? Compare it to

-Hey, sweetie I made you a cake. It was made from chocolate and cream - I hope you like it.
-Yes, it's delicious
-I am glad to hear it. Say, could you...

This IMO sounds MUCH more natural.
Anyway, back to reading, just wanted to point this out before I forgot about it.
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It is just her way of talking. You get used to it, dear.
 
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Zoran89

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segaegae said:
It is just her way of talking. You get used to it, dear.
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This reminds me of all those teenage artists, with zero understanding of human anatomy, handwaving any negative comment away with a "It's just my style" response.

-One of his eyes is bigger than the other.
-It's just my style.

-Human arms don't bend that way.
-It's just my style.

-The centre of gravity is off, he looks like he's about to fall over.
-It's just my style.

-Her tits look like balloons, there's no feeling of mass to them.
-It's just my style.

-You should study how to convey the sense of dynamics, she's supposed to be running, but she looks like she's posing instead.
-That's just my style.

Anyway - not planning on drawing that argument out any longer. I said my piece, what the dev does with this, it is up to him.
 
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segaegae

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Name356 said:
Another cliffhanger in Rae's story, that probably won't advance again in months :mad::mad::mad: I hate it. By the way, I don't know the exact nature of the relation ship between Rae and the new character (forgot her name), but to bring back old lesbian lovers of the Lis is never a good idea in any erotic game, as well as making the Lis prostitutes (for money or information, it doesn't matter) and/or total sluts with a body count of hundreds. Both are the fastest ways of ruining a character.
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Probably worse, like the last time rae's story being updated. After whole lot of setting up, rae suddenly decides everything is just fine.

But really... What were you expecting from a succubus spy? What do you think she was doing before?
 
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Zoran89 said:
This reminds me of all those teenage artists, with zero understanding of human anatomy, handwaving any negative comment away with a "It's just my style" response.

-One of his eyes is bigger than the other.
-It's just my style.

-Human arms don't bend that way.
-It's just my style.

-The centre of gravity is off, he looks like he's about to fall over.
-It's just my style.

-Her tits look like balloons, there's no feeling of mass to them.
-It's just my style.

-You should study how to convey the sense of dynamics, she's supposed to be running, but she looks like she's posing instead.
-That's just my style.

Anyway - not planning on drawing that argument out any longer. I said my piece, what the dev does with this, it is up to him.
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Keep in mind that Rae is essentially a spy and diplomat. She was probably trained from a young age to speak to courtiers in a specific manner. That kind of training is difficult to break in a casual setting.
 
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ZanithOne, also I don't know if your aware but it seem renpy has been updated so that may be something that interests you. For whatever reason I didn't have that looping issue the whole playthrough of 6.12 so I don't know what's going on with that.
 
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