So, umpteen pages of complaints about the Husband and LI's status in regards to MC, saying that the dev was an idiot for writing such a ridiculous plot.
Then, the dev listens, and does a minor rewrite of the plot to satisy the complaints.
Now, complaints about the rewrite, because of player's elephant memories......
Yep, par for the course....
Keep writing your story dev, these guys will just want you to change everything anyway
Bychipi
It’s because it wasn’t a rewrite; he added things that contradict what was established before.
Monica previously said she would keep being intimate with her husband despite being with the MC. She was very insistent about this, even after the MC said he didnt like her having sex with her husband. Now it turns out she was never intimate with him.
This doesnt make sense anymore either:
Did she propose that as a joke, to make fun of him? What sex life? She does seem to enjoy torturing the dude.
The dev really needs to fix these inconsistencies now that he’s decided to go this way and "change" the husband into a paraplegic. But if he does, then the MC would have no reason to not want her in the harem since she would fit MC's "rule" of women who only ever been with him. so that conversation and the start of this whole relationship doesnt make sense anymore with this change.
Did she lie about fucking her husband, knowing the MC’s rule and risking losing him? And if she wanted to intentionally lie about it, then why later clarify that she didn’t fuck him and that she’s only been with the MC? making her fit "MCs" rule, it doesnt make sense
So why was this a problem in the first place? She knows she can be a main woman in MC's harem, that was her excuse, does she only consider the mc as a dildo to get off to? She is pregnant with mcs child now, yet still doesnt want to be a family with him. bro...
He also needs to remove the dialogue about her “loving” her husband, because she really doesn’t. it’s clear he’s just someone convenient for her to have around.
It wouldn’t make sense for her to give her husband the power to decide whether she can be with the MC. The husband having the final say about this never made sense, and now it makes even less sense.
After saying this she fucks the MC anyway even though the husband said she couldnt till he found a gf for himself, and later fucks the MC at her husbands house, even though he said he didnt want her to do that, so why does she pretend like he has the final say on anything if she just ignores everything he says, and shows she doesnt care. Why does the game want to keep pretending she "loves" her husband. He might love her, but she clearly doesnt.
So in trying to fix her character, the dev introduced a huge hole in the plot, because now there’s no reason why she can’t be a “main” woman for the MC. Or do kisses count as enough to make her a slut unfit for the harem?
The mc doesnt seem to think so. Thats basically 1/3 of the game not making sense now, because she always fit the code and could instantly go back to be with MC. So what was the point of this all?
tbh the husband really needs to go quickly, he’s just a waste of time at this point. He has always been a waste of time, he has served no purpose other than damage Monica's character and make the MC look like a retard who loses the mother of his children to some disabled loser.
The whole thrill of fucking a married woman loses all its charm if the cuck is okay with it and she still "loves"/chooses him over the mc. Especially when the woman is someone the MC was in love with and even has a child with. he wanted to appeal to netori fans with this, since he keeps repeating how "hot" it is to fuck a married woman, but he failed.
They even say that they will raise MC's other child now that Monica seems to be pregnant again, seriously?
So they’re basically cucking each other. This woman, who’s only ever been with the MC and is about to have now two children with him, prefers to stay with a paraplegic rather than be with the MC. thats pathetic, he’s written as such a joke that she chooses a man with a dead penis and very limited resources to raise her children and be a family. And the mc is ok with that, and finds it "fun", because you know, she is married and fucking a married woman is like doing cocaine or something I dont know, certainly better than being a family with the woman you love and raising your children.
The only reason to play so far is Kira’s fat butt cheeks, but that’s not enough to make the game good, and the "fixes" have completely messed up the narrative, well, even more.
