VN Ren'Py A Life Worth Living [Ch. 5.5 Fix Public] [FiTB_Games]

[mc loving VI]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

Ahh, that is the real question. Do you believe her, or your lying eyes? I am actually glad you aren't quite sure, that means we got the writing of it all the way we wanted.

I thaugt that make the player dubt about the cheat was your objetive and you did it well. The only critic I have is that the MC and his wife didn't talk about what happened in the gang "forced" scene. The only reference about it is if you let the guy in the swingers club "rape" your wife (really hot scene by the way). I hope to see more scenes where the MC can choise about help his wife o leave it to her luck (and after see the wife's angry)

 

[simarimas]

Yeah I’ve been giving a lot of thought who is pulling the strings. I loved the cliffhanger ending. Their are a couple of options
1. Are we sure the old man that Mary was happening is really dead?
2. Are we sure the friend who died in battle is dead?
3. This is the one I’m putting the most stock in (even though there is a 99.9% chance I’m wrong) is the old man that the MC meets at the beginning is the father of the soldier that died and is getting back at the MC for leaving him. The problem with that theory is why wouldn’t he be going after Johnny (the other war buddy) too. This is just a great story and may be the best thought out storyline I’ve seen in any game. Just don’t pull a “Lost” ending on us

Thank you! If you guys knew what a mess our writing style was, you would be amazed that we have gotten this far with the story! hahahaha.

Good guesses on who is pulling the strings. We may have to steal one of these from you!

No, we won't do a 'Lost' ending. More of a MC wakes up from a dream, to his loving wife sitting next to him on the bed during their honeymoon.

 

[simarimas]

I thaugt that make the player dubt about the cheat was your objetive and you did it well. The only critic I have is that the MC and his wife didn't talk about what happened in the gang "forced" scene. The only reference about it is if you let the guy in the swingers club "rape" your wife (really hot scene by the way). I hope to see more scenes where the MC can choise about help his wife o leave it to her luck (and after see the wife's angry)

Yeah, I agree with you on the talking about the 'forced' scene. Unfortunately, that was our fuck up. We didn't properly add variables to that scene, and so it would have made a mess if we tried to have each scenario in that discussion. So decided to go with the big one for it. We are still learning!

 

[Adviar5050]

Thank you! If you guys knew what a mess our writing style was, you would be amazed that we have gotten this far with the story! hahahaha.

Good guesses on who is pulling the strings. We may have to steal one of these from you!

No, we won't do a 'Lost' ending. More of a MC wakes up from a dream, to his loving wife sitting next to him on the bed during their honeymoon.

Is that the Dallas end or the Newhart end? YOu are showing your age with those two references,

 

[simarimas]

Is that the Dallas end or the Newhart end? YOu are showing your age with those two references,

Hahahaha. I don't need those references to show my age, believe me! The fact that I am older than dirt is well known!

 

[robrize2169]

though the dead friend crossed my mind, i think it is more likely to be the family member of Mary's who had abused her and this is his revenge on her for getting away from him. can't figure out why Zoe would help him though, guess she is not as good a friend as she claims to be. after this, kind of hope the one pulling the strings finds her no longer useful and kills her too. is it my imagination or did Zoe's looks change from earlier versions of the game. like i said before, old man memory here but i seem to recall she looked different the first time i played this game. i think i started playing with the release of ch. 2. love to specualate on things and nice to see the dev active here and acknowledging our ideas. unlike a certain creator of other great games of this type..

 

[simarimas]

though the dead friend crossed my mind, i think it is more likely to be the family member of Mary's who had abused her and this is his revenge on her for getting away from him. can't figure out why Zoe would help him though, guess she is not as good a friend as she claims to be. after this, kind of hope the one pulling the strings finds her no longer useful and kills her too. is it my imagination or did Zoe's looks change from earlier versions of the game. like i said before, old man memory here but i seem to recall she looked different the first time i played this game. i think i started playing with the release of ch. 2. love to specualate on things and nice to see the dev active here and acknowledging our ideas. unlike a certain creator of other great games of this type..

You are not wrong about Zoe. She did have a much different look in the prologue when they first met. She got a little bit older, and got a boob job, and filled out more. But since she showed up at the house, she has been the same model.

We love hearing the ideas! Can't tell you gratifying it is to actually see people discussing the game that we made, and guessing at what is going on. I know I have said this before, but it is really humbling when people enjoy and praise our work.

 

[WuzzyFuzzy]

I was actually quite proud of the way we handled the first anal, by having the guy ease her into it.

Yep, I wasn't picking on how you did things. As a matter of fact, you guys handled it way better than just about everyone else. I just used his post as a segue into a part academic, part comedic post. Still, as I asked later, I am curious just how much of an influence these games have on user's perception of anatomy, physiology, etc.

 

[simarimas]

Yep, I wasn't picking on how you did things. As a matter of fact, you guys handled it way better than just about everyone else. I just used his post as a segue into a part academic, part comedic post. Still, as I asked later, I am curious just how much of an influence these games have on user's perception of anatomy, physiology, etc.

Oh I understand. I got the comedy in your post.

Yep, if people haven't performed the acts in real life, they don't really understand what happens during them. And I think most of them get their ideas from these type games, or watching Pornhub, which isn't a good way to base your experience on.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

I like that you can do swinging without NTR
My mc will never cheat on Mary.
And if Mary wants to sleep with other people
I won't mind if she is honest with me

I value a woman's honesty a lot.

P.S. I haven't played the new update yet, but I will eventually.

Edit - I also don't really know if Mary has cheated or not
I really hope not
Because I have always been loyal

Simp Alert

 

[Grumpy Old Aussie]

ok so just finished chapter 4 after replaying it from the beginning of chapter 3 since i seem to have deleted my save from end of chapter 3. only thing i can think of but its been a long time and i had forgotten if i did that or not..old man memory i guess. anyway, i have 2 different routes, cheating route and faithful/swinging route and i saw a few different scenes on the faithful route which made me enjoy it more.

For some reason I only have the cheating husband HW path. My faithful husband HW and the good wife paths are gone. No idea how I managed to do that so I share your frustration.

 

[bandyta80]

I thaugt that make the player dubt about the cheat was your objetive and you did it well. The only critic I have is that the MC and his wife didn't talk about what happened in the gang "forced" scene. The only reference about it is if you let the guy in the swingers club "rape" your wife (really hot scene by the way). I hope to see more scenes where the MC can choise about help his wife o leave it to her luck (and after see the wife's angry)

when is this rape scene?

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

Will be in next Chapter actually. It didn't fit well in this one, and makes more sense for next Chapter, so we postponed using it yet.

Hope it’s Ben smashing her or Johnny

 

[bandyta80]

the new chapter definitely revolves around swingers, mary's arrest is just a curiosity at the end of the previous chapter lasted less than the fight between andrew golota vs lennox lewis haha

 

[simarimas]

when is this rape scene?

End of Chapter 3 blackmail path, during the poker scene. If you allow it to go all the way to the end.

 

[simarimas]

the new chapter definitely revolves around swingers, mary's arrest is just a curiosity at the end of the previous chapter lasted less than the fight between andrew golota vs lennox lewis haha

Not a lot happens with the jail scene, true. Though we did try to get out a little information as to what is going on there. It will become more involved in the next chapter as to what is happening there. We also used it for Mary to kind of throw caution to the wind, and live more in the moment, and trying not to worry about what comes in the future as much.

 

[bandyta80]

End of Chapter 3 blackmail path, during the poker scene. If you allow it to go all the way to the end.

but it wasn't at a swinger club and during the gangbang it wasn't rape it was blackmail extortion

I think the graphics and animations are getting better and better

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

All good. It doesn't worry me if they do or don't do anal, it was just to me it seem to be a bit off the way it was handled. Not a big deal. Keep up the good work.

I thought it made sense for Mary to try anal with a smaller guy first, her hubby is much bigger than that Gabriel guy and I mean he already had the lube with him, & you wouldn’t want that to go to waste so….

 

[GoldenEyeDrake]

This was very good update. Packed with a lot of action and story progression for different sub-plots. I personally enjoy the story progression of Charlotte the most. Very impressed. However, I don't understand when Ruby figures out we have cheated on her with Lexi ( unknowingly Johnny's girlfriend), we didn't mention how we found the diary of her cheating on us with the cab driver without our consent either. Especially, since the MC has mentioned numerous times to other characters in the story that Ruby has sex with our consent. It seems like a missed opportunity to just clear the air entirely, instead of simply making Fred the villain. Now, it seems Ruby is going to justify cheating on the MC whenever she can while getting away scot-free from her prior infidelity.

 

[simarimas]

but it wasn't at a swinger club and during the gangbang it wasn't rape it was blackmail extortion

I think the graphics and animations are getting better and better

Thanks! We are learning as we go here. I have definitely been able to tell my renders are getting better, maybe one day I will actually consider them decent! As far as animations, we brought on a friend to help with those. We have been much happier with them since.