Version Reviewed:
v0.3.0.
A very nice game, it's not Ren'Py but the Developer has done a great job making it act very similar to Ren'Py.
The story is engaging and the renders are top notch, especially the lighting. There is a mini game that I am pretty sure the Dev was inspired by the Mass Effect series which was a nice little touch. I am curious to see where the story goes. The story is certainly unique and original especially compared to a lot of other games.
I'm giving this 4/5 out of 5 stars but it's not a 5 star game IMO due to the quality of the writing, mainly 2 things:
1) The MC is a giant horndog, and is constantly ogling every woman. It's hard to take him seriously when every few dialogue lines we see his internalized thoughts about how sexy someone's ass is or how he wants to fuck them. I get that it's a porn game, but the story presents itself as an intriguing sand and grounded sci-fi plot. But then we have all these side comments by the MC that are honestly kinda juvenile and it cheapens it a bit. It happens way too frequently and is distracting from the story. Sure, build sexual tension and let the sex scenes happen, but I think it can be done better and with less juvenile writing.
2) Speaking of internalized dialogue, there is a lot of it. Most of it is the MC wondering to himself what to do next but I feel a lot of these thoughts could be slightly shortened or shown through actions rather than written out in such verbose detail. It's nice seeing his thought process but some of his thoughts are quite repetitive and can be inferred by the reader rather than written out.
Hopefully this feedback helps you and I will definitely be looking forward to the next version.