VN Ren'Py A Man for All [Ep.14] [Venus Waltz]

[Naxos]

Thanks for checking it out. I don't usually get a lot of feedback on all of the other male characters, so it's nice to know what somebody thinks when someone mentions them.

I must admit I'm not sure what to make of them. Normally I'd be very worried about them, but I'm going to 90% trust you on that they won't be a real threat (i.e. nothing will come of it and no bad tags, especially that 3 letter one)

Tobias, I had a feeling was interested in the Kate from the first meeting with him. She seems totally oblivious to it. Even the MC hasn't seemed to pick up on even with Tobias all but saying I'm right in front of you and I'm a threat.

Luke is just a joke and no threat when it comes to Vanessa or any of the girls.

I can't remember which one Blake is or what the 3rd's name is so.

The businessman one obviously has something for Marissa despite him saying the opposite and I think he's playing the long game there.

The business intern with Riley, I don't see him as threat with her, unless he's trying to impress her with his aggressiveness and arrogance thinking some kind of misguided "alpha" type behaviour is going to impress her, but she's clearly not interested.

The only one that remotely worries me as a threat for the girls is Tobias, because the MC doesn't seem to see him coming and Kate might be more open to him because of the age and it would be less inappropriate for her to start a relationship with him than a student.

 

[longjohngold]

It better be a huge character point somehow, otherwise the fact that she's kept her sunglasses on for 5 chapters (that are long a quite a lot of time) is god damn ridiculous... I thought maybe when the dance-off was won that might be our reward, but it's just silly at this point.

 

[yarik2001]

Nice Game. When can be next update?

 

[underoath27]

I must admit I'm not sure what to make of them. Normally I'd be very worried about them, but I'm going to 90% trust you on that they won't be a real threat (i.e. nothing will come of it and no bad tags, especially that 3 letter one)

Tobias, I had a feeling was interested in the Kate from the first meeting with him. She seems totally oblivious to it. Even the MC hasn't seemed to pick up on even with Tobias all but saying I'm right in front of you and I'm a threat.

Luke is just a joke and no threat when it comes to Vanessa or any of the girls.

I can't remember which one Blake is or what the 3rd's name is so.

The businessman one obviously has something for Marissa despite him saying the opposite and I think he's playing the long game there.

The business intern with Riley, I don't see him as threat with her, unless he's trying to impress her with his aggressiveness and arrogance thinking some kind of misguided "alpha" type behaviour is going to impress her, but she's clearly not interested.

The only one that remotely worries me as a threat for the girls is Tobias, because the MC doesn't seem to see him coming and Kate might be more open to him because of the age and it would be less inappropriate for her to start a relationship with him than a student.

Blake is the businessman who is interested in Marissa, the one who contracted her to his business meetings.

 

[Alfred the Fallen]

Harlow has been my favourite for most of the game, but Erika has taken that title from her with the latest update. I really enjoyed hearing her talk about her thoughts on the city and her dreams of leaving one day. It's been extremely fun helping her earn money in the fight club, but I'm afraid that our luck is about to run out. Things are just going too well, and I can't shake this feeling of dread that something will set us back a long ways. Maybe it's just unfounded pessimism on my part, but I'm expecting the rug to get pulled out from under Erika just as she's feeling like her dream is within reach.

 

[InfamousGuy]

I would argue that the only real lacking aspect of this game are the lewd scenes. The camera angles are just really weird for them. Like they always get so up close and dont capture enough of the people in the scene. I would say the dev needs to zoom out a bit. Everything else from characters to story are great though.

 

[d_pedestrian]

I would argue that the only real lacking aspect of this game are the lewd scenes. The camera angles are just really weird for them. Like they always get so up close and dont capture enough of the people in the scene. I would say the dev needs to zoom out a bit. Everything else from characters to story are great though.

I am a fan of POV porns so i like what dev is doing but more choices don't hurt.

 

[TheLonelyGhost]

I would probably avoid drinking that glass of champagne...

 

[Spatenklopper]

Would you mind sharing who your favorite girls are?

Riley.
I need my Redhead in every game!

And a request for a future update.
Please add an option to make the text box transparency adjustable.
You don't stick a black bar on the tv while watching porn.

 

[BartPS]

Would you mind sharing who your favorite girls are? Also, can you be more specific about what you mean by progress? Do you mean in terms of a romantic relationship or doing something physical with them?

If you want, I can elaborate more on my philosophy on each relationship and how they're developing. I'm treating every LI different from one another and maybe my perspective will make some sense. Or maybe I could change things around to fix the pace.

Very much Harlow for me - I have a thing about hot nerds. That she's also at least bi-curious is a plus; my ideal ending would be a poly-amorous relationship with Harlow and Marisa.

For much the same reason Vanessa is by far the least appealing - I've never found fashion models particularly sexy, and Vanessa is a wonderfully extreme archetype, representing just how shallow and vacuous her world is. The other women are much more worthy as people, and would make great friends, mentors, business partners, even fuck-buddies, but nothing more.

However, I must confess I play to get sex with all of the females just because I'm a perv! If I were playing strictly to my own interests, I'd be keeping every other relationship friendly, professional etc. (depending on its function), pursuing Harlow with passion while encouraging her own perviness and fascination with Marisa.

 

[Spatenklopper]

I'm currently working on a German translation for the game and I think I ran into a content-related error.
In EP 1, while talking to Kate in her office, the mc say's :" As you know, I've been taking all of my classes offline. I figured it would be a perfect opportunity for...."

Shouldn't that actually be online?

 

[VenusWaltz]

I've made all of the fixes for the next update. Thanks for pointing things out, everybody.

I'm working on the next episode but there's no time table on anything because I never know how long something will take until it's done. Some scenes are longer than others. It's going to be awhile.

I'm always taking everybody's feedback into consideration, so if you have anything to say, feel free.

 

[Spatenklopper]

Short question of understanding what is meant by Slims. (Those assholes in Viridian and even the Slims notice shit like that.)
Not that familiar with English idioms or expressions.

 

[VenusWaltz]

"The Slims" is another name for Uptown, where Vanessa's from. It's first mentioned when the MC first goes to Uptown in Episode 2.

 

[Spatenklopper]

"The Slims" is another name for Uptown

So comparable to snobs or rich kid's.
It helps me with the translation.

It's first mentioned when the MC first goes to Uptown in Episode 2.

And no, it's first mentioned when you meet Harlow after the lab.

Thank you for taking the time to answer me here, I appreciate that!

 

[Spatenklopper]

Since i can't write you a message i have to do it here.
In episode 1 in the scene with vanessa (e01_008.rpy) is a mistake in content.

"Please don't be so casual. I expect you to treat this manner matter with the utmost sincerity."

 

[VenusWaltz]

Thanks. You can post mistakes in the Discord if that's easier for you.

 

[Spatenklopper]

I will do that. See you at Discord.

 

[NewTricks]

Just finished the game's latest update and was surprised to see that there was a hint that the MC would soon have to contend with NTR rivals. This would make me very happy but not everybody feels the same way, naturally. Entire board civil wars have been fought over it. However, if the NTR is unconsummated in reality they are just antagonists or romantic foils. You know, only there to make the MC look better, move the plot along, and give him challenges to overcome. This makes me think about whether there is any dramatic tension if losing the girls to these guys isn't possible. I imagine a balance can be struck and there is a way to thread the needle in such a way to make no one upset. Maybe by playing around with some of the NTR tropes (business trips, bribery, harassment, corruption, blackmail, etc) but having the rivals be unable to get out of their own way or have the love interests be capable of overcoming their feeble attempts. One of the darker sides of the NTR fetish is having the heroines be too incompetent, lustful, or powerless to resist. It would be thematically interesting to see that subverted. This might be too much to ask from a porn game, and if it is tried there will probably be an outcry from zealots on either or both sides of the debate, but who dares wins in the end. It is better than playing all those other harem games where every other guy in the world seems to be eunuch or the ones where they don't seem the exist at all.

 

[M!]

Somehow I've missed this one, maybe the harem tag kept me away earlier since most of harems are bloody stupid. This was however very pleasant experience. I liked all the girls, well, maybe Vanessa not so much, but friend-zoned all but Harlow and Riley.

I actually looked SubscribeStar for a small support but it shows only the welcome page for me? Says that there is 108 creator posts but no Subscribe button?