VN Ren'Py A mod for ProjectSAGE

[Gunsothegreat]

They already posted examples of their work in the project sage thread, and the images speak for themselves.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

Sweating under the hot lights.....

Spoiler: Fashion show Bikini

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[Gunsothegreat]

Matt's phone image...

Spoiler: Bikini problems

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[Gunsothegreat]

Double spoiler...If you don't want to see how far the SUPER-SLUT mode goes in the first fashion show goes, don't look at the following two images. By the way the phone images are just tiny images on the phone in-game, these are way bigger

Spoiler: The Super Slut Phone images

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[grumpyoldcat]

I like where this is going and encourage your efforts.

 

[lemaro]

Man I tried not to reveal but i couldn't stop myself haha

So excited for the release.

Also fk those who come here to shitpost, like honestly if you aren't pleased with the work here go somewhere else lmao

 

[atlas114]

i really like the direction this is going.

digging for spoilers, does the super slut mode activate if the audience encourages her or eggs her on? That falls in line with what I remember Amy liking; that she is getting all this attention and is aiming to please (though i can’t remember if some alcohol is involved which is lowering her inhibition)

 

[Gunsothegreat]

i really like the direction this is going.

digging for spoilers, does the super slut mode activate if the audience encourages her or eggs her on? That falls in line with what I remember Amy liking; that she is getting all this attention and is aiming to please (though i can’t remember if some alcohol is involved which is lowering her inhibition)

At the moment all options are available, I'm not putting in requirements until I finish the first three days with the extra content I have planned, so that I can balance the requirements properly.

Spoiler: Just to protect those who don't want to know

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[chjjhc1]

While I may prefer paperwork's style, I stand behind your work.
By the way, how much work has been done on this version, is it finished?

 

[hans2014frans]

Unfortunatly I don't understand what you're talking about. Aside from Amy most characters in the game have the same blank facial expression, horribly outdated low resolution models. The worst part of the game is the graphics, it is unfortunate that paperwork used HS 1 to make the images, but that's probably just because he didn't have access to anything better. The main character is supposed to be a hot girl, and while that is very subjective, a borderline anorexic is not attractive to most people I think. Besides if I'm going to spend hours rendering images of the main char I prefer to make the main character look attractive to me, if your taste in women differs a lot that is unfortunate. I don't know if this was meant as an insult, if you're trolling, but I'm giving you the benefit of the dought. While I happy to listen to suggestions on how I might improve my work, this kind of wage criticism is not helpful.

Are you annoyed by the excessive amount of free porn or do you want more? If you don't have a better suggestion than "do better" then you might just want to keep your opinion to yourself. If you don't like what I'm doing, find something else you like.

There were people who warned me that this could happen, and I should just go make my own game and naively I thought the people who weren't interested in what I was doing would just go find something else to look at.

I know I should just have ignored this message, but when you've spent countless hours working on something and then people show up just to shit all over it it is quite a bit annoying. Seriously dude, there are a few people who like what I'm doing, and would like to see more, however I don't feel like working when I'm pissed off so you are not helping. Kindy just find something else to look at if you don't like my work.

I don't know why my comment is taken as an insult, because I just lack the charisma of the MC.
I also don't understand why such a bucket of dirt is poured out over me.
Obviously criticism isn't welcome, just praise ... that means everything what you does is ok ... and that what others think is wrong.
That's a pretty simple take on life, but it seems difficult to read two sentences correctly when you don't want to.
...and by the way, the original Amy character was obviously quite popular, as evidenced by the amount of fans for the game

 

[LongoMcFap]

Unfortunatly I don't understand what you're talking about. Aside from Amy most characters in the game have the same blank facial expression, horribly outdated low resolution models. The worst part of the game is the graphics, it is unfortunate that paperwork used HS 1 to make the images, but that's probably just because he didn't have access to anything better. The main character is supposed to be a hot girl, and while that is very subjective, a borderline anorexic is not attractive to most people I think. Besides if I'm going to spend hours rendering images of the main char I prefer to make the main character look attractive to me, if your taste in women differs a lot that is unfortunate. I don't know if this was meant as an insult, if you're trolling, but I'm giving you the benefit of the dought. While I happy to listen to suggestions on how I might improve my work, this kind of wage criticism is not helpful.

I recommend the use of the Ignore button. You often cannot avoid annoying people or get rid off them in real life, but on the internet you can make your life a bit more comfortable

Also, this would help me to avoid reading an annoying discussion between you, hans and others in this thread about a topic no one cares in this thread. It's about your mod of the original game, using a Daz model (which I find super hot, although I really love the HS model of Amy) and people who want to see her.

 

[atlas114]

Matt's phone image...

Spoiler: Bikini problems

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these are really hot. the story almost writes itself with these. Could see Matt getting caught looking at these and having to explain himself (if her horniness or corruption is high enough she’ll let it go or “help him out”) or Matt flattering her with praise and getting her comfortable enough to show more skin around the house. lots of possibilities here

 

[lemaro]

these are really hot. the story almost writes itself with these. Could see Matt getting caught looking at these and having to explain himself (if her horniness or corruption is high enough she’ll let it go or “help him out”) or Matt flattering her with praise and getting her comfortable enough to show more skin around the house. lots of possibilities here

Yeah exactly. I replayed the old game and I realised how impactful the choices are to how well teases are written (even the subtle "leave the door open" can be so suggestive).

Like with the dropped bikini I can imagine the choices being Let if go vs Drop it further or something similar.

Anyway just exciting stuff. Thanks again Gunsothegreat

 

[atlas114]

i honestly am looking forward to seeing the uncle stephen story progress, seeing how he he rediscovering his libido living with Amy (the increasing jealousy from the Aunt) love the idea on movie nights with Uncle where she gets more comfortable.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

I don't know why my comment is taken as an insult, because I just lack the charisma of the MC.
I also don't understand why such a bucket of dirt is poured out over me.
Obviously criticism isn't welcome, just praise ... that means everything what you does is ok ... and that what others think is wrong.
That's a pretty simple take on life, but it seems difficult to read two sentences correctly when you don't want to.
...and by the way, the original Amy character was obviously quite popular, as evidenced by the amount of fans for the game

You start out by saying that the renders are good, better than paperwork, thank you, but then you go on talking about how the characters are impersonal and artificial. I´m assuming you are still talking about the look of the characters, something I have a hard time understanding, I´m looking at every image paperwork made before I render a new image, looking at characters expressions, poses, clothing. I´m not trying to recreate them I´m using them as guidelines. I absolutely hate HS models, they are ugly, low resolution, badly rigged, in short it´s hard to do worse than use HS. This is not paperworks fault, these are the tools he had and he did the best he could with them.

I´m pretty sure I made it clear from the start that my main goal was to replace the graphics, and possibly add in a few scenes. From talking to some of the fans on this thread other ideas have come up, some of those might make in into this mod/rewrite or whatever you want to call it. It´s pretty obvious if people are hooked on the old HS model and want it remade perfectly in daz, this is not a mod for them. I could show you a number of very ugly images from the game to make my point. Now I´m assuming most of the people who played paperworks game did so with a similar attitude as me, He was doing his best and I liked what he was doing so I was willing to overlook the flaws (There are a lot of flaws, and I´m not talking about kink preference, or other thing that are almost 100% a matter of taste).

I have already said, I am not an experienced writer, and my writing may very well suck. I´m not particularly interested in writing and wont be wasting much time on it. If any one wants to fix the writing, that is easy to do. just open up the scripts in a text editor and change whatever you like. I´m not doing this to entertain others, Im doing this for my own enjoyment and sharing it with the people who want to try it. Thats it! and I´m mainly interested in the graphics because I know I can improve that.

If people have suggestions, that don´t involve rerendering a large portion of what I´ve done so far, I´m open to them. People crying about, I liked this better in paperworks version, or you ruined this or that. I don't care! I´m just tired of people complaining this is not the way paperwork would have done it, or paperwork would have done this better. I am not paperwork, I´m a fan of his game but I don´t view it as holy scripture, I´m going to change things, and if what I do isn´t to your liking, just go find something else to jerk off to.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

I leave the scripts unpacked, if anyone wants to make changes to the way the characters interact, go for it. Do you want Amy to call the uncle Big Daddy? change it, it just requires a text editor and a bit of time.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

While I may prefer paperwork's style, I stand behind your work.
By the way, how much work has been done on this version, is it finished?

It´s not finished, I´m hoping it will be done around next weekend. Of the major events, I think I have everything except the last part of the cafe scene on day three, and video game night 2, and I have to redo part of the beach stuff probably, the environment I used isn´t suitable. Oh, and converting all the images to jpg´s and changing the scripts is only partly done, and probably has a lot of errors as I´m jumping back and forth to the scrips as I render.

I´m keeping my fingers crossed for next weekend release.

 

[Gunsothegreat]

I don't know why my comment is taken as an insult, because I just lack the charisma of the MC.

I´m sorry if I´m being harsh with you, this is not a personal thing, you´re probably a nice guy and didn´t want to start anything. But many people assume that I´m going to try to do everything like paperwork would have done it. If that was the case I would just add some ugly HS scenes to the game to expand the story. It´s annoying to have to repeat this over and over.

And if you are going to complain, it would be helpful if you could point out what I´m doing wrong or how I could do it better. Because when you say the main char lacks charisma I can´t help asking myself, how can that be? the script is still mostly paperworks script, did I cut out something you feel was critical for the character? Are you talking about the look of the character? what do you mean lacks charisma? This is a bit annoying, it wage and leaves me guessing what you´re actually talking about.

 

[atlas114]

more of Matt’s phone pictures! i think this is a really good addition and gives us another view of the action. perhaps there are chances to see “selfies” as well taken by Chris or Matt?

 

[Gunsothegreat]

more of Matt’s phone pictures! i think this is a really good addition and gives us another view of the action. perhaps there are chances to see “selfies” as well taken by Chris or Matt?

I like that idea, I might do some phone renders of the clothing store scenes too, and maybe some selfies of Amy and the guy´s. Teasers for this thread